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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll


Ok
But kal tak milega.
Now I am writing pyaar ek ishq junoon


i am waiting megha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Ok...😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Ok...😃😃😃


Humm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Sounds interesting. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
loved the concept
plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Nice and awesome concept cont soon waiting for update and do pm me ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
nice prologue & cs
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Hii guys
I come up with first part hope you liked it.

PART-1

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"Riya POV"

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One boy who was 18 years old was talking to a girl who was12 years old very harshly and that girl was sobbing and looking very scared from him.

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[B[That boy talks to that girl in angry voice
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That boy: how dare you?

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He says in angry voice and girl speaks in trembling voice

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That Girl: what...what ha...have I done?

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He was seeing her angrily and held her shoulder tightly and dug his nail in her shoulder.

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She cried in pain and says

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That Girl: ahhh...bhaisa mujhe dard ho raha hain.

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That boy: dard ho raha hain tujhe dard

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Saying this he throws riya on the floor and sits beside her and slapped her hard on her cheeks and held her hair and says

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That boy: next time mujhse sawal puchne ki yaa mujhe pe haq jatane ki yaa mujhe rokne ki koshish bhi mat karna

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Saying this he left from there.

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On the other hand that girl started crying and was calling him continuously

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That girl: bhaisa please ruk jaye please bhaisa please ruk jaye

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But that boy didn't listen and goes from there

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Suddenly she yells bhaisa and her sleep broke and was sewtting very badly. She sits on her bed and was thinking about her life.

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It's been 7 years she sees dream in every night that her brother is leaving her and beating her and left her alone and after that past incident he never love her and also didn't see her when she was ill.

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After sometimes she feels ok she stand up from her bed and goes from bathroom and after sometimes she freshen up and comes to dinning table and ate her breakfast and after sometimes she goes to her office.

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She reached her office and do's her work peacefully. She was chatting with her friends and does her work and at night she come to her house and goes directly to her room.

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She goes to washroom to change into nightwear and after changing she sits on her bed and took her diary and writing about her life.

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Yes that girl favourite time pass is singing, dancing yaa she writes in her diary.

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(Now lets see what she was writing in her diary. So now that girl is writing on her diary)

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DEAR DIARY

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How are you? I know you are angry with me na that since three days I didn't meet you and also not sharing my feeling my days with you but main kya karoon kaam aa gaya tha time hi nahi mila.

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But I missed you so much and I know you also missed you very much.

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Or batao kaise haal chaal?

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Theek...!!!!! Or mere?

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Vaise ke vaise hi tum jaanti to ho na meri life kaise hain. I am missing bhai very much.

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Specially unki smile, care and love for me.

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I am carving for his love but I know they don't love me anymore. He hates me very much.

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Why? Vo kyun kar rahe hain aisa? But I know bhai sa uss haadse ki vajah se toot gaye hain or iss vajah se vo aise ho gaye varna vo apni riya se kabhi gussa nahi hote.

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Vo aise rude kabhi nahi hote.

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But mere liye kitni dukh ki baat hain ke main sabke saamne unhe apna bhai nahi keh sakti.

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Hum ek office main kaam karte hain vo mere boss hain isse zayada kuch nahi.

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Or mere liye sabse badi dukh ki baat mujhe logo ke saamne apne alag naam batana padhta hain.

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Miss Riya Dhayamsingh Rathore se Miss Riya Mukherjee.

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Research specialist and Encounter Specialist of ETF...

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TBC...

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I know this is small parts but first three parts is short but after 3-4 parts I will give long one.

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Precap:

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Sameer POV...

excuse any errors...

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thank you..
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
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Loved the start dear awesome
Poor riya feeling bad for her 😭😭
Sam is so broken inside 😭
that he is taking out his frustration like this 🤢
Diary entry was nice
thanks for the PM
Continue soon😊
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Interesting start
But Sam ne aisa kyu kiya?
Poor Riya
Feeling bad for her
waiting for the next part
continue soon
Edited by skrafty - 11 years ago

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