ARNI OS : FOREVER ALONE - Page 6

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Sorry rimi abhi comment kar rahi hoon lamba wala

But I must say it was very beautifully written

Arjun with his family was awesome

His reaction as a loving husband n caring father was awesome

Roshni n her daughter portrayed beautifully

Loved the story line n framing

I had goose bums when I read the building scene

Arjun reaction was beautifully written

I really cried when I read the death of his daughter n wife

Then a sudden call n back to work was awesome

They way he pushed back to life amazing n beautiful

n special thanks to payal for making u write a master piece

Thanks dear loved to read this very emotional 😊

thank you so so much goldie...the concept was of payal i just framed it...hats off to her...kaha kaha se itna emotions and pain soch ke lati hai?? 😆😆

aur tum sorry kiyu bol rahi ho?? i knew you would comment now..😊

master piece??? ha ha ha ha...thank you thank you...

love you dear...🤗

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

thank you so so much goldie...the concept was of payal i just framed it...hats off to her...kaha kaha se itna emotions and pain soch ke lati hai?? 😆😆

aur tum sorry kiyu bol rahi ho?? i knew you would comment now..😊

master piece??? ha ha ha ha...thank you thank you...

love you dear...🤗

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

But t was beautiful dear

thank you so much...muahh

Mujhe yaad kiya 😉
me here
rimi di mere bhaiya ka dialogue mujh par hi 😆
well its a really masterpiece di..
n u know wat almost 99% Arni work dedicated to me..
though arni is less still ⭐️

ideas ka kya h..
likha to apne h.. 😛

u haven't read my joint stories 😳
read n do tell wat it was 😉

not praising myself
if u have time do read n comment pls 😭

ff wali galley ke pg 28 ya 29 me link h..
welcome krke
its weird i know.. 😛
do check ..

ps. u missed laila comment here i guess!

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Mujhe yaad kiya 😉
me here
rimi di mere bhaiya ka dialogue mujh par hi 😆
well its a really masterpiece di..
n u know wat almost 99% Arni work dedicated to me..
though arni is less still ⭐️

ideas ka kya h..
likha to apne h.. 😛

u haven't read my joint stories 😳
read n do tell wat it was 😉

not praising myself
if u have time do read n comment pls 😭

ff wali galley ke pg 28 ya 29 me link h..
welcome krke
its weird i know.. 😛
do check ..

ps. u missed laila comment here i guess!

ill check and read when i get time...😊😊...itne sare master pieces parne mein thora time lagega na 😛

bhaiya ka dialogue behen pe azma hi sakte hai na??😆

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

ill check and read when i get time...😊😊...itne sare master pieces parne mein thora time lagega na 😛

bhaiya ka dialogue behen pe azma hi sakte hai na??😆

i said dis os as masterpiece 😉
mere wale u hv to decide 😆
bilkul ji.. 😳
..

Originally posted by: Payal_156

i said dis os as masterpiece 😉
mere wale u hv to decide 😆
bilkul ji.. 😳
..

wo to hona hi tha darling..tumhare ideas hi itne painful hote hai...🤣

we ty

meri stories padhna phir btana painful ki definition badal jaegi 😉

waiting hmm !
aur idea btau 😆

kuch krne ko ni h...

Originally posted by: Payal_156

we ty

meri stories padhna phir btana painful ki definition badal jaegi 😉

waiting hmm !
aur idea btau 😆

kuch krne ko ni h...

batao...😊

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

batao...😊

check pm in few mins wow..
kb likoge ye btao..