~Kidnapping Case of Amrita~OS

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~Kidnapping Case of Amrita~
Sorry i know it sounds so stupid.Last night i wrote ths OS in my phn.Pls guys after reading it,dnt kill me.Its for my Delhi Vali GF AMMU Darling.Luv u Darling.Sorry i hv sent u in hospital in the end.But always pray fr u,tujhe ye din phirse kabhi na dekhni pade..



Thursday night,11:30PM
Amrita Malhotra(born n brought up in Kolkata,now hv joined EFT as 2nd officr) entered in her house.It was a hectic day,she was exhausted.It was dark every where.Suddenly she dashed against a table."offhhoo...ye table bhi na.main roz isse takrati hu."She moved to On the light.But as she moved sm1 forcefully covered her face.She didnt gt any to protect her.
On the other side; Arjun just reached to his house.Some1 was calling on his.Arjun picked it up. "Hallo...ACP Rawte.Ek bohot budi khabar dene k liye phn kiya apko." (Arjun gt concious) "Kya hai k abhi abhi ek khubsurat ETF vali ko mehman banake laye hai hum." Arjun:what d hell r u tlking about?kaun ho tum?
Caller:Aree aree Rawte ji..gussa kyun kar rahe hai?pahele naam to suniye..Amrita ji ko laye hai hum
Arjun(Jaws bcm strng): What??kya chahte ho tum?
Caller:Itni jaldi bhi kya hai..thoda intezar kijiye humare agle call k.
Arjun quickly calld Shree."Shree puri team ko leke jaldi offc pohocho.its an emergncy."
Shree(in mind-kya musibat hai yaar):ok sir.
Aftr 1/2n hour;ETF offc.
Arjun:Guys Amrita has bn kidnapped.Shree mere mobile call lst se last no.ko trace karo.nd i need d result as soon as possible.
Ayesha:but sir Amrita ko kaun kidnap kar sakta hai?
Chhotu(worried):ETF valo k dushmano ki kami to nahi hai na.
Shree to Arjun:Sir iss no.ka to kuch pata hi nahi chal raha.ajeeb no. hai.
Arjun(banged on table):kya kuch pata nahi chal raha hai.Yaha Amrita ka kuch pata nahi hai.aur tum...Ayesha-chhotu go to Amrita's house.dekho kuch pata chalta hai kya wahase
Shree:sir Amrita ki last position accrding to her phn,usika ghar hai.next no trace.its swtchd off.
Ayesha n Chhotu (aftr 15mins)reached to Amrita's house.They searched every cornr,bt got no valid point & infrmed it to Arjun.
Arjun was getting puzzeled.He also had no idea.Afrer a while,one office staff came,"Sir,ye envelop kisine reception pe chhod k gaya tha."
Arjun opened it nd there was a DVD,"Shree play it."
Blank dark screen. Nxt Amrita's face,tied wth a cloth.She was not in sense.Arjun jumped up frm his chair,he was xcited.All team members were in shock.Arjun ordered Shree,"zoom the screen.kahi pe bhi ek kuch chhutni nahi chahiye."After sometym,they all were fade up.
Shree: Sir kuch bhi to nahi hai.Bas dekh k lag raha hai k kisi abandoned room hai.Ise aise alag se dhund pana to impossible hai.
Arjun:Nothng is impossible.we hv to save her.N I will do that.Shree tum jaldi se mere phn ko tap karo.kabhi bhi kidnappr ka call aasakta hai.
Shree:ok sir.bas 2mins.
At thant moment,kidnppr called him.Arjun:Shree?
Shree:phn utha lijiye sir.bas ho gaya
Caller:Dvd to mil hi gaya hoga Acp sir.kaisa laga chotasa trailr?
Arjun: shut up.Apni mange batao.(looked at Shree wth a questn,no. trace hua k nahi)
Caller:ohhooho..Acp sir,ap to bohot smrt hai,sidha mudde pe aagaye.To suniye aap janna chahte hai na main kaun hu?5saal pahele ki baat yaad hai?Mumbai blast,aap hi k wajahse mujhe jail jana pada tha.
Arjun: Anna!!!
Caller: Haan Anna.aab suniye agar ap is khubsurat ladki ko sahi salamat vapas chahte hai to kal sham tak mujhe india k bahar bhejne ki intezam kar dijiye.Varna jawan khubsurat ladki mere samne hai,main zyada der tak khudko rok nahi paunga.
Arjun(burst in anger): Heeyy...tum kuch bhi nahi karoge.Just stay away frm her.Mujhe Amrita se baat karao.
Giving a devil laugh"nxt call k liye wait kijiye."
Arjun:Call trace hua k nahi
Shree:no sir,ye ek satellite no. hai
Ayesha:Demand kya hai sir?
Arjun:Anna.kal sham tak besh k bahar bhejna hoga ise.Sab apni apni sources ko kam me lagao.i want news.Jaldi..
Commisioner calld Arjun"whats ths Arjun?ETF k 1offcr ko kidnp kar liya gaya hai.kar kya rahe ho tum sab?"
Arjun: I knw sir.hum dekh rahe hai.bas sir aap ye dekhiye media ko zyada kuch pata na chale.baki hum sab sambhal lenge
Next mrng 7Am.A call on Arjun's phn
Anna:Lijiye baat kijiye
Arjun:Amrita r u ok?
Amrita:yes sir.
Arjun:kuch bata sakte ho?
Amrita:kali mandir-Khub bhir jayga-ghotar awaj Kichukhon por samudrer awaj-pakhir dak
Anna:kya bakwas kar rahi hai?suniye Arjun babu sham tak sab ho jana chahiye (& cut the call)
Arjun was surprisd.He was unable to undrstnd anythng."Shree call recrd ho gaya?play it.May b Amrita tried to say smthng."
Shree(played it):Aree sir ye to bengali hai.Kali madir-bhir vali jagah-ghante ki awaz-thodi der bad samandar ki awaz-panchion k sound.iss sabko jodke kuch ban sakta hai
Arjun(smiled): hmm good job.She did her job vry well.now its our turn.lets do guys.quick
Chhotu:Aisi bhir vali jageh me Kali mandir to Mud jane vali raste me hai
Ayesha: Amrita ki kahi hui hints se woh jagah Mud lag raha hai
Arjun: we dnt hv much tym guys.lets go
After more than 3hours they reached at an abondoned factory.Arjun stoped the car "guys is jagah Amrita ki hints se bilkul match ho raha hai.i thnk we should search ths factory"
He divided them in diffrnt team.Entered in tht factory.Slowly bt in strng steps Arjun reached tht floor.There was an odd silence,Arjun was confused,is he wrong?Amrita is not here?He reached infront of a closed door.Wait fr a while,at tht moment he heard sm gun shots.Without wasting a second he banged on the door.Amrita was on the floor,the room was full of poisonous gas.2guards attacked Arjun,he directly shot them.Others team member also reached there,chhotu brought Anna wth him.Arjun quickly reached to Amrita.He lifted her in his arms and gt back frm tht room.Lightly slapped on her face"Amrita..Amrita..Open ur eyes." "Ayesha,call ambulance quick"
Arjun untied all the ropes.& lifted her again in his arms and ran towrds the car.He drove the car almst lk rocket.Aftr reaching in hospitl Arjun arranged everythng n admit Amrita.Ayesha n Shree also reached there,"Sir aap jaiye hum dono rahete hai na yaha."
Arjun:Nahi tum ghar jao,main thik hu yaha
Shree:Sir aap pichle ek week se ghar nahi gaye.aap chale jaiye.
Arjun(strongly):Kahana ekbar
Ayesha(in a low voice):Sir Amrita k liye kuch zyada hi protective hai,chal hum chalte hai.Sir agar kisi chiz ki zarurat ho to pls call us
They both left frm there.
Arjun reached to the cabin door.Amrita was lying inside.
Doc:Sir abhi hum kuch nahu kahe sakte,bohot zyada matra me zaherili gas lungs me jane k wajah se condition kuch thik nahi hai
Arjun: u hv to save her doctr.U hv to.I dnt wanna knw anythng
Doc:We r trying our bst.Aab bas bhagvan pe bharosa rakhiye.Pray fr her
Arjun almst ruined.After Roshni he nvr stnds b4 god.He couldnt thnk anythng.Aftr a long hour he stood up bt hesitate to stnd b4 god.But he went just only fr Amrita.(strng face;thinking in his mind)Roshni tld him"ekdin aisa aega jab Acp Rawte tum bhi bhagvan k pas aaoge"May b today is the day.He was praying fr her,"Kabhi bhi aappe viswas nahu tha mera,kuch bhi nahi manga apse.par mang raha hu.Roshni k baad ekbar aur kisiko khone ki takat nahi hai mujhme"His eyes bcm wet.Suddenly there was a announcemnt fr him.Arjun ran to Amrita's cabin.Doc: kaha the aap?its a miracle.Amrita is in her sense now.We all lose our hope.But its really happened.She was calling by ur name
Arjun:Can i pls meet wth her?
Doc:yes u can.bt no more xcitemnt pls.its harmfull fr her
Arjun:ok doctr
Arjun pushed the door n entered in the cabin.Amrita was lying there,closing her eyes.Arjun sat beside her bed n kept his hand on her forehead.Slowly she opened her eyes & tried to say smthng.Bt Arjun stopped her by keeping a fingr on her lips"kuch kahene ki zarurat nahi hai"
Amrita(in a weak voice):Sir mere wajahse aapko bohot taqlife uthani pari na?Sorry sir.
Arjun:shhh...aur ek wrd bhi kaha na
Amrita:but sir..
Arjun:I got to knw tht u called me by my name
Amrita:Sorry sir.may b i was unconcious thn
Arjun:Call me again
Amrita:Sorry sir..phirse nahi hoga
Arjun stood up n ready to leave(in a little anger)
Amrita suddenly held his hand and called him"Arjun.Pls stop Arjun.dnt leave me"
Arjun turned back,having a smile on his face & sat down."I'll not leave u.never."He held her hand and placed a sft kiss.Amrita invited him fr a hug.He hugged her gentely and kissed her forehead.
Amrita:Dar gaye the?Mujhe kuch ho jata to kya hota?
Arjun:Nahi mar gaya tha.mere hote hue tumhe kuch nahi hoga.Am here,aab pls so jao.
He kissed her forehead and held her hand.
After 3weeks Amrita joined back in ETF.She is totally fine now.These 3wks Arjun was her guardian,he looked after her all d time.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear this is the bestest gift I have got ever..
A story on Arjun n me..
Arjun's smile...
His love...
Thank you so much...
Ek baar thanks bolne de...
Writing the full story in mobile..ur hand pain..
Today is the day may be when team Arjun is shooting for the last time..
Mood is so off...
But this is balancing that pain...
Its more 10 times now since the morning, I have read this story...
Crying n crying. ..
Tissue de..nahi nahi bucket de..
What more I can want..
I call Arjun my love and my God...
I want his happiness. ..
His worries for his team mates..
His planning. ..
His investigations..
Reaching her...
Actions..
Then lifting her in arms...
Staying by her..
Praying to God..
His tears...
Holding hand..
Fake anger..
Kissing palm and forehead..
Caring pat to sleep..
Caring for three weeks...
Wow...and all for me???
Suki I am dancing almost...
Awesome OS...
Love you so much..


Edited by Amritamalhotra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hayeee kya os hai sukku
ammu toh flat hogai
neend se jagana padega.
kiss hug gai wooh kam se.
it is super awesome os.
finllay ammu ke khawaish puri hue etf mein jake arjun se milke.
love u for writing this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow MB..beautifully written! Amazing os..it ws wonderful !!!!! Ammu ki toh nikal padi 😉 good work !!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wooowww yaar... Nice OS... Ammu tu sahi salamat to hai na...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsumm Suku!! Oye Hoye Ammmu!!! Kudiye teri toh nikal padi...😆 Hugg Kiss!! Baba re..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sukkku... Kya dhasu aur romantic OS likkha hai tune... Loved it... Aaye haaye... Meri Ammu toh khushi ke maare naach rahi hogi.. Blush bhi bohut zyada kar rai hogi... Hmmm... Lovely OS.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkerbell

hayeee kya os hai sukku

ammu toh flat hogai
neend se jagana padega.
kiss hug gai wooh kam se.
it is super awesome os.
finllay ammu ke khawaish puri hue etf mein jake arjun se milke.
love u for writing this...



Baby...mai mar gayi...nhi zinda hun..
Per pagal ho gayi...
Finally Arjun is mine...
Yippeee..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: naz_2012

wow MB..beautifully written! Amazing os..it ws wonderful !!!!! Ammu ki toh nikal padi 😉 good work !!! 😊



Nikal padhi..
I am on cloud 9...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rituhooda

Wooowww yaar... Nice OS... Ammu tu sahi salamat to hai na...



Nahi..bilkul tut ke bikhar gayi hun..
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