NEW ARIYA SS: PG 15

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hi my dear dear friends.

I m nanupma. I've been a silent participant or rather say active commenter of this forum but have been away for short period of time due to some personal reasons. Most of u may not know me as I was gone around 9 month I guess ago. But m back now with new zeal n idea, hope u will like it n bear it with me.
Prologue/:
Arjun was facing the tv screen set in front of his chair n looking for some new case n Sameer as usual looking at the case file submitted to him for approval n shree engrossed in his lappy for updating the new softwares. Chotu as usual dreaming about his 11:30 girl. Aisha stealing glances of Sameer n chatting with liza n sakshi. Sakshi stealing glances of karan. Karan too jumping in between the chatting of girls. Arjun though was engrossed in news casting but drowned in the thought of the girl he met yesterday. He was mesmerized by her simplicity n beauty. He was going back from his duty n stopped at red signal. He was observing the surrounding when his eyes happen to land on the girl who was across the road playing in the park with children becoming one of them. She was wearing white anarkali dress with kohl in eyes n glossed lips in the name of make up. She was little dusky in color. The thing that attracted him towards her was her eyes which hold lots of innocence n mischief in it. She was making lot of faces when she couldn't catch the children. she would pout n make funny faces that brought a smile on his face unknowingly. He was broken out of reverie by the several horns n saw that signal was green n once he saw towards the park the girl was going with children. He took last glance of her n mentally slapped himself for loosing in her but was smiling foolishly all the way to police quarter that he shared with Sameer. He was grinning ear to ear that he failed to see his buddy was looking at his suspiciously. Sameer enquired about his late arrival n the reason of his smile but he simply shrugged it off saying nothing n went to his room thinking about the girl. Even now he is simply thinking about her obvious to his surrounding smiling like a foolish. Other were looking at him like an alien. He was again brought out of thoughts by Sameer's cell ring. He turn around n saw all curious gazes on him n he shrugged it off signaling Sameer to pick his cell making straight face n they got case n they engrossed themselves in it.
On the other side, a girl was smiling like an idiot thinking about yesterday. She was playing with children when she felt she was being watched n look around but couldn't find anyone. When she turned around she saw him looking at her intently. She felt unique sensation run down her body by the way he was looking at her as if he could see through her. She turned around n started playing with kids again with shy smile n unknown feeling in her. She was having fun with the children which she do every weekend. She had been selected for her dream job. She was celebrating it with the orphanage kids whom her father brought to his orphanage to give them shelter n better life. She helped her father in their orphanage. She had her father n her dai jaan in family. Her mother died when she was 7 years old due to breast cancer. She was pampered by her baba n dai jaan. He father didn't remarry anyone thinking that her step mom may not give her same affection of a real mother. He finds his happiness in her n the orphanage kids. He is business man. Now, after sometime she went back home thinking about the stranger. She went to sleep thinking about her new job that she has to join day after tomorrow n the stranger she saw from park drowning in dreamland.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi dear.. Nice start. Like the concept. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm.
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nice concept he flat seeing her
and other side she also feel
shy when she him update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woww
you started ut own story.:D
nice prologue dear!
Loved the way Arjun lost in the girl.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice cint soon and pm me
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Awesome n different concepttt
Do continue sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey narupma first of all welcome back.
wow aatee he treat for us, a ss cool
amazing progl loved ariyas pov
thanks for pm yar
and yes jitna jaldi hoo update karna
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was awesome and mind blowing concept dear.
just loved it.
hayee ariya😳
do continue soon.
and please pm me
i will send you a buddy request
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start yar. ...
Interesting concept. ...
Arjun to first Nazar msi lost n same case with rii cool...
Riya joining etf kya???
Continue soon

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