ARAKSHI: HUM AAP KAY DIL MAY RAHTAY HAIN (THREAD 2) PART 26 pg 47 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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#72

Originally posted by: arakshifan

Hiii actually I haven't finished reading this story...

I'm still only on thread 1 because I couldn't read earlier as I had exams...
I'm only on the part where sakshi almost gets bitten from the snake...
I must say... I can't stop reading...it's amazing...
I'll reply again when I reach thread 2...
But I will always like each update...


DON'T WORRY DEAR
take your time...i just busy finishing my one more story then
i came back to this story😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for putting this but i want update
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PART 17

Arjun and whole ETF gather around them...other guest also come near them...they all want to know what's happening going on...comm sir also comes near and sakshi see him...he return smile to her...their silent smile passing moment confuse every one...while that guy hold sakshi hand and shake.

Guy: hello, I am ACP Neil Verma (ETF get shocked to know that he is the son of comm. Sir)

Sakshi try to hide her smile and said: ACP Neil...ya phir... (She pause...look comm. Sir...he shake head...like give permission to go on... she complete her talk) king kong.

Neil: hhmmm (look comm. Sir...he smile to see him) accha...toh phir tum ko bhi sakshi kay bajaey...may pink panther kahoon (he bounce back)

Sakshi: I love to hear this...MR KING KONG...

next moment shocked for everyone...when neil hug sakshi and she hug him back...other guest understand that they are friends so, leaving them and go back...only ETF stand near both of them with comm. Sir.

Neil: yaar sakshi tum tu waqai bohat piyari ho gai ho (he wink her, bend near and whisper...but audible for everyone) aur mujhay pata hay...kay yeah kiss kay piyar ka jadoo hay(he throw one naughty glare on arjun side and said...arjun is confuse...while others hide their smile...riya blood start boil in anger)

Sakshi: neil...pagal ho gay ho kiya (she hit him on his upper arms...with nodded no and show her anger)

Neil: ok, sorry...just tell me tumhara pink panther aur Barbie doll say love abhi bhi chal raha hay ya nahi (he again tease her)

Sakshi: haan abhi bhi chal raha hay (she admit)

Neil: sakshi...(he scream on her) you are working in ETF now...come on yaar grown up...yeah ab bhi Barbie aur pink panther kay saath sona...I mean ab tu bed par kissi aur ki jagah bana (he wink on her and sakshi blush hard...while others smile to hear his suggestion...she throw angry glare on him and try to move on...only stop by him...he hold his ear lobes and mutter sorry...sakshi smile and forgive him)

Arjun can't believe on his eyes to see such a beautiful bonding between them...he never know that sakshi have some kind of close friend...or maybe he is more than close...this thought make him disturb...he want to know everything as soon as possible...everything related him...specially what the relation between comm. Sir son and sakshi...he focus on sakshi...who talk with neil...very friendly.

Sakshi: aaj hum kitnay arsay kay baad mil rahay hain...neil...tum bohat buray ho... (She playful hit on his chest) kal jab humarai baat hui thi tu tum nay kyun nahi bataya tha kay tum Mumbai aa rahay ho (she ask him with confusion)

Neil: kal iss liyay nahi bataya kay main already Mumbai may tha (he disclose)

Sakshi scream and said: what? Tum kal Mumbai may thay...uncle yeah kiya kah raha hay (sakshi look comm. Sir...while others ETF member shocked to hear uncle from sakshi's mouth...she call comm. Sir uncle...arjun also look her with confusion...only sameer is standing quiet with little smile on his lips...riya also get shocked...knowing her relationship with comm. sir)

Comm. Sir: haan sakshi...neil ko do din ho gay hain Mumbai aay huay (he inform her)

Sakshi: do din...aur tum mujh say milay bhi nahi (she is surprise)

Neil: sorry Barbie doll...bas papa nay aaj ki party kay baray main bataya tha...tu socha kay yahi mil loon ga...waisay yeah surprise kaisa laga (he bend near her and ask)

Sakshi: surprise...mera tu dil chah raha tha kay sir toor doon...tum nay mujhay bohat irritate kiya (she said)

Neil: sorry dear, papa ki aur meri bet lagi thi...kay tum mujh ko pehchan lo gi...aur main nay kaha kay nahi pehchan sakti...dekha I won the bet (he give comm. Sir winning look)

Sakshi: jee nahi main nay pehchan liya tha (she try to defend herself)

Neil: haan naam pocha tu gussa aa raha tha...sach batao tum party chur kar ja rahi thi na (he look and said with 100% confident) agar may woh song nahi gata...tumhara favourite...tu tum kiya tumharay farishtay bhi nahi pehchan patay mujh ko (he pat on her head and said with confident)

Sakshi: haan...woh may tumhari yeah beard say (but she stop saying...neil removes his beard...and remove his glasses...sakshi mouth is wide open to see him)

Ayesha: sakshi kuch hum par bhi raham karo...aur batao kay yeah sab kiya hay (she interrupt her)

Sakshi just aware of presence of her friends and others...while neil also look them...then he step forward and goes to sameer side and shake hand...ETF team going faint hearing sameer reply.

Sameer: ACP NEIL...welcome to ETF (he shakes hand and said)

Sakshi: what? ETF... (she look him again and said) don't tell me that you join ETF (neil shake head positively) but tum tu (neil place his finger and said) ahhh...no (sakshi quiet in sudden as she know that neil don't want her to reveal his actual position...she snap and turn to other side and start introduction with her friends)

Sakshi: neil...yeh shree...she just start but stop by neil.

Neil: hhmm tum nahi main in sab ka introduction karwata hoon.

Sakshi: it's my honour...be my guest (she bow her head and give him way)

Neil: shree...gadget expert...master mind...decoder of every code (he pat on his shoulder and shake hand) chotu...hhh sorry chanderkant patil...commando...fight master...muscle man with soft and child like heart (he side hug him and shake hand) ok, ladies...ayesha kapoor...lady dabbang...committed...and efficient...heart of ETF cheif...hhhmm (he bend near her and wink saying last sentence in slow voice...ayesha just smile and shake hand with him) and you liza...forensic expert...give accurate figure and fact...which make ETF solve thinks so quick...expert in real words (he shake hand with her...passing smile)

Sakshi: wow, neil tum tu sab ko jaantay ho (she surprise)

Neil: jaana parta hay...saying this he turn to arjun side...take small step and stand in front of him...both look each other for sometime...arjun feel his eyes see through him...try to read his mind...he brush up his though and compose himself in quick...neil smile to understand his condition.

Neil: don't worry jo tumhara hay...ussay chinnay nahi aaya hoon (he said in slow voice...which is only audible for him)

arjun confuse and look him for explaining ...while he signal him towards sakshi...who is talking with Ayesha and tell her about neil and her friendship...arjun look sakshi and take deep breath...he steal his sight...and just nodded...while neil raise his hand towards him.

Neil: woh mujh say kuch nahi chupati...ya yun kah lo kay chuppa nahi sakti (he said with smile)

Arjun hold his hand and shake hand...said: magar mujh say toh kabhi kuch kaha hi nahi...sab chuppa laity hay.

Neil feels little disappointment in his voice and said: zarror is ski koi wajah hogi...I am sure...I know her from childhood...but any way...we sure sort out things...don't worry (he pats his shoulder and move sakshi side)

This conversation happening is between them in very slow voice...nobody knows that...arjun move other side...when neil stop near riya.

Neil: Miss riya mukerjee...transfer from research desk to ETF...leave ETF and then come back...am I right, miss? (He said bend near her...pressure on word miss)

Riya composed herself quickly and said: yes, you are right...so, you are the son of comm. Sir (she looks comm. Sir talking with sameer and arjun...a little far)

Neil: yes, you are right...so, are you happy then I succeed to get introduction from that girl (he tease her)

Riya: haan, magar tum uss ko jantay thay...pehaly say (she defend herself)

Neil: haan...magar woh toh baad main pehchani thi...magar baat toh sirf introduction ki thi...method chahay koi bhi ho...I make her introduce herself as well as shake hand with me...so, I won the bet ...you better be accept it (he said in strong voice...riya just nodded...excuse herself and move away...neil eyes follow her for far...smile crept on his lips and he murmur something)

Dinner have been serve everyone busy having food...sakshi and neil talking while eating...ayesha and other join them and enjoy his company...neil is very joyful and sharp cop...he catch many things so quick...he entertain ETF team member with his some finding and some very useful experience and they all are laughing and enjoying...

riya avoid to go and join that company...she feel scared from neil eyes...his eyes feel like telling her that he know everything...he call miss riya mukerjee...but his eyes saying her that it's wrong and she is not miss riya mukerjee...his smile confuse her...riya feel his eyes see through her...she try to keep distant with him...but how...she don't know...she feel her mission is going ruin ...but she can't lose her mission...she have to successful her mission...at any cost...she want her love back which is bond with her mission success ...she is lost in thought when see sameer coming...she snap and looking him.

Sameer: riya...are you ready to go home?

Riya: yes, is everyone ready to go?

Sameer: yes, we all are ready...come on (he signal her to walk...riya follow him)

Sameer: ok, guys...it's time to go home...it's already very late (he interrupts all of them...arjun is also come near them)

Everyone ready to go...when,

Neil stop sakshi and said: hey pink panther...you stay...I'll drop you later on...I have to discuss some very important things...with you (he said in serious voice...sakshi nodded)

Arjun: sam...please can you drop liza...I have to go somewhere else then go home (he ask favour for sameer)

Sameer understand his condition and said: don't worry...arjun...I sure will do it.

Shree: sir, if you don't mind can I drop liza...chotu come with you (he ask in slow voice)

Sameer: ok, you do it...come on guys... (He move forward and others follow him silently...saying bye to sakshi and neil)

Arjun and sameer get permission from host and they leave the venue...before leaving hall arjun turn and see sakshi talking with neil...but he surprise to see sakshi expression...both are seriously talk with something...sakshi hear him with great seriousness and shocked state...arjun cross exit with tangle mind...he decide to call her and ask...but for that he leave rest...he drive through the marine drive...he want to sit there and think about everything...which is just happening...

Sitting on small wall near the shore...sipping his cutting chai...which he buy from near tea stall...he start thinking...today, happening...he know that comm sir have only one son...what he is doing? Where is he? nobody know about him...arjun is not a person who spying about other person private life...and try to highlight other private life...but see sakshi and neil friendship and closeness...he start thinking that he have to dig their past...he feel angry on sakshi why she is not telling him everything...arjun confess his love and assure her in every good manner...their journey back to Mumbai and spending time in Jaipur is the best time in his life...he see love glimpse in sakshi eyes...he know she love him for long time ...maybe when she join ETF...he feel spark on her very first shake hand...he accept her love after for long time...as he accept her love in heart but that snake incident push him hard...that time he feel life is so cruel if something happening with sakshi...he can't survive and this though make him to confess his love...he do it and she is really happy...small smile crept on arjun lips while thinking those intimate moment and suddenly, he remember those precious moment...some time earlier...when he stop car in deserted road and kiss her with his open heart...arjun touch his lips feel her lips softness still lingering on his lips...her fragrance and body silkiness which make him crazy...still his finger tips feel those silkiness...he want to take her with him and run away...somewhere...any place...nobody find them...they are alone there...just they and their love...no boundary...no restriction...no riya...he snap...riya...this thought turn his mouth taste bitter...he really confuse to see riya behaviour...he feel some changes in her...she look very aggressive and determine...he feel her stubborn behaviour...before she is not look like this...she is humble and kind lady...but why she is change this bit...arjun sharp and six sense start indicating something wrong inside her...but what? He don't know...he want to clear his mind...before he announce his and sakshi relationship in front of everyone...his gut feeling says...this is not a good time...he feel some kind of web...around him...he want to clear everything before he start a new life with sakshi...tangle in these thought...he sit for long time there...then get up and way to go home...he try to call sakshi...but her phone come unreachable...he try two three times then leave it...start SUV and way to go home...leave everything push back...his tired mind want some sleep.

SORRY, I UPDATE AFTER LOOONG TIME

BUT HOPEFULLY YOU LIKE IT

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THANKS

REHANA25




Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
hey me first!
the convo was really awesome dr!
and the banner, i've to mention, it was superbb!
do con soon dr!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
wow, awesome update
so neil and sakshi are child hood friends?
and neil comes in ETF with someother reason?
Maybe its related to Riya???
waiting for the next update...
continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
so mystery guy is comm.'s son neil and sakshi's childhood friend
and he is here to join ETF but there is something else also which he is hiding 😕
and there is some mystery abt riya as well is she married and what is her mission 😕
arjun jealous of neil sakshi freindship 😉
arjun also sensing something wrong with riya hope he and neil join together to unravel the mystery
thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Nice Banner...👏👏
Awesome update...
That man is Neil, Commissioner's son...😃😃😃
Neil-Sakshi shares a very good friendship...😃😃😃
Arjun jealous...😆😆😆
Is Riya married???😕😕😕
What is her mission???😕😕😕
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
thanx for pm
plzzz update soon
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Awesome update Rehana.
Really loved it.
Is Riya married?
And what about mission?
Plz con soon..

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