Arjun OS:See my Heart Sings as I See Your eyes! - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
very nice ...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Wow! Awesome Replies Dears!

Thanks! Thanks! Thanks!

Guys, here is the next part!

I've used some more 'lines' here too!

And the credits go to the creators!

See the heart sings them...

Here it starts singing...

See my heart sings as I see your eyes!


Right in front of my eyes

I disappeared into thin air

I became useless

Like an unseen star

I heard the sound of a heart tattering

Was this... Was this what I expected?

I'm asking for a rainfall

You are burning me full

I'm asking for a ray of light

You are depriving my eye sight

You've stopped my dreams in the middle

Will you let me continue somehow?

You've piled me on with this pang

Will you let me sleep now?

Someone laughed aloud and brought them back to the present.

"You haven't changed a bit yet!"

She accused him.

He was observing the crowd busily (?!)

He turned to face her then and graced her from top to toe.

"You mean you've changed a lot?" he commented.

She could feel the red rising from her cheeks.

"Don't change the subject!" she cut in.

"I don't!" She could not get that whether he was quibbling.

"You are still using the same cheap trick to talk to a girl? I can't believe this!"

She emphasized.

"It seems you are also using the same trick, missing something first, making someone to collect it for you then!"

He returned, sternly.

She saw the red rose in his hand.

It dug more events in both of them.

I can see the signs of a coming rain in my eyes

My heart too gets wet

What's this? Life or death?

I can see the times that we spent together

Panning out in my eyes

Why oh! Why are our paths

Moving away from each other?

I asked for beautiful moments

Who gave me tears instead?

I asked for magical rainbows

Who gave me pain in eyes instead?

Love is similar to torture

Cause it's burning alive!

He cleared his throat at last and said.

"Is this yours or shall I throw it away?"

He said it with an edge in his voice.

She would buy anything, no matter whether it belonged to her or not, if he was giving...

After all, she was throbbing in pain which he had given ...

She cut the thought curtly and extended a hand.

He looked the hand extended and did not know what, but it affected him strangely.

Why? They are the same beautiful, slender fingers, but something in them...

She adorned her hand with dark pink bangles which went beautifully with her pink Masakali. Surely it was not of the bangles, but still something...

Some teen crossed them and uttered casually, "Oh! It's getting late!"

She plucked the flower from him and went away.

Gathering the night, did he make her hair?

Using the moon rays, did he make her eyes?

Using stars, did he make her nails?

Using lightning, did he make her palm-lines?...

But dear! Did he make the heart out of stone?

He was sitting alone and numbly watching the stage events.

She was sitting alone with the flower in hand and was not sure what to do next.

It should have given him some pleasure at least, seeing her after this long, but what was disturbing him all along was unknown, even to him.

The bridegroom took the ring and adorned the bride's finger with it gaily. The bride shyly looked at the ring once and glanced at-

That's it! The ring!'

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Lovely Shakti beautiful
Song was lovely 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Beautiful...
Update soon nd thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Loved the mysterious approach to the story..👍🏼
Thanks for the pm..
Do update soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
very nice ❤️

I liked, the way this part ends.

The last para was awesome.

cont soon.😆



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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

The last part! Enjoy guys!

And i've to say a big 'THANK YOU' FOR every one of you, for YOUR wonderful replies!


See my heart sings as I see your eyes!

He found her talking to someone.

"I want to talk to you."

"I don't!"

'Why should I, after all?'

"If I insist?"

'Please leave me alone!'

"About what?" she asked laconically.

She was not ready for a talk about their past that instant!

Not after five years had passed slowly. In fact, it did not go slowly, but just was poking along!


"Just about the ring in your finger!"

He detonated the bomb then!

She looked her fingers in reflex.

'Oh, God! How could I forget it?'

Without further delay, she excused herself and moved to a corner.

"Can you tell me why you are keeping that cheap ring this long, if it is true that you hate me as you claim?"

He asked neatly.

Without any hesitation, she showed him her other finger, calmly.

"Don't you see the next finger? This one is my engagement ring!" She said proudly.

'Thank God! She could at least reply him something!'

"That's ok!"

'What?' She looked him startlingly.

He was smiling affably and looked her in the eye, sharply.

"My question is why you should keep my ring! Don't tell me, that just for old friendship's sake! I know, my relationship with you was not just a friendship!"

"It was not!"

"Give me mine and keep yours!"

"What's the use of it for you now?"

How could she, when it was the last thing that she could lose?

"Oh! Come on. There is no escaping the truth! You can't cheat two men at a time!"

Her eyes flashed beautifully!

'Dear God! I shall pull off anything in the world just to see this, forever!'

"Do you still love me?"

He asked suddenly.

Still there was no answer from her, but he saw a trace of tear in her eyes.

"Wipe the tears, before someone sees!"

He muttered.

She wiped them gently and looked him.

'Why?'

He was not there. She searched the crowd and found him moving away from her yet again.

You are the light at a long distance
You are pulling me just towards you

Melting at the thought of you again and again...

What I will do with the heart that is longing for you...

She ran after him and called him.

"I-"

Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder. She turned to see her friend Madura.

"Not again!" Madura cried out as she saw who was speaking with her friend.

"Not again." He assured Madura.

"Madhu! Please, no!-" She tried to stop her friend, but Madhura ignored her.

"It seems you still have the charm to make a girl supporting you, even when once you tore her heart away!"

Madhura commented.

"Yes! I do, If that girl came back to me to sew my heart which she tore away once!"

He draped an arm around her shoulders as she smiled at them.


"Dear flower say a word!"
A request from the fragrance wind


Even after a breeze came to bite the ears
Why is this silence dear?

If I come running to you and kiss

Will this silence go away?


If eyes are words,

What's the need for language dear?

While the four eyes met

There is no need for our mother tongue

Like the song sung by silence

Nothing is comfortable to the heart

Burning flowers is not good

Breaking silence is not correct

Without hearing the sounds of silence

Understanding words is not an easy task

That what is in a girl,
Is not known to a girl!

Until a man's hands touch,
The need won't surface!


Wow! What this girl said

Is not even in a poetry

Oh, not even a poet is like

The fellow in love

No lotus will blossom in night

No lily will open in daylight

That, when will a heart- flower blossom

There is none to say till now...

( Female)

"Excuse me!"

A new voice said and a figure appeared.

"Shyam! This is my friend!"

He introduced his friend them.

But she looked puzzled.

"Why, I? - Madhu!"

"Yes, he is my boy friend and it's our plan too!" Madhura announced, and "I thought you were again fighting when you walked away from her!"

"And I assured her, that it was your another trick to get people back!" Shyam continued.

He looked at her hastily and relieved to see her smiling face.

"And you guessed it right, my dear friend!" He finished and laughed.

- The End-


Thanks,

saKthi.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Beautiful dear Amazing shakti
Loved the END
Beautiful song
Thanks for the Pm
Loved it 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Beautiful dear Amazing shakti

Loved the END
Beautiful song
Thanks for the Pm
Loved it 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Awsumm Dear! Loved It! Thanxx fr pm..

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