Season2 Ajnabi:-Ehsaas of love update 26 /27 pg - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Aks13

Iska no. kab ayega...??????

Mera Shona read ur pm
Will update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
awsome teaser
whn will u updt
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
You said u will give update of this one...so whr is the update...??????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Thanx so much with lot of love ...and wait for part one hope u will enjoy

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Part -1
The atmosphere of ETF 's office very tense .All members of ETF busy in their tasks ..their faces have tention's lines ...One handsome cop sit on chair and gazing on papers ...one boy who have curly hair doing work in his laptop ..one macular man busy in phone to get the information ...one man who lost in his thoughts broke the silence

Person :- teams ...reports teyar Karo... Or case ko self defense case banao...

Curly hair boy spoke ..

Boy :- rathod sir vo meray document teyar hai...aap k sigh chahea

Rathod nodded and took papers and read it and sign the papers ...

Rathod :- Arjun tumy kitni baar kaha hai tum apnay gussay per kabo rakha Karo ...but damittt...tumara gussa to ik daaud(milk ) ki Tara fat jatta hai ...jhat Mai ...

Arjun :- Sam tum kehna kya chahtay ..ki Mai uski chup - chap sunta jatta ...jab us nay apna muh khula us chez k lea Jo mujhay bardash nahi Huye to mere gun nay jawab diya

Flashback
ETF team rate on one place where some goons smuggling and sold the girls ..there was big fighting between both teams ...but our ETF tackled them after fighting ...they arrested person and take with him in office

IN Office

Arjun and sameer are with criminal to interrogate him

Sameer :- ager tum bachna chahtay ho ...ya apni saza ko kam kerna chahatay ho ...to puri information humay dedo...

Person :- kya sir..!!!... Mai shareef ho ...aap kis baray Mai baat ker Rhay ho ...mujhay to kush samjh nahi aa rha hai...

Sameer punch him hard .abhi yaad aya ...Person laugh ..

Person :- raghav ho Mai...sach mai aap kis baray mai baat ke rhay hai mujhay nahi pata ...

Sameer slap him

Sameer :- salay firing ker rhay to humray sath Diwali samjh mna Rhay they...

Raghav :- vo ...sahab aap apun ko itna mat maro...verna aapk ...Jo uper baitha hai na usko kya jawab dongay ...

Sameer glare him ..Arjun control himself ...raghav again continue

Ragav :- vaisay sahab ...aap nay mere behen k sath shadi ki hai Jo baar baar sala ker Rhay hai ...

Sameer punch him ...

Ragav :- sahab yeh maar peet aap k lea mehge padhege ..kya fayda aapki high authority aapka transfer ker dey ya mera Bhae aapko kutto ki Tara maray...

Arjun stand up and shot ...

...!!!!!shoot ...!!!!!!
Ragav scream but after some time realize there is no pain his body ..and saw Arjun shot himself .sameer also notice sameer went to close him

Sameer :- Arjun

Ragav :- yeh kya sahab ...

Arjun just throw his gun to Ragav and Ragav held Arjun's gun ...When Arjun saw raghav held properly his gun and he took pistol from Sam and shoot him ...he died ...

Sameer :- Arjun yeh kya ...

Arjun :- yeh kissi k kaam ka nahi tha Sam na usk na hmray ...q baifazul time ko waist kerna ...

Sameer :- but yeh interrogate k waqt Mara hai ...

Arjun :- selfdefence k case Mai Sam


Flashback end

Sameer and Arjun glare to each other ..the atmosphere is very thick ...

Sameer :- but iska matlab yeh nahi hi ki tum protocol ko brk Karo

Arjun :- ok mai manta ho mainai protocol ko brk kiya ...but Sam yeh. Aisa kab tak chalta rehga ...Mai thak chuka ho...hum apni Jaan ko dao per laga ker un criminals ko pakrhtay hai ...but yeh so called high authority un logo bina kush Kia azad ker vatte hai...

Sam:- Arjun i understand u...mujhay pata tum sahi ho...but

Before Sam complete his sentence girl Interrupt him

Girl:- but ka kya matlab hai Sam ...hum yaha Pagal hai... Apni life ko khtaray Mai Dalay or baad Mai sorry keh ker us do korhi k criminal ko chod dey...

Sam :- Ayesha or tum kya chahti Mai protocol toddo ...mujhay bhi jawab dena hotta hai...ager mery bas Mai hotta to Mai... Kush kerta ...meray pass authority nahi hai...

Arjun :- or jis k pass authority hai ...vo un kutto k agay bikay huya hai...vo in kutto ko roti phektay hai...or yeh sab unk gulami k lea dhuray jattay hai...

Sam :- Mai samjh sakta ho Arjun...but yeh authority kon dega...

Voice :- Mai donga

All turn to owner of voice and saw middle aged man ...He is DIG MR. Sunil Sigh Shekhawat...

Sameer :- sir aap ...

SS:- ha Mai ...Mai aapko authority donga ...

Arjun :- but sir apko bhi high authority ko jawab dena padhega ...?...

SS:- dena padhega ager tum logo nay official kam kiya to ...

All are confused with his statement ...all did not understand what is running in his mind ...and what does he want to say Sameer ask

Sam:- Sir aapki baat ko hum samjhay nahi ...

Shree to Chuto :- ik sys kam tha ki sir bhi aab Humary sath pehli khelnay aye hai ...

Ayesha glare to him and Shree shut his mouth ...

SS:- baat yeh hai tum log india k best officers Mai ginnay jattay ho...Sameer tumari team ka coordination to wonderful hai ...Humary department iski misal de jatte hai ...

Sameer felt proud when he heard the words for his team

SS:- to tum log sabhi is gadge ko saaf kerna chahtay ho...ager is Tara saaf karogay...to high aithority aka us kotto k Vajay sai Jo criminals k Hatho bik chukay hai ...vo tum logo ko ya to transfer ker dengay ya for mar ker shaaheed bhi nahi honay dengay ...deshdroh ka ilzam laga ker kalank ka tikka tum logo k mathay Mai laga degany ...

All members 's blood boil after heard his words ...but they r true somewhere ...

Arjun :- to sir aap hmari manbori ko batanay aye hai ,,,,,,,,Jo humay oat hai ...

SS went to him and kept his hand on his shoulder

SS:- relax Arjun ...mera yaha per aa ker tum logo k jhakmo ko khudenay ka man nahi hai ...

Sam:- to sir aap sidhay sai point per ayea...

SS:- ok to Mai chahta ho ..ki tum sab etf holidays per jao

All:- what ...!!!!!...

SS:- puri baat to Sunlo ...tum logo ki nazro Mai vacation Mai hongay ...but real Mai tum log undercover Mai apni identity ko hide ker k yaha desh ki gandgi ko saaf ker Rhay hongay ...sab authority Mai dungarees tum logo...Jo jan kari chahea Mai dunga tumko...but kisse ko arrest nahi kerna ...

All rase their eyebrow

SS:- sidha """"ENCOUNTER"""""...na arrest ka chakkker ...na jail ka chakkker ...na court ka ...vahe per faisla vo bhi last ."Death"...

Sam :- but hum information kaisay lengay...

SS:- sameer tum bhul Rhay ho ...tumaray pass ETF Technical head ."MR.Shreekant Sen" hai jis nay commissioner ki I'd ko bhi hack kiya

He wink on Shree ,,,,and all members 's mouths touch the ground ...and saw Shree with wide eyes

Shree;- vo mujhay apny budget k baray Mai Janna tha ...

SS:- or informer to Chotu or Ayesha k pass bhut hai ...


Precap :- what will happen when they become ajnabi ...


Excuse from any error
Love
Mish
Edited by Mishti_k5 - 11 years ago
mishree thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
😃

Originally posted by: Aks13

You said u will give update of this one...so whr is the update...??????


I update 😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
awesom awesom awesome!!
Love it
Such a great update!
Continue soon
and thanks for the pm
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
superb dear.. Love it.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
interesting concept...
superb update...
eagerly waiting for all of them to become ajnabi...
continue soon!!!!!!
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Awesome update
Loved it
Interesting concept
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

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