Arni + Raisha ..Chahato ka fasan part 4 on page 8

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<font color="#990033" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Hello friends ... i m back again ...so new story ...Arni and raisha ... ETF hai ... meri story bina ETF ke nahi hogi ...😆.. aur kuch new characters hai ... CS abhi de rahi hu ...😉...</font>


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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Character sketch ...</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Mr. Suryakant Rawte : very rich and kind person ... top industrialist ...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Mrs. Vidhya Rawte : very simple and beautiful soft hearten lady ..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Mr. Aniruddh Rawte : very intelligent and handsome ... and brilliant criminal lawyer .. Arjun elder brother ...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Mrs. Akansha Aniruddh Rawte :</font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Aniruddhwife ... arjun ki bhabhi ...by profession gynecologist ... very beautiful and lovely ... lady ...and sam's elder sister ...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Mr. Arjun Rawte : ACP ... second in command in ETF ..Dashing young man . ..and Brilliant cop ...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Mr. Damsingh Rathore : Royal person ... famous Businessman ... very down to earth person ..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Mrs. Smita Rathore : very caring and emotional lady ...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Mr . Sameer Rathore : ACP ... ETF chief ... and yeahh very handsome .. intelligent cop</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Shreekant sen :Tech expert of ETF</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Chandrakant Patil : Commando and ETF member</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Aisha Singh : Royal Family ... ETF shootout specialist... brave lady</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Roshni Mittal : simple gal ...live with her grandmother ...florist</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5" color="#003399">so do i continue ? plzzz batana jarur ...errors ke liye maafi .jisko PM chahiye add me in ur buddy list ... bbye tc😊</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5" color="#cc33cc">Part 1 on page 2</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5" color="#cc33cc">Part 2 on page 4</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5" color="#cc33cc">part 3 on page 5</font>


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Posted: 11 years ago
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👍🏼 karo ji karo
CS are nice

waiting for story 😊
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PLZ DO CONTINUE & DON'T FORGET TO pm ME.😊
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Wow arni n raisha
awesome dear
interesting cs
continue soon
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Nice CS...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Awwssmmm start
Supperbbb... CS
cont sooon
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hi
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Part 1



Ambala Training Academy ...

TWo men r running together ... wo thak kar ik jagah par baith jaate hai ...

arjun : kitna ajeeb lag raha he naaa ...bas 15 days aur ... fir hum logo ko posting milegi ... time kitane jaldi nikal gaya naa sam ...



sam : haa arjun ...mujhe yaad he aaj bhi wo din jab tu aur me hum dono ne admission liya thaa ... fir dono ne sath me seniors ki band bajayi thi ...

Arjun : haa aur sath me sir ki daat bhi khayi thi aur ground ke chakkar bhi lgaye thee ...

sam : pahale sirf dost the lekin ab to jaise lagta he ... koi purana rishtaa hai ...


Arjun : rishta to hai ...dada aur wahini ka... tujhe yaad he dada ki shadi me ... kitane maze kiye thee ...vahini aur dada ko kitna chhiidhyaa thaa ...

sam : haa akhir ... shadi bhi to humari wajah se huyi thi agar uss din uss party me ... tu ankansha didi ko aniruddh jiju ke dil ki baat nahi batata to ...

Arjun : sacch yaar ye dada bhi ajeeb he ... criminal lawyer he ... criminals ki court me bolati band kar dete he lekin apne dil ki baat vahini se nahi keh paye .. tujhe yaad hai jab me pahale baar tere ghar jaipur gaya tha laga jaise mujhe apna ik aur ghar mil gaya ...aur babasa ...masa ...wahini ka apnapaan aur pyaar ...

sam : haaa yaar .. kuch dino ke baad hum dono Officers ban jayenge ...mere life ka bohot bada sapna pura hogaa ... mujhe aaj bhi yaad he wo din jab me aur babasa ...


FLASHBACK ...
sam age only 15 ...

Dam singh : beta sameer ... aaj bahut der ho gayi he hume ...

sam : haa babasa ...

Damsingh : aaj tumne talwaar bazzi pratiyogita jeet kar mera aur apane purakho ka maan badhaya hai ...

sam : baba aapse ik baat kahu

dam signh : bolo beta ...

sam : babasa me ACP banana chahata hu ...

tabhi kuch daku unko gher lete hai ...
dam singh : sameer ... aaj hum dono ki pariksha he ...

sam ; aap aur me inn logo ko maza khaccha denge ...


daku sardaar : dam singh ... wahi jissne humare admiyo ko police se pakdwayaa thaa ... chodnaa maat issko ... aaj ye nahi ya hum nahi


dam singh : meri darati ko bechane chale the ... me tum logo ko nahi chodungaa ...

daku and sam aur dam singh ke bicch ladai hoti haai ... last me ... sam ko bahot chhott aati hai ...saaree daku bhag jaate hai but sardar ko sameer ne talwaar ki nok par rakhaa hai ...

sam ; mujhe mazaa chakhaane chalaa thaa ...


tabhi police waha aa jaati hai ...
police officer ; bohot dino se talash thi .. in sabki ... aaj pakad me aa gaye ...
dhnyawaad ... rathore sahab ...

dam singh rathore : dhnyaawaad mere bete ko doo ... sameer behossh ho jata hai ...

3 din ke baad hospital me ... dam singh rathore .. mrs. rathore aur ..akansha sab khade hai ...

sam : babasa ... wo log ...

police officer : wo logo ko humne pakad liyaa hai ... Thank u soo much mr. rathore akkhir aapka khoon hai ... apna rang to dikhayega hi ... bada hokar isne police ya Army join karna chaiye desh ko aise nojawano ki jarurat hai ...

dam singh rathore : sam ki taraf dekhaate hai ... haa meraa betaa POlice force hi join karegaa ... aur kabil officer ban ke dikhayega ...

sam smile ...


FLASHBACK ...

arjun : haa sam... aur aaj hum sabko tujhh par nazz hai ...

sam : hummm ... yaad he naa kya kasame khayi hai tune ...

Arjun : haa sam ... me kaise bhul sakta hu ...


Flashback ...

ik village near usmanabaad ...in a police station ...a man with his son ..

a man : sahab meri bahan ke picche pade hai wo log ...

inspector : haaa to hum kyaa kare ... galati tumhari bahan ki hogi ...

suryakant rawte : nahi sahab wo jameedaar kaa betaa ... aap usko pakdiye nahi to wo meri bahan ko uthha ke le jaayegaa ...

inspector : le jayegaa lekar gaya to nahi naaa ... waise bhi ... kya karega thodi masti karega aur dusre din chhod degaa ... ( he laugh everyone laugh )

little boy ... uss inspector par waha padha paper weigh marta hai ...

insecptor ;(anger) samjhaa apne ladke ko ... bada hokar gunda banegaa

suryakant rawte : maaf kar do sahab baccha hai

inspector : chal jaa yaha se ...

man and his son ...

arjun : baba ... ab hum kyaa karenge ?

suryakant rawte : ye gaon chodkar jana hi hogaa ... mumbai ...tumhare nana ji ke yaha ...

arjun ; AAi aur dada waha kyoo gaye hai ...

suryakant rawte : no reply ...

that night ... suryakant rawte 's house ...

jameerdaar ka ladka apne sahiyo ke sath aata he ... suryakant rawte aur arjun ko jameerdaar ke admi pakad lete hai ... isse pahale ki wo uss suryakant ki bahan ko hath lagaye wo khud ko chaku maar leti hai ...jameerdar ke bete aur admi darkar bhag jaate hai ...

suryankant sister : dada ... meri wajah se aapko bohot lakleef huyi mujhe maaf ..arjun betaa...(arjun uske pass jata hai ) police walo ne humari madad nahi ki ... mujhse wada kar arjun tu police force join karega .. aur inn jaise logo ko saza dega ... aur humare jaise logo ki rakhssha karegaa .. mujhe wachan de...

arjun : me wacchan detaa hu attya ...( she is dead ) ...

suryakant rawte : mee tula nahi wachawu shakalo ... ( me tumhe nahi baccha saka )

arjun : baba attya ... k sath aisaa kyoo hua ? me unn logo ko nahi chodungaa

...

next day ... jameerdaar ke log suryakant rawte ko village se nikal dete hai ,.. wo mumbai aa jaate hai ...mehnaat karte hai aur unke dono bete Jurm ke khilaaf awaaj uthate hai ...

FLASHBACK ...



arjun yaado mai kho chukaa hai ...

sam touch his shoulders : kyaa socch raha hai ...

Arjun : kuch nahi ...( ansu pochta hai ) ... me wada karta hu sam ab jurm karne walo ko zinda nahi chodunga ...

sam : tu akelaa nahi hum dono ...( try to switch topic ) ... waise didi ko call kiyaa ? unka call aaya thaa naa ...

arjun : areee nahi yaar bhul gaya abhi lagta hu ...( dial his brother number ) ...

...

Rawte Mention ...

lady pujaa karati hai ...

lady to man : baba prasad .( wo prasand deti hai aur unke per chuti hai )

( mr. rawte newspaper padh rahe hai ... mrs .rawte kitchen se bahar aati hai ) .

akansha : aai prasad ...( wo prasand deti hai aur unke per chuti hai )

mrs rawte : yee kyaa aaj fir tumne nasshta bana diyaaa ...mujhe kabhi to kuch karne de ...
akansha : aai ab lunch hum dono bana lenge naaa

mrs rawte : bilkul nahi tujhe hospital jana hai ... lunch aaj me banaungi ..

akansha : aree aai ...

mrs: rawte : koi agar magar nahi ... ani(anniruddh) kaha he ussko bula le nahi to kal jaise jaldi jaldi me breakfast karna bhul jayegaa ...


( akanshaa ... akanshaa ...akanshaa )


akanshaa : aayiii ...

wo upar apane bedroom me jaati hai ...


In her bedroom ... Aniruddh bohot saari files dekh raha he ...

akanshaa ; hey bhagwaan ye kyaaa kiyaa aapne ?

aniruddh : areee yaar woo case ki file nahi mil rahi hai ...

akansha : case ki file nahi mili too aapne room ka ye haal kar diyaa ... hatiye ...

(file dhundh ke de deti hai aur jaane lagati hai ...)


aniruddh .. : ( usko drag karke apane pass khicchta hai ) kyaa yaar ab tumse romance karne ke liye bhi bahana banana padh raha hai ...

akansha ; choddiye mujhe ... koi aa jaayegaa ...

aniruddh : kon aayega aai baba nicche he ... aur pyaar ka dushmaan yaha hai nahi ...😆

aknshaa ; dekhiye bhauji ke baare me aisa maat kahiye ...

aniruddh : aur nahi to kya.. wo hota he to romance karne kaha deta hai ...

akansha : rahane dijiye ..bhuliye maat .. agar wo naa hotaa to humari shadi bhi nahi hoti ... aap to kuch keh bhi nahi paaye mujhse ...huh ...

aniruddh : ab bol deta hu ... i love u ...

akanshaa blush ... isse pahale ki kuch hooo ... anniruddh phone ring ..(arjun ka call ) 😉

aniruddha : lo aa gaya .. romance ke dushman ka call ...akansha ko chodta hai


akansha laugh...

aniruddha : hello haa bol arjun ...

arjun : good morining dada ... kaise he aap aur meri swwet wahini ...

aniruddh :Acche hai humm ... wahini yahi he le baat kar ...

( phone akansha ko dekar wapas file check karta hai )

akansha : hello bhauji kaise hai aap ?aapke hi call ka wait kar rahi thii ... aur kitnaa time lagega ..

arjun ; are are wahini itane questions ? waise aaj akdu ka mood accha hai baat kya hai ? laugh


akansha : bhauji ... aisa maat boliye ...

arjun :wahini training 15 days me khatam ho rahi hai fir posting ... wahini woo ( sam arjun ko kuch bolta hai isshare me ) me aur sam ..


akansha : sam ko phone dena jara ...

arjun chuckle sam ko phone deta hai

sam ; hello didi kaisi hai aap ?

akansha : me acchi hu ... tumne aur arjun ne jo bhi plans banaye hai wo sab cancel ...tum dono training khatam hone ke baad yaha aa rahe hai ... samjhe ya samjhu ...

sam : me bhi yahi samjhaa raha thaa Arjun ko lekin ye mantaa hi kaha hai ..

arjun : accha tu samjhaa raha thaa sam ... jhuthh maat bol ...

sam : areee arjun didi se jhuth nahi bolaate hai

samjun fight ... akansha laugh ...

akansha : tum dono training khatam hote hi... pahale yaha aaoge fir ..jaipur jaoge samjhe naa ...

samjun ; yess boss ...

call cut ...


aniruddh : kab aa raha hai ?

akansha : 15 days me ...

aniruddha : hummm...

akansha ; chaliye breakfast karne aa jayiye ...

aniruddh : tum chalo me aata hu ... akansha jaane lagati hai ...akkku ..(akansha palati hai ) i love u ...

akansha smiles ...


so hows it ... if u like plzzz do comment and like ... errors ke liye maafi ... plzz let me know do i continue ?😆
Edited by NainaSM - 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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awesome update dear👏👏
loved it
sam-jun's past..awesome
akanksha- aniruddh convo was fantastic
arjun-romance ka dushman😆😆
waiting for next part
continu soon
thankx for pm
Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago

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