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Livania Govender

@sarunarshi72

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

that was beautiful. Loved it.

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Arre yaar mujhe senti banake he chodthi ho aap di

Loved it though :-)

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likitha

@Arakshi_Lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Ketakee
res

madam ab tho unres kar do!

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Ramisa (Saba)

@Devilicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

maar daala allah...
it was really very emotional
i was crying when i was reading this story !
really such an amazing imagination .
very well written

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Sanjana

@SweetSassy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

res/unres...

pta nahi kabse par bahut pehle se tumahri stories padti aa rahi hoon...bahut se emotions mehsoos karwaye tumne par kabhi bhi aisa emotional update...never dear...pta nahi kya tha par jab yeh story padh rahi thi i was even listening to the song Is dard e dil ki sifarish...and somewat yeh gaana and story combine ho gaye...the way i was reading the story the song was xactly matching it...i carry on reading and tears automatically start flowing...let me tell u dear that rare stories have the power to make someone cry or laugh...and today ur story made me...the way u have actually described their emotions was actuallly commendable...the igniting feeling of arjun to save sakshi was somewat reaching to me...the feeling of sakshi that she hadn't lost her love but won was also being felt by me...ek-ek emotions ko apne sabdo mein itne sundar tarike se likha ki mere pass sabd nahi hai...meri english itni achi nahi hai still i tried my best to describe my feeling regarding ur story...iss update mein kuch bahut khass tha likhi...i again salute u as being the most wonderful writer just the same as my Chetann Bhagat...god bless u...