Ariya OS ~ One stolen moment

First Previous

Page

Frequent Posters

benaz

@benaz

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Hey wow it doesn't really show that you're new at writing. This was a mindblowing piece of work😊I was really searching for an Ariya work and thank you😊Totally liked the seductive Arjun and Riya she was simply too nice😃

Quote

Mehr03

@Mehr03

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Aks13
It's damn good yaar...!!!!!
Awesome, Mind blowing OS dr...!!!!!
Loved it a lot...!!!!!!
OMG Arjun was flirting with her...!!!!! He seemed vry much in senses...!!!! I think he did it all that on purpose...😉 but didn't like wht he did in the end with Riya...😡
Ariya moments were fab...!!!!
Hats off to u dr...!!!!!
Eager to read it's sequel...!!!!!!
Thanks for pm...

Thank you for your kind review...haha evil Arjun at the end. I like him like this. 😛

Edited by Mehr03 - 11 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Mehr03

@Mehr03

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Thank you all for all the replies and likes. I will work on the sequel soon. keep a look out for it 😊 Thank you all once again 😊

Quote

Shanafr

@Shanafr

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Awesome fab
Loveit
Plzzz cont soon

Quote

Mehr03

@Mehr03

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Thank you all for these precious reviews. I did say I would write a sequel for this OS but I am afraid you guys will have to wait for some time. After hearing the news that Arjun is going off -air, this has broken my muse and dedication to start or continue my fics. But I will try my level best to complete this one and maybe I will be motivated to start another Arjun fic.

Please continue to support our show Arjun. Please continue to love Shaleen Malhotra and the other actors portrayed in the ETF team. I have got to known many awesome people in this forum and all because of this show. Once again, thank you to all my readers who took their time to appreciate this fic of mine. Love you all 😳

Edited by Mehr03 - 11 years ago