ARAKSHI: KUCH TOH HAY TUJH SAY RAABTA (PART 17) pg 46

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This is my new story...little bit different
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KUCH TOH HAY TUJH SAY RAABTA PART 1

This is full hilly area...one fast river divide into two parts...one part have some small villages...with greenery...flock of sheep...humans...but the other part have big and dangerous mountain situated...on narrow and small road snaking...sticking and gluing with rocky mountain...road one side had mountain...other side have fast flowing river...one jeep running fast on that road...three man sitting quietly...the person who drive its really expert to drive in those roads...he know where road turn...where road more narrow...his speed never down...and he drives like insane...while other two sitting quietly...one man keenly look surrounding area...look like he is not belong from this area...the other one talking with driver...some time... otherwise quietly sit.

They arrive in one area surrounding with High Mountain...there were some houses build in some distance...jeep stop at front of one house...they all get down...standing near jeep...stretching their bodies...then move inside...some guards walking around...hanging with big rifles...looking them coming...they stop...recognise that man and hug him...then give him way to go in...they all three man enter in room...it's very big room...wall decorated with some dead animal head...one side fire place burn with fire...which give this room warmth...many sofa and chair places...one wooden bed place there...occupied with one man...who lean back with pillow and drinking some kind of drink...seeing them entering...he sit straight...and take a side his drink ...he leave his sit and come near them and hug one man.

Man: oye mera yaara...deepak...aa gaya to jail say chut kar (he hug that man)

Deepak: haan yaara...toh bata kaisa hay? (He hugs back)

Man: haan main to theek hoon...bas tera hi intezaar kar raha tha (he parted and make him sit) teray baghair to udohra smjhta hoon...main apnay aap ko. (He stops looking other man)

Man pointed the other man...and asks...yeah kaun hay?

Deepak: oye khan yeah bohat hi kaam ki cheez...oye yaara aa ja idhar aa ja...aapna hi ghar hay... (he turn to khan and said) oye yaara...meray saath jail main tha...abhi kuch din pehlay hi aaya tha...meri to saza khatum ho gai thi...iss ki shuru hi hui thi...magar yeah wahan say bhaag aaya...aur char police waloon ko bhi maar diya...paper main is ski tasweer bhi chuppi hay...main iss ko saath hi lay aaya...tumharay kaam aay ga. (he tell khan...all detail)

Khan looks that man...that man height...more than 6'fit...tall with strong physic...deep black orbs...broad chest...well-settle hairs...light beard...big moustache...one big mole on his left cheek...if remove moustache and mole...his whole appearance look handsome...he didn't look any kind of criminal...khan confuse for his look.

Khan sinking in deep thought...and said: pata nahi...aisa kyun lag raha hay kay iss ko kahin dekha hay... (He turn to Deepak and ask) naam kiya hay iss ka?

Deepak: ravi...iss ka naam ravi hay...tum aaj kay paper main is ski photo dekh lo... (He tries to clear his self)

Khan: haan paper yahan ek din kay baad aata hay...aaj ka paper kal aay ga...tab dekhain gay...par theek hay... (He turn to ravi side and said) abhi tum apnay yaar kay saath aaya hay...toh tera bhi welcoming hay...aaja baith ja. (He shakes hand with ravi and point him at one chair)

In whole time ravi utter no word...not even now...when this journey start...he normally silent...but his eyes scan whole environment very keenly...he observe each and everything...he about to sit on chair when door slammed open...make all three jump on their places...one man enter...his breathing fast...like he run from miles.

Man: khan...khan ...hum nay uss ko pakar liya hay. (He said with full excitement)

Khan: kiss ko pakar liya hay? (He sit on his place...showing no interest)

Man: woh...uss sherni ko...uss larki ko...khan...uss larki ko (he explain)

Ravi and Deepak amaze to see khan reaction...he stand like spring on his place...he quickly go to that man side and hold his upper arm...shake him badly and said: oye...kiya kah raha hay? Uss larki ko...sherni ko ...par kaissay...tum jaissay gedhar uss ko to haath bhi nahi laga saktay...oye kahin nashay may kissi aur ko toh utha nahi lay (he scold that man)

Man: nahi khan...wohi hay...aap ko pata hay kay ...woh iss area may thi...mujhay pata tha kay woh zarmina say milnay jaiy gi...uss kay ghar par nazar rakhi thi...aaj woh gai thi wahan...zarmina nay uss kay liyay halwa banaya tha...uss main hum nay bayhosi ki dawa mila di...sab beyhosh ho gay...hum uss ko utha kar lay aay... (Man tell whole detail)

Khan: oye dhokay say pakra hay uss ko...jab hi pakar liya...khair kahan hay...ab wo (he look that man)

Man: khan uss ko opper walay room main rakha hay...kal ki meeting may sab jamah hoon gay...to aap boss ko yeah tohfa day saktay hain...woh aap say khush ho jaiy ga (man suggest him)

Khan thinking while and approve his idea...said: theek hay...uss par nazar rakho...uss kay pass koi bhi na jaiy...chalo main khud dekhta hoon (he about to go with that man...just stop and look Deepak )

Deepak: yaar, khan yeah kiya chakar hay...kaun hay yeah larki (he amaze)

Khan: Deepak...yeah...woh hay...jiss ki talash to pura drag mafia kar raha hay...yeah kaun hay...kahan say aayii hay...koi nahi jaanta...magar sab ki pulse iss kay haath may hay...police ko bata kar... ab tak pata nahi kitnay drug dealers ko khatum kar chuki hay...hadh say ziyaada khoobsorat aur hoshiyaar hay... (he continue telling him) kitni dafa uss ko pakra hay ...magar rait ki tarah haathoon say phisal jaati hay...aaj bhi is nay dhokay say pakra hay...choti si umar main tofaan machaya hay...uss kay sources kiya hain kissi ko nahi pata...par sabot sab kay khilaaf hain... (He close his fist and said) ab uss ko nahi chorna...kal us ski qismat ka faisla ho jaiy ga.

Khan turn to Deepak side and said: to jaa...apnay mehmaan ko bhi lay ja...araam kar...kal subah miltay hain... mujhay kal ki meeting ka bhi intezaam dekhna hay...(he about to go...but one voice stop him)

Ravi speaks for first time and said: if you want any help...I am ready to do it.

Khan nodded no and said: aaj tum log aram karo...kal dekhain gay... (He left the room)

Deepak take ravi with him and both go inside...find one cosy room and hit the bed...deepak tell ravi some relevant information and after sometime both drift to sleep.

this part finish here...this is just beginning

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KUCH TOH HAY TUJH SAY RAABTA PART 2

It's morning when ravi finish his morning chores and comes out...follow Deepak...both get inside the same room...when previously night they met that khan...he is waiting them to join on breakfast...they all having breakfast...after that ravi goes out with Deepak...looking area...

This is a very big drug dealer adda...very famous...he never catches by police...always easily slip from their grip...today, here is arranging very big meeting...many big name comes...whole area guided with guards...who is guarding actively...people surveillance in this area very accurately...many whole lamb roasting on coals...food preparation in process...area fill with mouth watering aroma.

It's about evening when guest start coming...ravi go with Deepak...to attend that meeting...first khan make excuse but Deepak calm him and he allow ravi to sit with them quietly...after all he is going to join his group soon...after some security check.

Ravi see there is only fifteen peoples comes...one man look like is the leader...who have very tall...and his face has one dagger mark...which give his handsome face ugly look...he sit on a separate chair and speak rudely...in loudly and in human way...two girls dancing erotically...in very short dress...all man touching them...hugging those girls...girls are enjoying and invite them to go more wild...even food have been serve but those girl roaming around...man drooling on them...after finishing dinner...all enjoying hot drink when khan tell that man about that girl.

Leader stand in his place with excitement and ask khan to bring that girl here...khan signal to one his man...he shake his head and go out...while leader walk to and fro in whole room...15 minutes pass when that man enter with other two man...and one girl...

The girl hide her face with black scarf...only her beautiful big...black doe shape eyes visible...she is wearing long lose red shirt...with black jeans...her head and face cover with black scarf but when she move forward ravi see her long black silky hair in braid...most amazing part is her hand...which is capture in handcuff...and one chain attached with that cuff...who hold by one of man.

These groups of people...comes and stop in front of leader...that girl eyes travel on everyone...stuck for a while on ravi then move...but in those moment ravi feel she is seen him through...what a beautiful eyes they have? But he also feels some glimpse of hesitation...like she tries to recognise him...her eyes look familiar him as well...and he become confuse.

Leader: hhhmmm...toh tum logo nay iss sherni ko qabo kar liya (he is happy) magar iss ka muh kyun hide kiya hay.

Girl: inhoon nay nahi bulkay yeh muh main nay khud chuppaya hay (her voice is sweet and beautiful)

Leader: tum nay magar kyun? (His surprise)

Girl: woh kiya hayna...may nahi chahti kay tum jaissay namardo ki gandi nazrain meray chehray ko ganda karain (she said with loud...her sharp reply silent everyone)

Leader: kiya bakwas hay...hum tujhay na mard lagtay hain (he become fierce)

Girl: ziyaada josh may anay ki zarrorat nahi hay...pocho apnay adami say kay uss nay mujhay kaisay pakra hay...dhokay say...aray mard hotay to mardo ki tarah pakartay...yeh buzdiloon ki tarah peechay say war karkay...pakarany main koi mardangi hay kiya (she explain him)

Leader asks khan all detail...and he tell him with lower eyes...leader become fierce and start scolding on his man...just stopping by that girl.

Girl: choro ab...woh qissa to purana ho gaya...agar itna hi apnay mard honay par yaqeen hay...toh yeh haath kholo...itnay saaray mardoo kay hootay huay to may kahi nahi jaa sakti... zaid khan (she play safe...make him confuse say his name)

Leader: tum ko mera naam kaisay pata... (He is shock and stuck...but in other hand he signal man to open her hand)

Girl rubbing her both hand...after free for handcuff and said: zaid khan...pathan ka chota bhai... (Her talk give shock to ravi...he change his side with restless) kaho toh tumhari puri janam kundali bata doon...maa, baap...behan bhai...ya phir woh jiss say tum kartay ho piyar. (she give him nearly heart attack) waissay mujhay yeh nahi pata kay woh (she clear) tumhara bhai pathan pakra kaisay gaya...kiya tum batana pasad karo gay. ...meri knowledge may izafay kay liyay... (She flattered her eyes innocently)

Leader: haan...sab uss kay bewakoof admiyun ki wajah say...na woh ragahu ki baiti sheen ko uthatay...aur na woh ACP Arjun humaray peechay parta...uss ki hi wajah say...he stop looking that girl...

who hold her head and repeat...ACP ARJUN...ACP ARJUN...her heart beat fast...and she shake her head to gather her senses...her condition give shock to everyone...specially ravi...his eyes completely glue on her...

here I update part two

please let me know you like or not

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rehana25

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome starting.
Yeh Ravi hi Arjun hai na?
Aur yeh Sherni hai Sakshi.
But why is she behaving like this?
Plz con soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awrsomr
Who is that girl ????
Sakshi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing
i think the girl is sakshi but who is ravi
waiting for ur next update eagerly😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome and interesting start
the girl ch and talks were wonderfully depicted
and loved her daring talk with Khan
guess this sherni is Sakshi
but what about Ravi??
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
want to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwssmmm start
loved it
very interesting
cont sooon
thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting very interesting ...👍🏼... sakshi ya aisha kon he ye ? aur ladkaa sameer ya arjun ???????????😲... continue soon👏
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Awesome start...
👏👏👏
I guess girl is Sakshi & Ravi is Arjun...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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