New Ariya: LOVE Vs FATE [ON HOLD]

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

pheww...(heavy heart) i will wait for to have one more heartache like riya 🤣

abhi apna heart sambhalke rakho bahut kuch hain baaki🤣

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Pinky pan

@piupan

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

wow dear awsum strt Bt itna chotu sa koi nai nxt part bada dena Haan n waah kya strt h dat dream was scary y Riya sees dis dream frm her childhood???? N yeh kya y riya's step mother treats her lyk dis...not fare n wow misha as riya's sis gr8 i alwys use to luv her character in pkyek...awsum dear really n plz baaki k stories jaldi updt karo naa i luv ur stories plz plz plz...do cnt sn n thnx for d pm dear

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Nice CS
Great start
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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Shahela

@shahela15

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Nice start, waiting for the next update, continue soon

Thanks for the pm

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Char which u use it is perfect

Thanx 4 pm me

It is awesome

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Nice Megha dear awesome

Beautiful character sketches

N nice concept

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

nice concept and awsm part ,con soon

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Superb start dr...!!!!! CS was awesome...!!!!!

OMG Riya had a nightmare which shocked her to the core...!!!! But why she hv the same nightmare everyday...???? Did she died like that in her last birth...????

Hate her mom's behaviour towards her...!!!!! Why doesn't her dad do something about it...?????

Wht's the reason behind her bro's strange behaviour...?????

Riya seemed quite attached to khala...!!!!!

Loved it...!!!! Thanks for pm dr...!!!! Continue soon...!!!!!

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

awesome start
Riya's nightmare was a shocking
n hope soon will get to know the reasons too
her family's intro was nice
her dad n sister were nice n caring
while her bro also cares for her
but hate her mom for her rude behavior towards Riya
thanks for pm
cont soon

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archi

@hunny1993

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Wow meghu !!!!!

Its amazing strat 👏

Why she c the dream ???? 😕 it is so scary dream 🤢

Luv the whole family potraition

Wow !!!! mish is here !!!

U know how much i luv her 😃

Waiting 4 the nxt update

Update soon & thx 4 pm