Ariya OS : Roop Tera Mastana updated part 3B/pg 27,Banner updated pg 1 - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
I couldn't expected more than this...
So beautifully described part...
Rathod...You just put his heart in front of us.
Loved his flairs to arjun... he made arjun to voice his feelings to Riya.He did it Little strict way, but Arjun vi toh laathon ke voot hain, buttery baaton se thori na mann jata..

Loved the whole thing Rimi, I owe you for it.
Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
So rathore is genuine Frnd
He is happy for arjun
Bt he is also considering wat happened in past
Hope arjun n Sam get patch up
Thanx for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607

I couldn't expected more than this...

So beautifully described part...
Rathod...You just put his heart in front of us.
Loved his flairs to arjun... he made arjun to voice his feelings to Riya.He did it Little strict way, but Arjun vi toh laathon ke voot hain, buttery baaton se thori na mann jata..

Loved the whole thing Rimi, I owe you for it.
Thanks for PM.



thanks atisha so much...i had read it twice after i had written down and dont know why but didnt want to change it...now ur comment has convinced me it was not that bad...😃

yeah arjun,the lathon ke bhoot..😆

thank you so much atisha once again...u owe me?? what???😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Faruheer

So rathore is genuine Frnd
He is happy for arjun
Bt he is also considering wat happened in past
Hope arjun n Sam get patch up
Thanx for pm
Update soon



thanks Faruheer... but i have ended this os...no more parts coming up...😛

glad you liked it so much...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW Wonderful rimi Sorry for late reply
was in office n bit busy too
Amazing update dear
I loved rathore saying rawte se kehna agli baar darwaza bandh karle warn apoori paltan le ke andar aa jaaunga that was too good
thanks for the PM
N plz ise SS main convert kar do its awesome
Only if its possible for u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
abhi abhi pada hai
phir se padke aati hu
and then i comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
na na...
i wasnt xpcting a dammit at all...
infact...
bbbaaahhhuuuttt acha tha...
arjun's proposal..
aaweew...
awsm...
loved it...
bt rathod ko v ana chaiye tha..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it Rimi. Sad, that it ended so soon.
The proposal was simple yet always beautiful... all proposals are!😉

The realisation from Rathore to Arjun was very well written.

Thanks for such a lovely os.
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb yar...!!!
very beautiful update...!!!
so sameer caught them and i was expecting some fireworks but this was totally awesome...!!!
their talks were lovely... they understand each other so well...!!!! and then the way sameer made him realize what he need to do...!!!
it was too good...!!!
poor riya... cried for no reason...
glad arjun decided to pay heed to sam's words and proposed her... the arrangement ofcourse with the help of the team was lovely...
riya and sam's convo was nice.. and loved the advide he gave her and then to make the environment a bit more easy he said those lines about room locked lol😆
so she's gonna try her best to make the two friends patch up..!! cool..
ariya moments were very sweet... arjun sachi mai bahut naughty hai😆😉
loved it...!!!
the banner is awesome...!!
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Mind blowing update dr...!!!! It couldn't be better thn this yaar...!!!!!

Wow Rathod cme there just to return her keys but had to see thm like that...!!!

To say that he was shocked would ba an understatement... He was utterly bewildered whn he saw Arjun n Riya in that position...!!!!! His anger was quite justified...!!!!! May be he felt hurt too coz Rosh was his best friend n it's not easy for him to see someone else on her place but still he made Arjun realized that he must gave her the place she deserve in his life...!!!!!!

Arjun's POV was beautifully written n heart-touching dr but I think he misjudged his silence...!!!!!

OMG even in such a tence situation Chotu was thinking about food...that's damn funny yaar...!!!!

Wow Arjun's reaction made her hell confused n all sorts of negative thoughts were arosed in her mind n made her vulnerable...!!!!!

Oh gosh... Arjun arranged everything perfectly to surprise her...!!!! The confession was beautiful...!!!!!

Awww Riya tried her best so that Rathod would joined thm for dinner but he didn't budge...!!!!! Loved how he teased her...!!!

Ariya moments in the end were so cute...!!!!

Adorable ending...!!!!! Thanks for pm dr...!!!

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