NEW SS: When you care, you stand to lose. NEW IMPORTANT NOTE.PG42.

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

first well come back dear🥳

it's awesome prologue

i'm die hard fan of ariya

looking forward for this story👍🏼

plz continue

but plz plz I want the fading butterfly update

there is some part in ur blog that I couldn't read 😭

plz help me I want to read all ur update plz that's story also continue

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kurkuresandwich

@kurkuresandwich

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

wow awsm concept sumthing new ariya story ☺️ eagerly waiting for it plz continue soon... can't wait to see riya's reaction ... plz pm me ... the next update...

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Whoah...
Finally,u r back...
Missed you these days.
Well,its an awesome update.
Prologue is very intriguing...
I am liking it.
Do continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.

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Pinky pan

@piupan

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

oh god finally ur here i really got angry on u for not rlyng to my pms Bt thnk god atleast u came back n dat to wid a new story luvd d concept its amazng means a 33 yr old guy falling in luv wid a 16 yr old girl n wht obstacles dey'll face is lyk smthng unique dat i hvnt read yet...so superb exicted to read it n plz cnt ur other stories too m dying to read dem plz n thnkew for d pm dear

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

Trailblazer

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: MastiMuskaan

Thanks...i lovee ur aryan shaina sig...😃

thanks. Credit goes to moumimon

BTW. Unresing on pg 1 😃

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Barunsanaya10

@Barunsanaya10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Hey finally u r back ...
It ws really a quite different concept...
Jus v8ing to see ariya's first meeting ...
Don knw I have feeling Riya will turn Arjun's Lyf upside down ...
V8ing to read more ...
Thnku for pm n plz continue ur previous work v8ing to read dat as we'll :)

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Maya

@Harshamara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Cont asap.
And plz plz pm me.

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

at first let me say that im really happy to hear from you again and this with a new ariya story

the story looks really interesting the prologue was just great,
so riya is just 16??? himm this will be now more interesting, im waiting with excitement

thanks for pm

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Live-life

@Live-life

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Wow!!!!! I was like falling asleep with my eyes open and then I scroll down to find this post

and I am just like whaaattt?????😲😲

I mean after like a bazillion years!!! Like what even😆 and now I am wide awake!!

But seriously I missed you! No kidding in that! Pure emotion bro, pure emotion 😉 Just making sure I am not dreaming or anything *pinch myself* Ouch! 😛 (No offense meant okay this is just my trial and error method) 😛Ok this is definitely not a dream! no no no...

Well I am really really really really really really really really glad you are back dude! lIke I am not even kidding! SO coming to the story...are you ready for diss...😆

Wow!!!! The prologue sounds sooo interesting! I mean like It got me wide awake! like totally!!

Arjun Suryakant rawte!!! My lord! This man will be the death of me someday! Likw literally!!! Brrr...

I mean he knows he is right but then he just has to be all like intelligent and smart and make other people feel jelous *pointing at myself* Like what even...

No...He is really smart and handsome and sexy and the most intelligent person I have ever seen I just love the way he talks with Rathore...man! And poor Rathore knows he is fighting for a lost cause he knows Arjun is always right in terms of solving cases! *Dramatic sigh*

But both of them are like awesome! No doubt! for sure! Huh I love them!! ❤️

And when Arjun found out that he is going to be a "guardian" god I was ROFLING on his reaction 🤣 hUH...Doesn't he sound excited about this...totally!!! I mean 😆

I mean how hard is it to be a guardian for a 16-yeaar-old child! hahahah! Very hard..well he doesn't know that yet but it is very hard!!! I mean it! 😈

Goshhh!

Didn't know Arjun who chases criminals everyday is nervous around girls! Like...Lolzzz!

but it's really cute! 😳 I love his nervousness makes him sound more hottt!!!

hahaha!

Update soon bro!!!! mE IS waiting eagerly...and merci for the PM!!!!

Continue soon!!! and oh a welcome back Hug! 🤗

LOve u!

😃

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

After a long time welcome back to AF
Awesome prologue
Arjun is 33 still bachelor riya is 16 school student
Aww poor riya lost her parents in that blast
Omg arjun is her guardian
Sam's mv about com sir's comment lol it was funny
Me too wondering whom he pitied for lol
Looking forward for the story line & ariya bonding
It's very interesting
Cont soon