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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arakshi SS: Mere Humsfar


Disclaimer: The Characters in my story are inspired from the show but the way the react to different situations are purely my imagination. Any resemblance is purely coincidental.

Part 5:

Saakshi was about to enter ETF when she saw Aisha,Shree,Chotu and Liza rushing out.

Saakshi: Aisha kya baat hai? Aap log itni jaldi mein kahan ja rahe hain.

Aisha: Saakshi naya case aaya hai. Hum log crime scene par ja rahe hain.

Saakshi: Hmm fine. Fine then chalo lets get to work.

Aisha: Kya aap bhi hamare saath chalegi?

Saakshi: Pehli baath tum mujhe tum bulaa sakthi ho. Dusri baath kyun nahi jaa saakthi. Mujhe laga ki mein tum logon ke saath kaam kar rahi hoon. Agar mein wahan nahi aavongi tho report mein kya likoongi?

Aisha: Ok Saakshi chalo. Let's go.

Just then Sameer and Arjun came.

Sameer; Aisha,Chotu,Liza chalo mera saath. Saakshi aur Shree tum log Rawte ke saath aana. Team let's get to work

Arjun expected Saakshi to argue with Sameer that she would not come with him. But she silently went and got into the SUV besides the driver seat. Arjun took the steering and started to the crime scene.

The case was solved by the end of the day due to great analytical skills of our own ACP Rawte. The team was purely surprised by the skills of their newest entrant. She helped them with the inner information regarding the suspect's background and several other vital clues. She was also the one who brought them back on track when they had deviated a bit during the investigation. She also helped Aisha in completing the case report apart from writing her own journal.

It was already nearly 11 PM when Saakshi completed her report to be published on their case. Her very first day at ETF had been hectic, tiring and draining. She wanted to leave to her place as soon as possible and take rest. She mailed Sameer the report that she had just completed for his approval. It was then she realized that she had not applied any medicine to the burns in her right hand. Suddenly the pain was shooting up and becoming unbearable and she realized only when all her work was flushed. She opened Aisha's drawer to find any medicine that she could apply on her burns but found none.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arakshi SS: Mere Humsfar


Part 5(Continued):

Arjun was coming out of his cabin when he found Saakshi searching for the medicine. He at once felt guilty for his action. He soon walked towards her and held her left hand and started dragging her with him towards his cabin. She was struggling and trying to stop him from dragging her.

Saakshi (Angrily); Arjun chodo mujhe. Yeh kya kar rahe ho? Kya baatamezi hain yeh?

Arjun: Chup chap chalo mere saath. Tum kitana bhi resist karogi tumme tho mere saath chalana hi hain. So just come with me.

Saying that he dragged her to his cabin and opened the tap of the wash basin and held her burnt hand against the water running from the tap. She was shocked by this action of his and also winced in pain at the contact of the cold water on her burn. She in a reflex held his upper arm tightly for support. He was surprised and looked at her, she looked up to him and their eyes locked for a while. He was thinking about Saakshi as to who was real Saakshi the one who had bore the pain till the point or the one who was wincing now like a kid. At that moment the world ceased to exist for them, it was just both of them trying to read each other's mind and gauge their thoughts.

He came out of the eye lock and made her sit on the couch. It was when he tried to move away that she realized that she had been holding his arm for support. She soon left his hand and mouthed a quick sorry. Then he went to his table and brought the first aid kit. He sat near her and started cleaning the water with the cotton. After removing all the water from her burns, he took the ointment and started applying it on her wounds very softly and blew air on her skin whenever she winces. The moment his finger touched her skin softly she felt a felt a shrill go through her spine. His state was no different. They both were having such feelings after a long time. Brushing aside his thoughts, he continued the task at hand. She was really amazed by the fact that his touch was so gentle considering the fact that he was cop who was used to rough and tough ways of handling the criminals. Soon he completed tending her wounds and got up bringing her out of her thoughts.

Arjun: Come I will drop you at your place.

Saakshi: No thanks. I will go on my own.

Arjun: See don't argue. It's already late and it's not advisable to go alone. Come I will drop you.

Saakshi: Ok I will get my stuff and meet you in the parking lot

Arjun; Ok be there in 10 min

Time whirled away; the ETF team solved several other nerve wrecking cases. Saakshi had become one among them very easily and in almost no time. She took care of each and every member of the team as her own family. She would bring them home cooked food more often than not, serve them cofee and make them feel relaxed when they were struck in between the cases. She had soon become chotu, Aisha and Liza's best friend. One would always see them together during the free time gossiping, chatting and pulling each other's legs. She would make sure that Aisha and Liza reached home safely when they had to leave office late due to their work. Sameer started to consider Saakshi as his younger sister and would take her side during her duels with Arjun.

Of all the bonds that she shared with different members, the one she shared with Arjun was the most complex and unpredictable one. There were fireworks more often than not when they spoke to each other. Their opinions differed in almost every matter and were nothing but contrasting personalities trying to prove each other that they were right in whatever they said. Despite being loggerheads at work, rest of the team could sense a strong bond between them that both were unaware. Saakshi would always take care that his cutting chai would be served for him as and when required. She also ensured that he would never skip his meal. He on the other hand would drop her home whenever they were late due to work. The mutual care and concern was like a unwritten bond between them.

The only person with whom Saakshi maintained a strictly professional relationship was Shree. Shree had once again been left to himself due to her unexpected entry into ETF.

Precap: Shree and Saakshi's emotional meet.


Note: There might be a few errors. Please forgive me for them. Continue to read and enjoy. If anyone here feels it's boring or not up to the mark can feel free to express it. I have been noticing for a while now that likes and comments are decreasing so please give your suggestions for improvement. If you guys feel I am boring you people out here at any point of time I will stop this for sure. Please suggest

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh no dont stop writing...i know likes and comments motivate a writer to write more but please dont ever stop please please 😊 😊
Awesome update...love arjun caring attitude towards sakshi😛 😛
Eager to know what happened betwen shree and sakshi and why are they behaving like this...i guess shree is related to her past nah...
Do continue soon and thank you heaps for the update and pm 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz don't stop writting. It's a very good one. Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz don't stop writing. It's really a good one. Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Suprb upd8.. waitng 2 knw abt sakshi's pst..
Do cntinue soon.. nd thnx 4 d pm😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haye haye I almost forget the story
Or may be miss the part
I have to go back and read again
But comments for this part
It's awesome part story move in good ways
Like sakshi involvement
Love the arakshi caring way to each other
Continue soon yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
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no its not boring ur writing it so well do cont...
loved ur update yaar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Your story is really interesting dear...

It was a very nice update...
The care and concern , which is growing day by day , between
Arjun and Sakshi is really cute...
Sakshi &Shree...whats their problem...???

Waiting...waiting...
Cont. soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry i somehow missed 4'th part read it just now with 5'th part both parts were nice
arjun sakshi fighting with each other but still taking care of each other
liked the way arjun tended sakshi's burns and offered her lift
shree and sakshi ke beech kiya problem hoi abhi tak clear nahi hua
pls next update jaldi karna and thanks for pm 😊

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