ARIYA FF - KOSHISH - EK AASHA PART 8 PG 81

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: greensakthi
it was very thrilling dr to see riya in the hospital. and thank god see is in Arjun's hands again.
right! wat next they 've to try to recover her memory and waiting to know how!

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: ArShiDelena
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GOLDIEE ABROL

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PART 3 A

Arjun took riya's bag & started his drive to Mumbai all his way he was thinking only one thing & that was how his team mates will react to see riya in such state.

He knew very well that entire team loves riya a lot & they will be totally shattered by seeing her condition.

He was in a fix what to say to the entire ETF team his thoughts & trance was broken by Riyas voice who said "Ajju mujhe mere naye friends se bhi milna hai hum kab paunchenge?"

Arjun smiled at her & said "hum bahut jaldi paunchenge aur tum aaram se baitho"

riya smiled & after driving for around 20 minutes arjun phone buzzed he checked it was sameers call he picked up the call & answered "Haan rathod bolo kya baat hai ?"

He asked "Rawte tum wahah se nikal chuke ho ya nahin?"

Arjun said "haan main nikal chukka hoon par aaj main nahin aa paaunga thoda kaam hai"

Rathod said "theek hai tum rest le lo waise bhi 11:30 baj gaya hai ghar jaa k ek call kar dena mujhe"

Arjun said "Theek hai main rakhta hoon" with that he disconnected the call & resumed his driving.

After a while riya said "Ajju mujhe bhook lagi hai" its then arjun realized that they had nothing since morning & riya must be really hungry.

He stopped at the small food court nearby & brought some sandwiches for riya & gave her to eat.

She ate like as she was hungry from years n more over like an innocent kid who just got his favorite dish after a long time.

Arjun watched riya & her innocence after a wahile he resumed his driving back.

They reached Mumbai next 1 hour & Arjun parked the car beside his house n went inside with riya & luggage.

As per daily routine Mr jayanti lal was in his balcony giving water to the plants.

He saw Arjun entering with a girl & got surprised he called his wife sumitra & said "Sumitra zara idhar aao arjun aaya hai wo bhi kisi ladki ko lekar"

Sumitra came running wiping her hands as she was busy in her kitchen & replied "Aap kya keh rahe hai? Arjun kisi ladki ko leke aaya hai kahah?"

jayanti lal pointed to riya standing along with arjun & arjun opening the lock of his front door.

Jayanti lala said "tumne is ladki ko kabhi dekha hai arjun ke saath ? ya kisi ka zikra suna ho?"

sumitra said "nahin too Arjun to sirf apne office waalo ka zikra karta hai par ye ladki uske office ki to nahin hai kyuki uski team ki dono ladkiyo ko to main jaanti hoon ek to aisha sameer ki biwi aur Liza wo doctor haan ek teesri Riya ke baare main bataya tha par wo to lapata hai pichle 8 mahino se "

[Note: Mrs & mr Joshi don't know riya as when arjun started to support them after their children riya had alreadyleft for the mission]

Jayanti lal said "Accha tum jaa ke khane ka pooch lo shayad arjun ko koi madat chahiye to"

Sumitra said" theek hai main jaake baat karti hoon" she moved to Arjuns apartment & went inside & said "Arjun aa gaya badi deer laga di?"

He said "Haan kaki wo gaadi kharab ho gayi gayi thi isliye"

sumitra saw riya & arjun said "Riya ye sumitra kaki hai hamare padoos main rehti hai"

riya smiled & touched her feet & said in a kiddish voice "pranaam kaki"

sumitra said "jiti raho beta"

Arjun said "Riya tumhara saaman room main rakh diya hai jao change kar loo phir khana khate hai"

Riya smiled &went back.

Sumitra was bit shocked at riyas behavior she asked "Arjun ye wahi riya hai tumhare office waalilo laapata thi?"

Arjun nodded n said "haan kaki ye wahi hai bahut acchi ladki hai"

Sumitra said "Par ye tujhe kahah mili? Aur ye yaha kya kar rahi hai aur ise hua kya hai?"

Arjun took a deep sigh & told her all the story that had happened in the village & also how he found riya in mental hospital & also regarding her accident & her condition.

Sumitra was shocked beyond limits n said "hey ambe maa is bachhi ke saath itni si umar main kya kya ho gaya aur tune iske ghar pe khabar ki hai kya? Pata nahin kya haal ho raha hoga iske maa baap ka ?"

Arjun said "kaki iska koi nahin hai iske papa ki maut jab ye 12 saal kithi tab ho gayi thi maa bahut acchi thi iski main mila tha unse par riya ke lapata hone ke baad unki umeed toot gayi wo Kolkata waapis chali gayi thi aur mujhe pata chala hai ki 6 mahine pehle road accident main unki bhi maut ho gayi baaki main riya ke parivar waalo ke baare main nahin jaanta hoon main pata karne ki koshish karronga apne hissab se par riya ki file dekhi hai maine koi saga bhai ya behen nahin hai wo ek lauti beti thi apne parents ki"

Sumitra had tears in her eyes n said "taqdeer bhi kya kya khel khelti hai par ab tum kya karroge iski aisi haalat hai aur---"

cutting her short Arjun said "kaki app parseshaan mat hoo riya mere saath yahi rahegi main check karvata hoon ki uska koi rishtedaar yaa jaankaar hai to main use wahah bhej doonga par mujhe bharosa nahin hai yadi koi is cheez ka fayda uthaye too aur aisi haalat main to saaya bhi saath chod deta hai riya ko main kisi ke bharose nahin chodounga riya meri zimmedaari hai abse aur dr jain se maine kahah tha ki main uska khayaal rakhoonga aur kaki iski haalat ka zimmedaar bhi main hi hoon sikander ka pata chalte hi isne mujhe call kiya tha aur is vajah se wahah loog alert ho gaye aur ye accident""

& his words trailed off after that after a pause he added "kaki sikander ko to maine khatam kar diya par riya ki is haalat ka zimmedaar main hoon aur jab tak ye theek nahin ho jaati main ise kisi ke hawaale nahi karronga"

Sumitra said "Arjun dekh beta jo tum keh rahe ho wo theek hai par riya ka aise yaha rehna kya theek hoga?

Arjun said "Kaki main jaanta hoon ki aap kya sooch rahi hai par mujhe logo ki parwah nahin hai riya ne mere sabse bade mission main mera saath diya apni aisi haalat kar lee mujhe farak nahin padta koi kya kehta hai kya karta par main riya pe koi aanch aane nahin doonga"

Sumitra said "theek hai beta main riya ki dekhbhaal karrongi tum to duty jaaoge na to riya ko mere yahah chood dena "

Arjun samiled n said "Thanks Kaki aapne meri bahut badi problem solve kar di"

sumitra said "accha ab chalo haath mooh dhoo loo khana tayyiyaar hai main bas abhi lagati hoon"

After a while sumitra came with two plates of food Arjun & riya they had their lunch quietly & after that arjun gave riya her medicines riya was tired a bit from a long journey so she fell asleep after a while.

Arjun covered her with bedsheet n came out in his main hall & saw sumitra there sumitra said "waise bahut pyari bachhi hai riya aur bahadur bhi bhagwaan kare wo jaldi theek ho jaaye"

Arjun said "Kaki par mujhe darr lag raha hai shree, chotu, rathore pata nahin riya ko aise dekh ke kaise react karenge aapko pata nahin riya se bahut pyar karte hai teeno maine pichle 8 mahine main riya ke liye chup chup ke rote hue dekha hai unhe pata nahin-"

sumitra said "sab theek ho jaayega arjun tum pareshaan mat hoo beta" with that she marched out of the house.

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Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

PART 3 B

Arjun was thinking about this sudden turn he really felt helpless that he could not save riya on time he wished that riya should come back to senses as soon as possible as he knew how each n every member of ETF wanted to see riya back .

ARJUN'S POV :

Riya was first female in ETF & so was the most pampered one by his friends shree & chotu by his boss Rathod who was her mentor & like elder Brother & him too he could never name his relation with Riya but he always respected her for her strong mental strength & admired her for her caring nature for every one though he use to get irritated when she use to get into his personal life but later he realized that she only wanted him to be happy.

He can think of the pain ETF will face seeing riyas condition.

He himself could not compose himself after seeing riya like this than what will happen to others who loved her dearly it will add more misery to the situation they are in now. Arjun made a firm decision that he will not tell any thing about riya to anyone in the team till she will be fine & gain her senses back.

POV END'S :

Arjun chain of thoughts broke by riyas voice who just got up from the nap & was searching for him rubbing her eyes she said "Ajju kahah hoo?"

arjun turned & saw riya searching for him he went to her & said "Haan riya main yahi hoon bolo?"

Riya said "Ajju tum bahut kharaab hoo tumne kaha tha kitum mujhe friend's se milwaaoge aur mere saath kheloge bhi par tumne apna promise poora nahin kiya"

Arjun said "accha tum ready ho jaao phir hum ghoomne challenge park main jaao "

Riya said with a smile "Ok Main aati hoon" with that she went inside to get ready.

After few minutres riya came with messed hairs & said to arjun "mere baal ajju tum mere friend ho na meri help karo please"

Arjun took her to dressing table & comed her haris properly & gently keeping in mind not to hurt her.

She was extremely happy n said "Thankyou ajju pata hai doctor bhaiya ney kaha sab maere baal kaise banate the? Bahut dukta tha par tumne to bahut acche se kiya mujhse kabhi mere baal nahin bante"

she said pouting with a grumpy face Arjun smiled at her antics & said "koi baat nahin ab tum try karo par comb ko seedha rakh ke baal theek se ban jaayege"

She looked at him with questioning eyes n said "Sacchi ban jaayenge?"

Arjun nodded n she picked up the comb firm n straight in her hand n started to comb her hairs n she too did it properly. In a happy tone she smiled n said "Thnakyou ajju tum bahut acche ho" n hugged him Arjun had taken a back at this sudden hug n said composing himself "Accha ghumne chalna hai na?"

Riya nodded & Arjun took her to a small park near by .

she was really happy playing with all the kids in the park & having a fun time she pulled arjun along with him to play & he too played with kids & riya & after a long time he enjoyed himself too.

Here sumitra & jayatilal too saw arjun & riya playing with the kids & they were also happy to see arjun enjoying & smiling after a long time.

After a while Arjun & riya were back home riya was inside & arjun was in the main hall. After a while some old people of cloney entered who saw Arjun & Riya playing with kids Arjun wished them & said "Ji kahiye kya baat hai?"

they said "beta hame riya ke baare main sumitra ben se pata chala hame dukh hai uski haalat pe par uska aise yaha rehna wo bhi tumhare saath use tumhe ilaaj ke liye kisi mental hospital""

before he could complete Arjun yelled back on him saying "App yaha ke buzurg hai is liye main kuch nahin keh raha hoon aur rahi riya ki baat riya meri zimmedari hai uske rehne se aap main se kisi ko problem nahi hogi aap logo ne ek baar bhi us masoom ki haalat pe gaur nahin kiya? Yadi aisa hi kuch aapke pariwaar ya apno ke saath hota too aap kya yahi karte use support karne ki bajaye aap loog use yaha se bahar karne ki baat kar rahe hai ?"

hearing loud voices from arjuns house sumitra & jayantilal enter his house & in no time guessed that it was about riya jayanti lal in stern voice said "App loog jaayiye riya yahi rahegi aur hamari nigrani main rahegi"

All of them went out & Arjun fuming in anger said "kaki inlogo ki himmat dekhi aapne? Ye apne aap ko bada kehte hai kitni choti soch hai inki"

Sumitra said "Maine kahah thana Arjun ye sab aasan nahin hai"

Arjun calmed himself down & said "Haan kaki par ab atleast riya ke theek hone tak riya yahan se nahin jaayegi" with that he went inside to riya.

Next day Arjun was ready to go to his office n sumitra came to take riya along with her to her house .

Arjun smiled & called riya outside she came & Arjun said "Riya main office jaa raha hoon tum kaki ke paas hi rukna main shyaam ko waapis aa jaaunga aur kaki ko tang nahin karna "

she nodded like an obedient kid & asked "Ajju tum office main kya karte hoo?"

Arjun smiled & said "Main criminals ko pakadta hoon"

Riya said "Are waah yaani tum unke saath dishoom dishoom bhi karte hoo?"

Arjun said "haan kabhi kabhi wo bhi karta hoon"

Riya said "phir to tum bahut brave hoo tumhe pata hai doctor bhahiyaa kehte hai ki jo loog sachayi ke liye ladte hai wo bahut brave hote hai"

Arjun said "accha ab tum kaki ke saath jao shayam ko milte hai" He bid bye to riya & sumitra & went to office & riya went with sumitra to her place.

Arjun reached office & started his day as there was no case so they all were busy with some usual paper work.

Sameer was watching Arjun closely & he seemed to be a bit restless & in deep thoughts he had too make him come out of his trance by calling him loudly at times which seemed quite unusual to him but he kept all thoughts aside & wanted to apeak to him in private about this his thoughts were broken by Ayesha's knock n he said "come in"

Ayesha walked to him with cup of coffee & placed it on the table she was about to leave when sameer held her wrist & said "Ayesha please ruko" she sensed some thing is wrong & said "Sam kya baat hai pareshaan ho?"

sameer said " Haan Ayesha pareshaan hoon aaj kuch to gadbad Arjun aaj bahut restless lag raha hai jaise kuch use pareshaan kar raha hoo aur wo aise nahin batayega wo aise react tabhi karta hai jab kuch chupata hai aur mujhe lag raha hai ki koi badi baat hai"

Ayesha smiles n said "Sam please aap shant ho jaayiye kuch nahin hoga main jaanti hoon ki aap arjun sir ko bahut acche se jaante hai aur ho sakta hai aapka andaaza theek hoo par aap unse baat akele main hi kariyega aur main bhi aapse yahi kehne aayi thi ki aaj subah se arjun sir kuch pareshaan dikh rahe hai"

Sam nodded & said "Theek hai main mauka dekhkar usse baat karronga"

Ayesha passed him a assured smile & after that sameer pulled her in a hug n said "Thanks Ayesha"

Ayesha said "Hmm ACP Saab aap bhool rahe hai ki ye hamara bedroom nahin hai office hai" he pushed him & ran out before sam could move forward

P-RECAP: An incident that will shook Arjun & riya to the core & will Arjun be able to handle this riya for long & much more 😉

So how was it guys please drop in ur comments as I write for u guys so please do let me know all ur bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love u all

EDIT CREDIT : Pravalika 😊 Good work dear 😃

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Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago

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Shravani / Arohi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Yipeee
I am first again
third in a row
HAT-TRICK 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
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Awesome update
loved it
Poor Riya😭
She has no one in her family
Sam easily understood Arjun's restlessness
after they are best friend
Precap sounds scary
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Edited by skrafty - 11 years ago