Ariya SS :Nadaan Dil ki qurbaani -prt 6 pg 35 FINAL - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
wow
awesome
interesting update
loved it
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
nice update...
will be waiting for the next part...
continue soon!!!!!!!!
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
😭
ariya ko milao pleaseee
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Wow di.
It was awesome and mind blowing update.
Just loved it.
Do continue soon.
And thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
iss ka update kab milegi?😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
UPADTE DENE KA IRADA HAI Y ANAHI ..YA PHIR HAME MARNE KA
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
thank you all for your patience.so sorry yaaro mei na iss wali story ke baare mei bhul gayi thi.

next wala update

part 3:

riya went home and cried her heart out.she felt so lonely and heart broken for loving arjun who cant be hers.how can she marry karan.she has to tell him about her and arjun.but arjun toh batana he nahi chahata tih mei kaise. oh god please help me.

idhar arjun ne thaan liya then an there ke hee will leave this town amd etf and go away feom riya and karans life forever.
he cant and will never hurt karan and baree papa but what about riya. how will she live with me.

next day he went early to office and gave hos resignation letter to commsioner and went away with meeting or telling anyone from etf

here in etf all came one by one sloy and riya came last. karan saw riya enter looking sad and lost and by seeing her face anyone can say she didnt have a good nites sleep.

she saw her friends sitting their.

shree:areh ri tu itni ukhri huwo kiwu lag rahi ho

aisha:ha kiya huwa

riya:nahi kuch nahi bas tabiyath thora kharab hai

rathod:guys good morning

all:gm sir

rathod:yeh raute kaha rah gaya

all looked around and shrugged

sakshi:karan woh arjun didnt came with you

karan:no infact i havmt seen him since yestday

riya listening to this looked at karan and said :kiya

karana:ha woh kal se ghar nahi aye

riya:par woh gaye kaha.i hope woh thik ho

tabhi rathod ki mobile rang :hello. jai hind sir

com:...

scroll down..
Edited by farana786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
cont :


rathod:whaaat? why. ... how could he do this

all looked at their boss thinking bad news kiya hai. riya was not feeling good.

rathod after talking to commissioner disconected hos fone and looked at his team and sat down.

ayesha:kiya huwa sir

karan:kiya kaha com ne

sakshi: koi naya aane wala hai

riya ki heart beat tej hoone laagi

rathod looked at his team stood up quietly and went to his office and dialed arjuns number but it said unavailable.

rathod:dammit raute.kiwu kiya aisa tumne. sab kuch kitna acha tha aur yeh kiwu kiwu?

team were not having a good feeling.

after an hour ratjod came and said "" raute resigned"
all shocked

aisha and liza:kiyaaa

karan:omg

shree :what the

chotu:hailla

sakshi:nahiii


riya sat frozen and and felt dizzy. " no no he cant do this. he cant leave me alone."
and she fell down and fainted

karan shouted:riyaaa

shree:riii

all ran towards her.karan quickly took her in his arms and ran out telling chotu to take out the car while rathod and rest ran after him.

theu took her to the hospital. doctors gave her the injection and said "she is in shock and it can be dangerous. agar 24 hours mei riya ko hosh nahi aya toh she can go in coma "

team were shocked while karan was only trying and calling arjuns fone which was switched off

rathod didnt no what was hapoening and why was his team falling down.

thnks for yr time.now like and coment thnks
Edited by farana786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Omg this is really shocking

Riya sach mein arjun se bahot pyar karati hai..isiliye arjun ke jane se itna bada shock laga ...aur arjun jab usse iss bat ka pata chalega to kya hoga...

Awesome one dear,..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Awesome update
arjun resigned n riya is in shock 😲
Next part cont soon
eagerly waiting

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