Ariya os - sunn raha hai na tuh(complete) - note pg 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Quite an emotional start dr...!!!!
Awww Arjun was not in his senses n in that state he blasted on her n hurted her badly through his harsh words...!!!
Wow Arjun tried to talk to her whn he relized his mistake...!!
Loved the start...!!! Continue asap...!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Awesome
Emotional start
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
omg poor riya
arju should say supersorry
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
ARJUN ne apna frustration aur anger RIYA pe nikal diya 😲
good job ARJUN 👏 we r proud of u 😡
poor RIYA 😭
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Interesting start. ...
Poor riya...xarjun was so angry on her...
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
oh god arjun hurt riya again
& riya as usual cry😒
plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Emotional and great start.
Loved it.
Riyaa hurt because of Arjun's words.
Arjun should taste his own medicine...
Haeh...
Itthu sa upd8 deke kaha chali gayi,Farana Di?
Continue sooonish...
Do pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
part 2:


riya was crying bitterly.she thought she couldnt ever live without arjun.doesnt arjun love her or cared for her atleast.why was he doig this to her.riya took out arjuns picture and started talking to her.
meanwhile arjun reachd etf and was going to his cabin when he saw riya. he stopped and thought " yes i should appologise to riya.how could i hurt her like this when she loves me unconditionally."
as he was about to step in the conference room he heard riya crying n took out his picture and startd to talk.

seeing riya cry made arjun more guilty n ashame of himself.his heart pained n he has to do something.
riya to arjuns picture: kiwu aisa kar rahe ho tum arjun.app ko pata hai mei maar jaungi app se dur hoyi toh.sunn raha hai nah tu, kyu ro rahi hu mei...
and saying this she started to fall from her chair, seeing this arjun ran to her like a mad man aur usko apne arms mei le kar shakes her up n made her sit on the sofa. he gives her water to drink.after drinking water riya looked up and saw her savior was arjun and she murmered"" woh i am sorry takleef di aap ko.i wont ever, i promise.ab ap ko mujhse koi problem nahi hogi as i am going back to kolkata.

arjun was shocked and he shook her really roughly and shouted " oh really phirse bhaag rahi ho, kiwu ke meine kaha isi liye nah.u know i love u but uss wqat mei hosh mei nahi tha riya"', and arun softly spoke caressing her cheeks" i have learnt to live without roshni with u riya.u have taught me to live again, agar tum chali gayi toh mera toh ssaanse ruk jaye gi" and riya kept her hands on his mouth "shhh arjun pliz dpnt say like this.i love u too n i wont live i ever no matter what " and they both hugged...

Happies endings!!!
life starts for ariya hense forward.
Edited by farana786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
*unres*
it was a superb,amazing and an emotional ending...
loved it a lot...
Finally,Arjun asked forgiveness from Riya and she forgave him...
Will miss this OS...
Do write more like this...
Thanks for the pm...
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
wow do amazing ending tha.
all is well between them
but thora chota tha
but ending was lovely
thnk u n do write some more I love yr works di
add me m new hia

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