Gauna SS : Baby Doll Meri Sone Di...Part 5 pg 6 JUNE 23

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

]Hirni wargi chaal meri di, naagin war diya gutta!! Menu vekh ke lang diya ve aie saawan diya rutta!!

Mere hi charche, meriyan hi gallan jag sara karda ni baar baar ve...ho baby doll main sone di...

Lovely OS. Sameer and Bhavna's clashes are always loaded with fireworks!!!

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fly.high

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

OMG! jhakas start!
rukku r u still on earth ya udd gyi khushi se phool ke :p

continue soon manali

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Meself

]Hirni wargi chaal meri di, naagin war diya gutta!! Menu vekh ke lang diya ve aie saawan diya rutta!!

Mere hi charche, meriyan hi gallan jag sara karda ni baar baar ve...ho baby doll main sone di...

Lovely OS. Sameer and Bhavna's clashes are always loaded with fireworks!!!

LOL ... Sweetie ... this time Bhavna has dumped Sam ... Its Gautam for her in this story

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

*unres*
aaye haaye... Supppa like for this amazing story... Superb start... Loved the gutsy attitude of my Tai,here... Haeh... Public mein drooling shrooling... Yeh Bhavna Tai ka kuch nahi hosakta hai... *winks*
continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.

Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth
OMG! jhakas start!
rukku r u still on earth ya udd gyi khushi se phool ke :p

continue soon manali

Birdie... i'm still here ... ye story khatam hone tak mai kahin udd ke nahi jaa rahi 😉

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Part 2

He make her seat in Car ... & take Driving seat himself...

Bhavna scan Car.. "Hmmm Achi postion mai hai... matlab hygine freak hai... "

He immeadtly start FM...

He abt to ask Bhavna abt her addres..

Per chup rahe vo Bhavna thodi???? lol..

" Tumhara naam kya hai?"

He just look at her with amused eyes...

" Ye chup kyu hogaya???? kahi memory loss to nhi hai na???? Gajhni ke Aamir jaise???? " Bhavna's Brain immeadtly starts wrking..

" Gautham... "

"Oh Gautham... nyc name...

"Thx & u?" With that he wears seatbelt & Bhavna sees his bicpes...

"Omg... I love this so much..." Bhavna says herself..

" Vaise jana kaha hai?" He ask

"Dadar... "

" Ok... "

They both are silent for sometime..

" So , U are new in Mumbai?" Gatham ask.

" Ya.. but hw cn u know?"

"Bas pata chal gya" Gautham answers & shrugs his shoulders.

"Kahi ye Banda Detective to nhi..." Bhavna's mind again asking..

" Ye to nhi sochrahi , ki mai koi Detective hue & all that???" He ask & Bhavna shocked...

"Naahhhiii... chi... nahiii"

Gautham just smile & shook his head..

"Actually Miss ..ammm Mrs... "

"Its Miss.." Bhavna clears

" So Miss mai pakka Bombay wala hue , so I knows.. "

"Ya... aage se Left..."

Gautham takes Left.. "Ek baat puchu?" he ask slowly

"Ha.. "

" Tumhe baate karna pasand nhi hai? I mean mai kitne der se akle hi bol raha hue... "

"Nhi.. vo .. aise hi... mai to bahut sari baate karti hue , pata hai Maa to bahut bore hoti hai meri baate sunkar... U know na hum Mom se aise to bol sakte ... its difficult... and she can't understand ... "Teacher Bhvana starts &Gautham just look at her , he abt to open his mouth to say something but als Bhavna does not give him any chance to him.. she also shows him dirctions ..

Finally they reach..

Bhavna open door & look back..

"Thx... "

"Its k.. "

" Amm Coffee??" Bhavna ask..

"Vo.. vo.." he strat to make excuses

"Dn't wry mai yaha frnds ke saath reheti hue , so No Maa & Dad.. come.. "

"Ya , " he immeadtly accepts offers

Bhvna somehow walk.. but gets angry on herself...

"Huhhh... I hate my leg.. mai bhag nhi sakti?😭 "

She lost her balance & but Gautham hold her..

"Again ha??? " he ask smilingly..

Bhavna just smile ..

He again give her supoort.. & starts to climb up Stair.. kya kare Lift wrking condition mai nhi thi... lol... ( Lagta hai Sab Bhavna per Meherbaan hai)

" Which Floor?"

" 9th.."

During climbing up Bhavna suddenely cluched his shirt tightly & closes her eyes...

"What??? hey , r u feeling pain??"

Bhavna just look at him with such face like she start to cry any moment...

"Hey , just relax , dn't put much pressure on that foot ... " Gatutham advice..

Bhavna just nods ..

Ab peheli baar kya baat karnge.. kuch jyada nhi... bas idhar udhar ki baate...

" Omg.. maine to ye pucha hi nhi ki banda karta kya hai... reheta kaha hai???? aur to apni sari info usko bata di ... Stupid girl agali baar puch lena... " Bhavna smacks herself..

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Unresd my comment on pg2..
Correct song for the story... :)

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Main pehle hi res karke rakhti hu for my comment of ch2...
Reswa...

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

In other Area , At Home

One girl seat on Sofa, watching some National Geography Pragramme while muching on Bread , & also one Glass keep front of her...

Suddenely door open , and boy comes in & look at Girl... & sighs

But she does not notice him , she is so lost in Programme..

( In Programme they shows how Tiger find his animal & kill him )

Boys sees this & look at girl , with mischivious ness in his eyes.

(That programme they shows Tiger abt tocatch that Animal ...)

Suddenely girl hears loud sound of Tiger near her ears... ( Actually its boy who goes near her & make sound like Tiger.. )

Gilr immeadtly yells loudly & jump at her place & starts to call "Mummma ,,aaahh Mummma.. Mummma..."

Girl's gaze fell on the person , who is now laughing...

"Uuu tummm... "

"Kyu????? kaise dekh rahi thi tum use..." ( he immeadtly shows her how she seat & sees T.V)

" Kutta kahi..."

"Kamini..."

" Chudail kahi ki"

" Ra 1... "

" Ohreally , mai tumhe use SRK se ajeeb lagta hue?? ha , Tali ( Fry) then look at her & correts himself no... Stuff ki hue Paplet..."

She frutlis her nose angrily... " Oh aur tu kon??? Prowns...??"

" Tu kisi Bhes ki tarah lag rahi hai ab jo racce ke liye ready reheti hai..."

and then start pillow fights.. and after that newspapers , and all other things...

after that they start to fight with hands...

"Manaliii , Gauthammm.. stop it... "

Both immeadtly adjust their dress & look at source who yells on them

"Ye sab kya ho raha tha?? Koi World War 3 chal raha tha phir se???"

"Mumma start isne ki thi" Manali immeadtly shows her fingers to Gautham..

"Mom... she yells at me first..." Gautham now shows finger to Manali...

"Shut up... and ha ye Hall..." Both look surroundings..

All things are scartted around Hall , like koi Toofan aaya tha..

Manali & Gautham give each other angry look...

" Mujhe mera Hall saaf chayie... abhi aur isi time..."

" Tumhe dekh kar kehega kon ki tum dono bade ho , abhi bhi baache jaise ladte ho ek dusre se... "

Both low their heads & listens..

" Agar ye Hall thik nhi kiya , to aaj no Lunch... No Lunch means no Biryani..." Thir Mother declares

"Bro , tum sab pillows utha do , mai paper stand per rakhti hue..." Manali immeadtly says like good girl

" Ha , aur tu Sofa bhi saaf kar , mai flowers placekar dunga pot mai... " Gautham answers like good Brother..

Thir Mother smirks at thir Union & goes to Kitchen...

Precap :

Gautham & Bhavna meet again

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

😉😉😉

Bhavna ne apna naam to bataya hi nahi ...😆😆😆😆

apne aap se hi bak-bak kar rahi thi 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Biceps ... haaye ...

Uff... ye kya kar daala is bande ne ... Bhavna ka brake wire loose kar diya ... ab to wo bina brake k bolti jayegi 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

😲😲😲😲

9th Floor tak bechara usko sahara de ke chadha k leke gaya 😳😳😳

EK cheez aur likh deti Manu ... Bhavna k roommates ka kya haal hua apne hero ko dekh ke? 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Wo bhi behosh ho gayi hongi 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Manu-Gautham Bro-Sis part was sooo adorable 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Stuff ki huyi poplet ... prawns 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Aur fir toofaan ... world war 3 ... 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Aur mummy ki daant 🤣🤣🤣🤣

And fir re-union 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

But ek gadbad lag rahi hai mujhe 😳😳😳

Ye Gautham Bhavna to ghar drop karke aaya hai na... aur Bhavna to office se nikal rahi thi... matlab sham thi ... to ab raat ho gayi hai... to fir Gautham ki mummy ne Lunch kyun kaha? DInner kehna chahiye tha na? 😲😲😲

Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago