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Posted: 11 years ago
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i want update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: hunny1993


Koshish karta hu 😉
Ek cheez bata du pehle kuch parts me arjun-kalpana ka fbs hogi
Riya baad me entry legi 😊



Likho lkho

Koyi bhi klpana ya riya wo sana hi haina

hum do charecters me sana ki imagine karke padenge na

Lekin aaj do pleasel

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SATRISHI



<font color="#0066FF">Likho lkho

Koyi bhi klpana ya riya wo sana hi haina

hum do charecters me sana ki imagine karke padenge na

Lekin aaj do pleasel
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As usual raat ko update milegi
Aj vaia aa rahi hai so thoda busy hu ... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: hunny1993


As usual raat ko update milegi
Aj vaia aa rahi hai so thoda busy hu ... 😊




Oh nice good day
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SATRISHI




<font color="#0066FF"><font size="2">Oh nice good day</font></font>


Same 2 u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
nice concept
plz continue dr
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guyz thx a lot 2 u .u all have supported me a lot .i hope this story journey will b njoyable .plz don't disappoint me .give ur supports in this way .here i m going 2 post the 1st part .enjoy ... 😊





Part -1

He is sitting in the study room holding a photo frame .

In the photo frame a beautiful lady's photo attached .

He is starting at the photo without blinking his eyes .some tear drops fell 4m his eyes .

He started talking with the photo .

Arjun :kalpana ,tum kyu mujhe aur pari ko akele chodkar chali gayi .tumhe pata v hai mein aur pari tumhe kitna miss karte hai !!!! 😭 Aisa ek din v nehi ki mein aur pari tumhe yaad nehi karti .pata hai pari bilkul tumari tara bani hai .hamesha tumari tarah mujhe command karti rehti hai ... 😊office me rehtu hu to har roj tumari tarah mujhe phone kark puchta hai "papa ,apne lunch ki ???,ghar kab aoge ,der maat karna !!!".pata hai tumhe ,usse v tumari tarah mere bina dinner karne ki adat nehi .mujhe ane me chahe jitna v der ho wo khud bina khaye mere liye wait karta hai .par mein ye v janti hu pari tumhe kitna miss karti hai .last week pari ki school me fancy dress competition thi .pata hai tumhe pari competition me first aya hai .akhir jite v na kyu wo arjun suryakant rawte ki beti jo hai !!!agar tum yaha hoti to pari aur v khush hoti .wo sabse pehle troffy tumare pas lakar kehti "mama ,dekho mein first ayi " 😊
Kalpana kyu tum mujhe akele chodk chale gaye .plz laut ao .i m missing ur luv ,ur dimple smile ,ur beautiful eyes ,ur non stop talking ,i missing ur everything .

A long tear drops fall 4m his eyes .

Arjun :mujhe aj v wo din yaad hai jis din hum dono pehli baar mile the ...


FLASHBACK

Arjun is talking with sameer on phone .

Actually he is going 2 sameer's house as sameer invited him 2 come 2 his house .

Arjun :ha sam ,mein bas avi avi airport se nikli hu .

Sam :tu mujhe pehle kyu nehi bataya ??? thodi der pehle bata diya hota to gadi vej deti .waise tu waha ruk mein avi gadi leke waha pouchta hu .

Arjun :sam ...tu v na .aisa baat kar raha hai jaise mein koyi chota sa bachcha hu .tujhe ane ki koi jarurat nehi hai .tu mujhe apna ghar ka address text karde .mein khud hi chali aungi .

Sam :r u sure ??? 😕

Arjun :offfo !!!! ya i m sure 😡 ab jaldi se text kar !!!

Arjun cut the call & hired an auto .

But unfortunately the auto broke down in midway .

Arjun :kya hua vai sahab ????gadi band kyu kardi ???

Driver :sahab ji ,gadi meine band nehi ki .apne ap band ho gayi .sayad engine garam ho gayi hai .gadi age nehi jaa payegi.apko dusra gadi leni padegi .

Arjun :oh shit !!!

He came out of the car & looking 4 lift .but unfortunately the road is so desorted .1 or 2 vehicle r seen .

After 1 hour he found one beautiful girl coming 2 wards him riding on a cycle . 😆

Arjun (MV):omg !!! rajesthan ki ladkiya itna age baad gayi hai !!! 😲 waise ye ladki dekhne me to bilkul pataka hai 😃
oh shit !!! arjun ,tu kya anab shanab soch rahi hai ??? "

The girl almost passing by side

Arjun suddenly called her

Arjun :xcuse me mam ... 😕

The girl stopped & turned 2 him with suspecious eyes

Riya :kya apne mujhe bulaya ???

Arjun :ahhh ...ab yaha to ek hi ladki hai .to naturally apko hi bula rahi hu .actually mujhe ek dost ki ghar jana hai .aj hi mein yaha ayi hu .airport se uska ghar hi jaa rahi thi but unfortunately iss khatara (pointing 2 the auto rickshaw) auto bij raste me hi baand ho gayi ...

The driver bcom angry hearing that

Driver :sahab ,meri guddu ki bare me kuch maat kehna !!!! 😡

Arjun :guddu ???? 😲

Driver :ha (pointing the auto) ye mera guddu hai . 😡

The girl smiled turning her face other side .

Arjun :ye lo !!! hai ek khatara gadi aur uska naam v de di "guddu" 😆

Now the driver & arjun started arguing on "guddu"

So the girl interpruted 2 stop them

Girl :ek minute !!! ek minute !!! ap dono aise rasto ki bijo bij jhagda maat kijiye .(turning 2 arjun)waise apko jana kaha hai ??????

Arjun :rathod mansion !!!

Girl (asked surprisingly):r u sure ???

Arjun :yah !!!!

Girl :thik hai .chaliye ap mere cycle ki piche baith jaiye .mein apko waha chod deti hu .

Arjun :what !!! apki ye cycle me ???? 😲

Girl :kyu koi problem hai ???? 😡

Hearing her angry tone arjun get scared

Arjun :no no nothing ... 😃

So arjun sat bhind her

The girl started the cycle .

Arjun :waise ap bohot achsa cycle chalati hai 😃

but girl didn't response .

So he again asked

Arjun :waise ap yaha ki hi hai ???

Girl (with stern voice):ha !!! 😡

Arjun :omg !!! rajasthan ki ladkiyo ne kitna achsa tarakki karli ...

b4 he could complete his sentence the girl stopped her cycle & shouted

Girl :utariye meri cycle se !!! 😡

Arjun :kyu meine kya kiya ???? 😕

Girl :kya kiya !!! ek to rajasthan ki ladkiyo ki bare me aise sochta hai ki hum log gayi (villagers type) hai !!!

Arjun :nehi nehi mera wo matlab nehi tha 😕

But she again stopped him

Girl :listen mister !!!! aurat chahe jitni v mamuli dikhti kyu na ho par agar ye aurat chahe to mardo ka kaan katk rakh de sakte hai .remember one thing "aurat ki kabiliyat par kav shakh nehi karni chahiye !!! ab sys"

Arjun(Panickly):nehi nehi samaj gayi 😕 ab ap plz mujhe mere dost k ghar tak chod dijiye .

Girl :baith jayiye !!!! 😡 aur ha apna muuh band rakhiye ga .nehi to sach much cycle se utar dungi .

Arjun :ji 😕

Arjun again sat bhind her .she started cycle .but this time its a silent journey 😆


FB END

arjun came out his fb when he heard pari's voice
PARI'S PHOTO

Pari :papa ,ap avi tak soye kyu nehi ??? 😡 raat ki 2 pm hai .aur ap avi tak yaha ho !!!

Arjun :sry sry galti ho gayi 😆

Arjun stood up & lifted pari in his arm

Arjun :ab chale .hum sone chalte hai ... 😊

Pari (like elder):hmmm that's like a gd boy .

Arjun smiled at his daughter antics & headed 2 their bedroom


2 B continue ...


PRECAP :AGAIN FB .ARJUN'S TRANSFER ORDER COME .


<font size="4">GUYZ TELL ME HOW WAS THE FIRST PART ???? PLZ GIVE UR OPINIONS & LIKES & COMMENTS BOTH CHAHIYE .WO V LONG WALA COMMENTS .THODI SI V RESPONSE ME KAMI DIKHAYI DI THEN I WILL STOP IT IMMEDIATELY !!!!!...SYS
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Edited by hunny1993 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Beautiful update hunny dear awesome
Continue soon
N thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
Arjun looking at Kalpana's pic n remembering her
his convo with her pic was emotional one
the fb was superb
finally we get to meet someone who can scare our ACP😆
loved Kalpana
Pari was awesome
loved the father-daughter bonding
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...
Superb and amazing start.
Loved it.
Wow...
The flashback was really awesome...
Arjun was remembering Kalpana...
Awww...
Pari is just like her Mom...
Awwieee...
Pari ordering her dad to go to sleep.
Pari's antics are just like her mom...
Kalpana aur Arjun ki mulakat in the flashback was awesome.
All in all,it was dhasu and superb.
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the supppa amazing update and for the pm.

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