~SHUDH DESI ROMANCE~ MY NEW SHARIYA SS Part 7 (UPDATED) on pg17 - Page 7

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SHUDH DESI ROMANCE
Part 4

At Night, Bachelor Party

Riya was wearing orange n yellow backless lahenga-choli. Shaa n Karan was wearing traditional patiyala with kurta. There was dimmed light in the room, Shaa turned back n looked Riya with her friends, entering in the room. He was stunned to look Riya. Karan also watched that Shaa was watching Riya. He came to him and said, "Beautiful.."

Shaa: Hmm... So Beautiful.. (and quickly got his sense that Karan was provoking him to think about Riya) Tujhe to har ladki beautiful hi lagti hai

Party was started about 9PM. Sanjiv declared, "Guys humare bich ek talented singer maujud hai. Main chahta hu k meri bachelor party usi k performance se suru ho. (turned to Shaa) Dekh bhai aaj mana mat karna."

Shaa (devilish smile): Ok.. Aaj raat to teri azaadi ki aankhri raat hai.. Aaj raat jot u kahe

Shaa went out to bring his guitar. After Shaa's performance, Bachelor party was on hike. It was the time for group n duet performance. But Riya had no partner yet.

Karan: Bhai bechari Riya kya akeli dance karegi ? Itni khubsurat ladki vo bhi akeli... mujhe jana chahiye.

Shaa: Nahi,har kisiko tere sahare ki zarurat nahi hai.

Karan: Thik hai, to tu hi jana..

Riya's friend: Riya, now its your turn. But where is your partner?

Riya: Vo baetha hai, in black dress.

Riya's friend: Wooohh... kaun hai re ye? Mr.Hunk?

Riya: Shaleen, bhai ka dost hai. Mumbai se aaya hai

Riya's friend: Now go, we cant wait to see ur performance

Riya went to Shaa,placed her hand to him, "may I have the pleasure to dance with you?"

Shaa was surprised. Karan: haan bol de bhai.. come on Shera.. say Yes..

Shaa: Ok.. U have the pleasure

Shaa n Riya performed on, "Ore piya"(tere naal love ho gaya) n "Main rang sharbaton ka tu mithe ghat ka paani"(back to back). It was a very romantic performance. After ending their dance they were still standing, seeing in each other's eye...

Karan: Hey bhai.. gaana khatam ho gaya hai

After hearing his voice, they became conscious n separated very quickly. Everyone clapped for performance. Sanjiv: Aree yaar, tum dono to bilkul real couple lag rahe the.

Riya felt shy n ran out form the room. After some time, Shaa also went out. Riya was on terrace, standing alone.

Shaa: (gently) Riya...

Riya turned back.."Thanks Shaleen, thanks for the performance."

Shaa: Don't say thanks. It was my pleasure. Main zindegi mein kabhi bhi aisa kuch nahi kiya, jo main in do dino me kiya. Thanks for all these things.

Riya: Shruti k sath baat karoge?

Shaa: Shaam ko hi phone kiya tha

Riya: Phirse phone karo aur bolo oline aane k liye

Shaa(surprisingly): Yaha online? Mere pas laptop nahi hai

Riya: Tum bas bolo unhe aane k liye, aur ruko yaha mere liye

Shaa (still surprised) : ok..

After 4-5mins, Riya came there with a lappy. Shaa: Tum mere liye...

Riya: connect karo

Shruti was there,"hi bhaiya.."

Shaa: Hi princess

Shruti: aapke pas lappy kahase aaya?

Shaa: Vo actually meri ek dost ki lappy hai

Shruti (teasing him): Meri dost, u mean ladki?? Aap aur ladki se dosti..Naam kya hai bhaiya??

Riya was standing behind the laptop, Shaa looked at her. Shruti: Vo piche hai kya? Samne ane k liye boliye na plsss

Shaa: aa jao.. nahi to ye nahi chhodegi

Riya came n sat beside Shaa, "Hi shruti"..

Shruti: Halloo... Aapka naam kya hai?

Riya: Am Riya..

Shruti: Thank u, aapki vajah se main bhaiya k sath baat kar pa rahi hu.

Riya smiled at her. Shruti: Aap kafi pretty ho..

Riya: aap tu mujhse bhi zyada pretty ho. Apke bhai sahi kahete hai, aap sach me princess ho

Shaa: Aab thoda meri taraf bhi dekhle. Main bhi hu yaha

After some chit chat, Riya said bye to shruti n left both bro n sis alone. Shruti: Bhaiya.. Riya kafi achhi ladki hai

Shaa: Riya? Vo tujhse kafi badi hai

Shruti: Ok ok... Riya bhabhi.. sorry Riya didi.. Aapka khas dost hai? Kafi khayal rakhti hogi na?

Shaa: Shut up.. Good night.. so jaa. Aur kal mom ko sath me leke aana.

Shruti: huhhh..ok. par meri baat soch na.. I want a bhabhi like her

Shaa smiled and thought how it can be possible. He closed his eyes, all the time he saw Riya's face in his mind. Suddenly someone shook his shoulder, "Shaleen.. kaha kho gaye?"

He turned back, and saw Riya was behind him. He started at her at a glance.

Suddenly Karan called by Shaa's name. They got back their sense. Shaa felt awkard, and said "Thanks. Kal subah khet mein mil sakte hai?"

Riya(smiled): ok.. Good night

Shaa: Good night

Karan was standing beside the pillar and watched them. Riya just left, karan came out and start teasing Shaa,"wah bhai wah... bade chhupa rustam ho.. terrace pe akele romance kar rahe ho.. aur mere samne bade bhole bante phirte ho. Kal subah khet me.. uff I cant imagine.. Bhai tu itna romantic hai."

Shaa: Aisa kuch nahi hai

Karan: Now shut up shaa. Don't be a spoil sport. Atleast mujhse to jhut mat bol

Shaa knew this kind of behavior of Karan. Whenever Karan addressed him "Shaa", it means Karan really is in serious mood. " To kya karu?"

Karan: abbey saale.. Jake bol de use.. Aur der mat kar

Shaa: Bol du?

Karan: haan.. vo bhi kal subah jab romance karne jaega..

Shaa(feeling nervous) : ok.. But..

Karan: No but.. (Hugged him tightly... n suddenly kissed him)

Shaa: Chhi... kya kar raha hai

Karan: dekha chhi kaha na, age se ye sab jhelna na pade to kal subah jake Riya ko bol de


To be continued...

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Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

Kab karo ge arakshi update 😡



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