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Posted: 11 years ago
unres on pg 43
Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor Abhi!! He totally stuck between the fighting Rawtes!!
Arjun...his lover boy image is really interesting..& Saakshi's always on fire is just outstanding!!

Loved Avhi-Arjun convo...& their diner date planning...loved Avhi's effort to bring them closer.

Do continue..& thanks for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sis I am sooo sorry... tonight bolke God knows kitne din se unres nahi ki!

First of all a big hug to you dear... really a big tight warm hug...

Toh first of all I am so happy that my writer sahiba is back! And that too my dearie you are back with a bang!!!

Toh sweetu kya soch ke likha ye - really itna acha hai that I was 😃😃😃 while reading it... chalo I will start my mini type of comment my dearest on this beautiful update...

So this update really made me smile, blush, laugh and sigh at many points... wow ... so many emotions evoked from a single passage - guess that is the magic on the tip of your fingers dearie!

Why do I see that a certain Arjun himself has turned into a teasing naughty lad for poor Abhi... I am so looking forward to a reprise of Araksi through AbhIka...

Waise I really liked the kategi waala part!!!

I want to officially salute Arjun!!! Date! That too with his raging wife Sakshi!!! May God bless his soul and may God bless America!

Finally Abhi spoke out what we have been trying to figure out for quite some while...

So my lovely sis what do you have in store?

A heart to heart conversation between our leads or another bollywood scene!

Would be looking forward to both the possible scenarios...

And I truly feel that Sakshi too carries a badge of being the reason for their estranged relationship...

Her mistake was that by just hearing something she came to conclusions rather than fighting it out or speaking out at that moment...

His mistake was that he never really sunk in the feeling of how important she is to him... he should have vocally confessed as well... maybe just sweet words are not enough at time...

I am really looking forward to the situation out here!

And did I so love the moment Arakshi had...

You really made the color of my cheeks change my sweetu sis!

Yeh kya kardia - ek non believer of love ko blush karwadiya tune!

haye! Mera kya hoga sis... I know kuch nahi - tu hai na!

Hehe Abhi - dhobi ka kutta na ghar ka na ghat ka!

Yaha Sakshi se dhulai waha Arjun se dhulai aur beech beech main Lati se dhulai... Bhukto Abhi beta... pehle toh apna Lati ko mana...

Then continue being the positive catalyst in Arakshi's relation...

I really want them to come back together...

Hope you'r fine dear...

A big hug my dearest...

Ur Sis...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I too love the story
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Its amazing ...
Continue it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

hello friends

happy janmastami to all

PS: i have not done any proof reading tho gramatical errors and spelling mistakes ho sakta hai


PART 9


" god ye abhi bi mujhe iss arjun ke saath fasa deta hai , ab pata nai ye kya drama karega " saakshi muttered angrily while adjusting her clothes

She went to the window and saw him from above " kya hua hai ? kya chal raha hai ? he doesn't love me tho aaj kal baar baar wo aisa kehta kyun hai? Kya mere jaane ke baad usse mera importance samjha ?" saakshi asked herself

" nai he is doing all this for suhaani , uski beti hai na , uske liye kar raha hai , clearly he told that day ki I mean nothing to him " saakshi told herself angrily and went out

" chalein ? ya tumhe aur time paas karna hai ?" she asked

***

" saakshi kuch bi lo but not this , ye tumhe bilkul suit nai karega " arjun said to a beautiful designer white saree

" kya mazaak kar rahe ho sir , aapki bivi itni sundhar hai aur aapko lagta hai ki ye saree inhe suit nai karega " the shopkeeper said

" arre main jaanta hoon na ki inpe kya acha lagta hai aur kya nahi , tum chup raho " arjun told the shopkeeper

" bhaiyaji , ye saree pack kardo " saakshi said

" sakshi but I said ..." Arjun started

" but what ? tum hote kaun ho mere liye kuch bi select karne ke liye , maine tumse koi expert advice nai maanga , tho free main kuch kaam mat karo " saakshi said

arjun smiled at the success of his plan , he knew she would buy the saree he doesnt like

" bhaiya kitna hua ?" saakshi asked

" 4500" the man said

" card chalega ?" saakshi asked

" nai mam , wo machine nai chal raha hai " the man said

Arjun removed the money and gave him

" ye kya kar rahe ho ?" saakshi asked angrily

" kya kar raha hoon main? " arjun asked

" arjun be in your limits , I am warning you " saakshi threatened

" trust me saakshi , I am in my limits , but you also be in your limits because the day you cross it I will kidnap you and my daughter and take you both with me aur tum ye jaanti ho main aisa kar sakta hoon " arjun threatened angrily

Saakshi was shocked

Arjun laughed suddenly " mazaak kar raha hoon , god look at your face , agar kidnap karna hi tha tho ab tak kar chukka hota " arjun laughed and walked out of the shop

Saakshi collected the saree and followed him

*****

They reached suhaani's school

Suhaani and shiv were walking and both were sad

" kya hua aap dono ko ?"saakshi asked

" kal sports day hai " suhaani said

" nai dumbo , kal parents day hai " shiv said

" haan parents sports day " suhaani said

" ye pakka tumhaari hi beti hai " arjun whispered to saakshi

" what do you mean ?" saakshi whispered back

" naye cheezein invent kar rahi hai , bil kul tumhaare jaise " arjun smiled

" tumhaari ek boori aadat hai suhaani main , wo savaal bohut karti hai " saakshi said

" haan tum joot bologi tho aisa hi hoga na , tell her ki I am her dad " arjun whispered

" arjun , I am warning you " saakshi whispered

" aap dono kya baat kar rahe ho ?" suhaani asked

" kuch nai beta " arjun said

" kuch nai , tho aap secret secret kyun bol rahe ho ?" suhaani asked arjun

" beta jab do bade bolte hain na tho chote kuch nai bolte " arjun said

" bade choton ke saamne kyun bolte hain ?" suhaani asked and saakshi laughed

" arre baba , aap tho bohut sawaal poochti hain " arjun said and lifted her up

" haan tho parents day ka kya ?" saakshi asked changing the topic

" both mumma and papa should participate in the games " shiv said

" mere papa tho KCP hain tho wo nai aa sakte aur shiv bhaiya ki mumma tho bhagwanji ke paas hain tho wo bi nai aa sakte na " suhaani said

" aap dono ko bhook lagi hogi na ?? tho kya khana hai pizza ya burger ?" arjun asked trying to change their mood

" pizza " both the kids said together

***

" friend , tum mere saath baito na " suhaani requested arjun

" suhaani , ye bade hain na , tho aap inhe tum kehkar bulaaogi ?" saakshi asked

" sorry mumma , friend aap mere saath baito na " suhaani requested again

" aap mujhe kuch bi bol lo " arjun said and sat beside her

" main poora pizza khaungi " suhaani said excitedly

" main bi " shiv said sitting beside saakshi

" acha baba " arjun said andsmiled at both the kids and gave the order

" tho kal kya karein suhaani ?" shiv asked

" mumma aap papa ko bulaao na , please " suhaani requested

Saakshi looked at arjun " baby , apko pata hai na papa busy hain , aur aap papa ki kya hain ?" saakshi asked

" princess " suhaani said

" right , aur papa ki princess kya karti hai ?" saakshi asked

" mumma ki baat sunti hai " suhaani answered sadly

" correct , aur ye raha , aapka pizza aa gaya " saakshi said to change the mood

Suhaani was struggling to hold the pizza

Arjun smiled and helped her

" ouch , friend garam hai " suhaani said

" sorry sorry , main aapko kilata hoon " arjun said and atarted blowing and he feeded suhaani

For the first time he got the opportunity to see his own daughter so closely

She was saakshi's Xerox copy except for the eyes , saakshi had big eyes and suhaani , she had small eyes just like him

Saakshi was noticing arjun and she smiled but immediately changed her smile into a frown

" bas hua " suhaani said

" par aap poora pizza khane waali thin a , ye ek piece bi aapne finish nai kia " arjun said

" wo friend , pet bhar gaya , aap khao na " suhaani said

" ok " arjun said and took a bite

" friend , kaisa laga " suhaani asked

" its yummy baby , aapne khaya tha na issliye " arjun said and kissed suhaani's forehead

" papa..." Shiv ran to abhi

" abhi , tum yahaan ?" saakshi asked

" haan saakshi , main suhaani aur shiv ke liye pizza lene aaya tha aur tum log yehin par ho " abhi answered

" papa , aap bhagwaanji ko request karo na ki wo meri mumma mujhe lauta de " shiv said

" beta , aapko mumma ki yaad aa rahi hai ?" abhi asked lifting shiv up

" papa , kal parents day hai " shiv said

" beta har saal ki tarah iss saal bi hum sab kahin ghumne jaayein ?" abhi asked

" no papa ... " shiv said

".we want our parents to participate and win " suhaani said

" suhaani , aap tho participate kar sakti hai , arj..."

" abhi ..." saakshi interrupted abhi

" anyways , we'll think ki kya karna hai , tum dono takh gaye honge , so lets go home " abhi said

" saakshi , arjun , tum log suhaani ko leke jao anr main shiv ko leke jaata hoon , saakshi don't be late for the meeting " abhi told saakshi and winked at arjun

***

" mumma , aap bohut beautiful lag rahi hain " suhaani said

" really baby ? thank you " saakshi said and kissed suhaani

" don't worry saakshi , I'll take care of suhaani " aisha said coming in

" ya " saakshi said without looking at aisha

" suhaani beta , aap mere liye ek glass paani layenge ?" aisha asked suhaani

" ok " suhaani said and ran to kitchen

" saakshi , I know maine tumhe ghalat samja , tumhse ghatal tarike se baat ki , I am sorry saakshi , please mujhe maaf karo " aisha asked turning saakshi towards her

" aisha koi bi mujhe aisa kehta tho mujhe bura nai lagta , par tumne mujhse aise baat kaise ki " saakshi asked

" saakshi tumhaare jaane ke baad maine arjun bhai ko sirf tadapte hue dekha hai , I don't know tum kyun chali gayi par main sirf itna jaanti hoon ki tum aur arjun bhai ek dusre se bohut pyaar karte hain " aisha said

" arjun ka pata nai , but I don't love him " saakshi said looking down

" saakshi kabhi arjun se nafrat nai kar sakti " aisha said

" aisha... main badal gayi , ab mere dil mein arjun ke liye kuch nai hai , meri beti ka khayal rakho " saakshi said and looked at her reflection for the last time

" tum mujhe maaf nai karogi ?" aisha asked

" nai ..." saakshi said


To be continued

i hope you all liked the update...

do comment and give me your feedbacks

Edited by magati - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res/unres...
unexpected and awesome update...
thanks a lot for update...
waiting for next one...
Edited by anu91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Arjun jo bhi kehta hai uska ulta karti hai Sakshi. Ab saree hi le lo. Smart Arjun apne pasand ki saree aakhir dilaayi di Sakshi ko

Suhaani and Shiv are so cute. Sakshi & Arjun arguing about Suhaani's nature whether she is like Arjun or Sakshi.

Abhi great yaar Arjun and Sakshi ko milaane ke liye kya kya nahi kar rahe ho tum

Sakshi bahut hurt hai Aisha ke baaton se. Vo abhi usse maaf karne ki haalat mein nahi hain.

Sakshi ab tho maaf kardo Arjun ko.😭😭😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
Owesome update.
arjun sakshi ko manane ke liye kya kuch nahi kar raha he.
sakshi not forgive arjun and aaisha. They both really love each other.
I hope sakshi ko ykin ho jaye arjun ke pyaar par.
or vo dono sath ho jaye.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Sakshi did opposite of What Arjun says...😆😆😆
Indirectly Arjun gave gift to Sakshi...😛😛😛
Shiv want his mom & Suhani wants her father...
Liked Arjun-Suhani moments...😃😃😃
Sakshi is not able to forgave Aisha...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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