T2- RNP- Pt 41 - Pg 60, 10-Jul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Awsuum Didu...So Finally Bhai ki shaadi done,Rasmein Done!! Now tym for Kaal Ratri!! I knew it Di...Im a bengali so i knw abt it nd i understand the feelings of the newly-weds! 😆😆🤣 Bhai ki halat when Arjun told him abt it!!! Arjun tells him ki agar parso shaadi kar leta toh aaj uski suhaagraat hoti!!! 😉 Bechare Bhai khud toh pareshaan nd saath hi Arjun ko bhi pareshaan kar diya!! 😆 Arjun ke plans!!!!! 😆 Bechara dono ko haath tak ni pakadne diya!!! 😆 Finally der Sunhaagraat!!! 😉 OMG...Annu is lukin soo beautifulll!!!! Luv ur dressing idea di!!! OMG!!! Yeh Pranks!!! 🤣🤣🤣 Bhai really knws his family!! Aww..dey have started cuming close! All the best bhai!!! Excitingg Precapp Di...Continuee Soon!

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Annu

@Chulbuli_Annu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

shadi ho gyi 😉 cool

pr ye kya ACP se sam sidha baccha ban gya 😆😆😆 shadi ka side effect... direct mom se jake puch lia...sab sharm lihaj bech khai ACP ne 😆😆😆

poor ACP sapne liye the biwi k sath bed share krenge aur bed share kr rhe hai best friend k sath 😆😆😆

ye riya bhi arjun ki sikhaye me chalti hai...apni behan se zyda use arjun ki padi hai...hadd hai bechare ek to waise hi nhi mil paye...upper se ye riya unhe baat bhi nhi krne de rhi

red saree backless blouse 😳😳 ahem ahem

koi cough syrup bijhwao re mere liye...😆😆😆

ek raat k liye itni prepration😲 papad se lekar alam clock, ping pong toy...omg...

sabne solid planning ki hai...but galat bande ki sr bigadne ki...wo sbko acche se janta hai...sab kuch barbaad kr dia...sab ki mehnat pani me...bs wo pillow k toy ko chod kr...😆😆😆

👍🏼 cool updated...aage to hot hi hone wali hai 😆😆😆

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

it was awesome and amazing update di..

just loved it..

finally rathore is married.

love all the rituals..

yeh kya tha🤣

sabne sam ki suhaagraat ka baidagarg kar diya😆

sam ki chief gari🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

all the pranks are awesome.

me cant stop my laughing..🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

continue soon.

and thanx for the pm.

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Omg such a cool update...sam is desparate for SR...besharam kahika..😃

i must say annu has such a great mother-in-law,reality kitni hatke hai 😛

i just loved the pranks and the way sameer identified the owners...eagerly waiting for next update...plz continue soon...

thanks for pm

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Saranya Senan M C

@SaruSenan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

I luv dis... SM bade Sweet N Cute lag rahe hai...☺️

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

@unishaz, @laila1994, @Naina, @sarita, @Faruheer, @Aabish_02, @Harsha111, @cute_ariya, @nakshatra92, @Pihu, @zubiya92 and others who hit the "Like" button... Thank u so much for liking this part and encouraging me... stay tuned for more fun.😊

@Birdie... Thanks dear 😊 ... ab kya karoon... aise point par atkaane mein mazaa bhi bahut aata hai 😆😆😆... hey... read it again... Sam never said that usko SR chahiye... wo to bas Arjun ki baat confirm karne gaya tha... he thot that Arjun is teasing him... and he was worries for Annu... so he said that he wanted to meet her 😉... I researched a bit about Kaal-Ratri and found that it is because of a mythological story narrated in scripture called "Manasamangal Kavya"

😆😆😆...match bhale hi delay ho gaya ho... par cancel nahi hua hai ... keep reading my sweet little Piranha 😉

@Payal ... Thanks dear 😊... yes... tumhare Bro ki shadi ho gayi 😊... Sik track aa raha hai... jaldi hi... 😆😆... nahi ye pranks mere real life experience par nahi they... mere yaha sab boring se bade - buzurg hain 😉.. ye pranks try mat karna apne bro pe... wo tumhari band Baja dega 😆😆

@Manali ... Thanks dear 😊...Chief to Chief hi hai par kya karey... fas hi gaya aakhri trap mein 😉... Arjun... ye aisa time hai jab wo apne sare dukh bhool kar apne best friend ki khushi mein poore dil se shamil hai 😊

@Goldie ... Thanks dear 😊...itne din tak wo shadi se bhaagta tha na ... sabko tang karta tha... to ab sab usko mazaa chakha rahey hain ... apne apne style mein 😉... par fir... Chief bhi aakhir chief hi hai...😉

@AnjuRish ... Thanks dear 😊 ...real life mein ye sab bahut bhaari padta hai 😆😆😆

@Zebbie ... Thanks dear 😊... ab kya karein... josh mein aakar bol to gaye ki hum Rajput hain... par Bengal ka jadoo hai... ussey nahi bach saktey 😉...wo Mumma k paas bride ko dekhne k liye nahi gaye they... balki Arjun ki baat ko confirm karne gaye they... unko laga ki Arjun jhooth bol raha hai 😳...And Arjun k best friend ki shadi hai... and Sam ne bhi Arjun ki shadi mein usko bahut sataya tha (Flashback mein dalungi)... Arjun to badla le raha hai 😉... Aur Riya bhi peechhe nahi hategi apne iklaute jiju ke mazey lene mein... abhi to chance hai... office mein to wo boss hai na 😉... Mumma Rathod is a modern saas ... and u said it right ... UTARNE mein asani 😆😆😆... ab unki wife hai hi itni beautiful...😉...hey... aaram se khana khane k baad updates padha karo ... take care 😊

@devildiva21 ... Thanks dear 😊...yeah... intezar ka mazaa le raha hai Sam 😉... wo to Mumma k paas Arjun ki shikayat ekar gaya tha... ye sochke ki Arjun uske saath Mazak kar raha hai... par disappoint ho gaya 😳... Arjun... wo to is waqt apna sara dukh bhool kar apne best friend ki shadi mein poore dil se involved hai...😊... and Riya... always ready to take a chance... office mein to chief hai... ghar par hi ye mazey liye ja sakte hain jiju k 😉... Sam's mom is a sweetheart... and she is a modern saas... saas-bahu friends friends mein believe karti hai ...😉... Ab Sam-Annu ki wedding night to special honi hi chahiye na... unko yaad rahey...isliye itne pranks ...bas... next part bhi aa raha hai 😉

@Zuby ... Thanks dear 😊...😆😆😆...yeah... his own trick backfired on him 😉...and he didn't go to demand his rights... he was more sort of scared with what Arjun said... he went to complaint against Arjun ... but again... all he got was disappointment 😉... elders too are fun loving..unko bhi chance milna chahiye...😆😆

@Pari... Thanks dear 😊 *pat on ur back* 😊...yeah...bechara Sameer 😉 ... Kaal-Ratri ka reason ek mythological story hai ...Sameer to Arjun ki complaint karne gaya tha... par uska khud ka hi popat ho gaya 😳... Saasu maa to ekdum modern hain...😉...ab family memebers to mazey lenge hi 😉... next part coming soon...

@pisces_gurl ... Thanks dear 😊... hey... I was reading one of ur story...and I loved it... u haven't updated it for long time 😲... and really sorry... was so engrossed in the old stories that i'm reading, really didn't get time to start reading new ones ... 😳😳😳... but I will surely read ur stories...

@Shanaya ... Thanks dear 😊... yes... ho gayi shadi 😊...ab galti ho gayi tumhare bhai se... to bhugat rahe hain ... aur saath mein Arjun ko bhi kar diya pareshan 😳... aue Arjun k to best friend ki shadi hai... wo to mazey lega hi 😉... keep enjoying 😉

@Annu ... Thanks dear 😊... nahi r baby... wo to Arjun ki shikayat leke gaya tha na... ki ye mujhse chidha raha hai... par usko kya pata... Arjun ki baat sach hai... 😆😆...Aur ab Riya ka to aisa hai ki abhi hi wo jiju ke mazey le sakti hai... office mein to wo chief hai na 😉... to wo maan gayi Arjun ki baat 😊... haan... kaho to drum bhar ke cough syrup bhijwa doon 🤣

Ab ye Sameer ne ghar bhar ko itne saal pareshan kiya tha... shadi hi nahi kar raha tha...to fir sab ne socha kyun na is ke mazey liye jaayein 😉...par ab Chief to Chief hai na... aur apni family ko to achchhe se hi janta hai 😉... par fir bhi... apni Maa k jaal mein fas hi jaata hai ... aakhir wo Maa hai 😉... and hot update aa hi rahi hai 😉

@Megha ... Thanks dear 😊...haan... sab ne haath saaf kar liya apna... par ab Chief to akhir chief hi hai 😉

@Rimi... Thanks dear 😊...arrey... sabne wo part galat samjha... Sam SR k liye desperate nahi tha... wo to Arjun ki baat sunke darr gaya tha... wo to Arjun ki complaint karne gaya tha... par bechara khud daant kha ke a gaya 😳😳

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Friends,

I will be travelling on Sunday, 22-Dec and wont be able to access internet till 28-Dec and wont be able to post updates till then. So I'm back with a maha-episode. The story is going to take a new turn and speed. Hope u all like it.

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Same night

Somewhere in Mumbai.

On an isolated spot near sea shore.

She was restless. She desperately wanted to talk to ETF Chief for last few days but from the news and her circle she got to know that he was busy in his wedding functions. She was just waiting for him to come back to Mumbai. She got to know that his wedding reception was going to be held next evening in Mumbai. She decided to call him after that. She didnt want to delay before it was too late.

She just looked at her thick designer bangle in her left wrist, glided her fingers on it, breathed a deep sigh and closed her eyes.

But suddenly she felt someone's presence behind her. She turned and was surprised to see him.

Her(barked at him): Tum... tum yaha kya kar rahey ho?

Him: mai tumhe dekhne aaya tha... ye jagah sunsaan hai... khatra ho sakta hai

Her(shouts at him again): tum mera peechha kar rahe they? How dare you...

Him: Dekho mai sirf tumhari help...

Her(cutting him short and warning him): meri help karne ki tumhe koi zarurat nahi hai... mai tumhe pehle bhi bol chuki... hoon aur fir bol rahi hoon... door

raho mujhse... warna anjaam bahut bura hoga...

She finishes off her sentence and storms out of the place.

He stood there looking at her retreating back.

He always wondered why she was like this. This was not a place for her. This was not the life she deserved. She seemed to be a nice girl, then what forced her into this place. It was going ruin her one day. He had observed her for last 6 months. She had been able to protect her modesty with her good work and loyalty to the boss, but he also knew that the people around her were the vultures who were ready to pounce on her at any opportunity. They were waiting for her to make a mistake to take advantage of it. He felt bad for her. Hee had noticed a pain in her eyes. He always felt like comforting her but she always shooed him away. She had built a wall around her and given her situation, it was justified.

He somehow felt as if he was falling for her. Her presence around her effected him. He mentally scolded himself for this and laughed at this thought. Intelligence officer Rishi Malhotra, who was on an undercover mission, working as a goon Ronnie, was falling for a club dancer and a drug peddler. But his mind argued, she is a human being and it must be something very grave which was driving her to do this and if she wished to rehabilitated, she had all the rights as per the law. He thought of giving her a chance to live after his mission was over by covering her existence in the gang if she survived...This thought again sent a chill down his spine.

He closed his eyes and jerked his neck to shrug away this thought and began planning for his next move.

Here is Mr Rishi Malhotra, Intelligence officer. Working undercover as Ronnie.

(Following part is strictly not meant for kids... so all the kids, directly scroll down to part 30B... SAMJHE ... YA ... SAMJHAUN?????)

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Udaipur.

Sam and Annu's room.

Special Thanks to Zebbie for this beautiful edit

And they burst into laughter rolling on the bed looking at each other. And very next moment they come closer on the bed while laughing and suddenly stop laughing.

Sameer again looks at Annu intently. She blushes under his intense gaze and goes near the dressing table.

He too gets up and follows her quickly.

Saanwariyaa...
Saanwariyaa...
Saanwariyaa...

Annu goes near the dressing table and starts removing her earring. Sameer interrupts by holding her hand and himself removes her earring slightly brushni his fingers

on her ear.

Sameer(while removing her earring): Annu!

Annu(looking at his reflection in mirror): Hmmm?

Sameer(giving her the earring): tum khush ho na?

Annu smiles and he too moves to other side smiling to remove the other earring.

He removes her other earring, gives it back to her and slightly brushes her moving her hair to her left shoulder and opens the loop of her necklace. She was shivering at his every touch and blushing. This causes her pallu to fall down from her right shoulder exposing her bare back to him and she closed her eyes. He just takes a look at the single dori which was holding her blouse and looks at her reflection in mirror. She looked cute when with closed eyes in embarrassment.

Raske bhare tore nain
Saanwariyaa
Raske bhare tore nain

Tadpat hoon din rain
Saanwariyaa
Tadpat hoon din rain

He tapped on her shoulder to give her the necklace. She opened her eyes, took the necklace and put them in the drawer. Before she could push close the drawer, he came closer placing his palms on her shoulder and breathed in the intoxicating fragrance of the mogra strands in her hair.

He kissed on her shoulder and his warm breath tickled her. He glided his fingers on her both hands from shoulders to arms to elbow to her wrist and tightened his hug from behind, pecked her right cheek and placed his chin on her right shoulder looking at her intently in the mirror.

Bin dekhe naahin chain
Saanwariyaa
Bin dekhe naahin chain

Raske bhare tore nain
Saanwariyaa
Raske bhare tore nain

She smiled and opened her eyes. There eyes locked for a few moment as they looked each other in the mirror. She ould see there was something more than love in his eyes. A desire to have her in his eyes... a passion to make love...

He slowly and carefully started removing her bangles which fell in the drawer.

Dard jiya ka, ka se kahoon main
Dard jiya ka, ka se kahoon main
Tees mein kaise bolun

Piya bina mein, jogan jogan
Piya bina mein, jogan jogan
Ban ke bawariya dolun

She wriggled out of his grasp and tried to move aside and turned to face him and smiled at him. He too smiled back.

He stepped towards her while unbuttoning and removing his shirt. She stepped back slowly and hit the wall behind and her breath stuck in throat when she saw him bare chested as he removed his vest. She did take notice of his broad shoulders and well toned, maintained athletic body as he blocked her way to move away by placing his palms on the wall behind and smiled in victory

He closed the gap between them moving towards her observing her face. The little line of sindoor on her forehead, her bindi, her blushing cheeks...he tucked strand oh hair behind her ear and and glided his fingers on her cheek. he looked intently at her quivering lips and wiped them with his thumb before bending to kiss them.

Aur na kar bechain
Saanwariyaa
Saanwariyaa

Raske bhare tore nain
Saanwariyaa
Raske bhare tore nain

As he bent forward, she tried to dodge him and run away from him, but he caught her by wrist and she twirled around and he pulled her closer. She lost her balance and held his shoulders for support. He again smiled He took the opportunity and placed his hands on her bare waist and glided his fingers from her waist to back up on her spine to the dori of her blouse and pulled off it gently. She tighetened her grip on his shoulders and hid her face in his chest.

Tore khaatir, sej sajayi
Tore khaatir, sej sajayi
Khusboo phulwaa, phulwaa...
Ang ang more, gandh tehari
Bahiyan jhula... jhulwa

He parted from her and lifted her in his arms and gently placed her on the bed kissed her forehead and moved back to switch off the lights. He came back and switched on a small table lamp with a slightly dim light focussing on her face. He cradled her in his arms and started kissing her neck and shoulders while his hands exploring her body.

Tore khaatir, sej sajayi
Khusboo phulwaa, phulwaa...
Ang ang more, gandh tehari
Ang ang more, gandh tehari
Bahiyan jhula... jhulwa

She found herself melting in his embrace. She too tightened her hug in submission. He slightly parted from her to make sure he was not forcing himself on her. Looking at her smile he was assured that she too desired him. He looked at her for a few seconds and sealed her lips with his.

The most memorable night for both of them, their night of consummation completing their relationship. It was new beginning for them...A new life... new dreams... new struggles and they were together to support each other always.

Hui suhagan, rain
Saanwariyaa
Hui suhagan, rain

Raske bhare tore nain
Saanwariyaa
Raske bhare tore nain
Raske bhare tore nain
Saanwariyaa

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Part 30 B

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Next morning.
6:00 AM

She woke up with the chirping of birds outside. She tried to get up but she felt something heavy around her stomache. She smiled realizing that it was Sameer who had put his arm around her. She turned to side to look at him. A sweet smile playing on his lips and ruffled hair... He looked so innocent while sleeping. It was like a dream.

Aayi Meri Subah Hasti Hasati
Boli Aankhen Tere liye Sandesha hai
Haan hai

Jaagi aankhon ko bhi sapna milega
Khoi khushi aane ka bhi andesha hai
Haan hai

She couldn't resist to touch his cheek. His smile widened feeling her fingers on his face and he opened his eyes to see the most charming sight ever. His Annu lost looking at her. He pulled her closer and tightened his hug.

Aan haaan
Gulabi si subah
Aan Haan
Sharabi si hawaa

Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye

She giggled when she saw a bit of her sindoor smudged on side of his forehead and he gived her a surprised look. She told him in with hand gestures about it. He smiled again and rubbed his nose against her nose.

Raahein waahein bole baatein rumani
Aao Baitho suno baatein kahani hai
Haan hain
Tazzi tazzi lage humko rozana
Teri meri baatein yun to purani hai
Haan hai

Aan haaan
Khayalon se paale
Aan haaan
Yeh zindagi chale

He glided his fingers in her hair and kissed her forehead. It was a bliss for her to be in his embrace. She felt secure.

Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi ram dhun woh sunaye

She voiced it out as if in a trance, "Sameer, I love you..."
He parted from her and chinned her up to make her look at him and replied, "I love you too Annu!"

Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi
Mein pyasi thi nirasi
Tu pani ki surahi

Meri aankhon ki Syaahi
Piya deti har gawaahi

She went back to memories of their first meet, their outing in the saree shop and beach, her birthday, the misunderstanding, their friendship and finally his proposal. It was him who taught her to live the life gain.

Smudged Kajal from her eyes mixed with a tear drop flowing down her cheek. Sameer is quick to wipe it. He shaked his head in a "No" gesturing her not to cry. As he too knew that she was the reason for the new happiness in his life. He had started living his life after he met her.

Tujhe dekha to khila hoon
Teri chahat mein dhula hoon
Mile Mandir Mein jyun
Mein to tujh mein yun mila hoon

He again held her close to his heart promising himself to hide her from all the sorrows and pain.

Aan haaan
Dhundhe na abb koi
Aan haaan
Mein khoya Tu Khoyi

Bheegi si bhaagi si
Mere bazuo mein samaye
Soti si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

She closed her eyes feeling his love.

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7:30 AM.

Suman knock the door of Sameer - Annu's room.

Suman: Sameer! Annu!

Sameer and Annu get up with a jerk and look at each other embarrassed. Annu picks up her saree and runs to the washroom while Sameer quickly puts on his clothes and opens the door.

Suman chuckles to see Sameer who was embarrassed and a bit scared. She also notices that little sindoor smudge and chuckles which embarrasses him more.

Suman: good morning Sameer... Annu kaha hai?

Sameer: good morning Maa... wo washroom mein hai...

Suman: achchha... jaldi se fresh hoke dono neeche aa jao... naashta taiyar hai... fir jaldi se taiyar bhi hona hai... 2 baje ki flight hai.

Sameer: OK maa!

Annu freshens up and goes down to help Suman. Sameer too comes down after sometime.

Everybody have breakfast and take their chances to tease Sameer and Annu who were already blushing.

Arjun gets a call from Shree telling him that the preparations of Annu-Sameer's wedding reception in Mumbai were done and he was checking the final arraangements.

Arjun, his parents, Riya, Annu, Sameer, his parents and Mona get ready and leave for Mumbai by 2 PM flight.

In Mumbai.

3:30 PM

Everybody take some rest and get ready for the reception.

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Part 30 C

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ETF Chief's reception was a grand affair in the police department circle. Many officers and Sameer's old friends and colleagues attended it and wished the newly married couple.

Arjun kept to himself during the function but Riya noticed him.

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After the reception, everybody headed back to their respective places.

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Arjun was back to his lodge room lost in Roshni's memories. For last few days, he had actually kept all his bitter and sad memories aside and enjoyed his best friend's wedding involving himself in wedding preparations, pranks and teasing his best friend. He felt lighter and content.

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11:30 PM
Sameer and Annu were back in their room. Sameer held Annu's hand and pulled towards him and hugged her. She wriggled in his arms to get out of his grip but Sameer was in no mood to let her go. That is when Sameer's phone buzzed annoying him and Annu giggled as he had to let her go. Sameer took out his phone from his pocket to see who was calling him at this hour. The call was from a private number.

Annu: Mai fresh hokar aati hoon... tab tak aap baat kijiye.

Sameer nodded with a sigh as he received the call.

Sameer: Hello ACP Sameer Rathod here...[Lady on the other end]..(was surprised to hear her voice and worried at the same time).. Hey Hi!!! kaha ho tum? Sab theek to hai? 1 saal se zyada ho gaya, tumhari koi khabar nahi... kaha ho tum?..[lady on the other end]...(worried and shocked on hearing what she said) KYA? dimag kharab ho gaya hai tumhara... maine mana kiya tha tumhe aisa kuch bhi karne se... abhi ke abhi waha se niklo...[lady on the other end]...kya matlab bahut der ho chuki hai... tumhe pata hai na...waha kitna khatra hai...tum 1 saal se waha ho... tumhare saath kuch bhi ho sakta tha... you are not safe there...tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho? kitni baar samjhaya tha maine tumhe... [lady on the other end]...(worried but gives up).. theek hai... mai aata hoon wahan kal... par tum please apna khayal rakho... aur ab mai tumhe waha nahi rehne de sakta... bahut ho gaya ...[lady on the other end]...tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha...theek hai...

Call disconnected

He shivered after he recalled what she told him. He sulked on bed after disconnecting the call. He sat holding his head in his hands thinking about his conversation with her. He never imagined she would do anything like this. He knew she was desperate but never thought she would go to this length. It was another blow to him after he had seen Arjun not respecting the system. And now, it was her.

Annu came out of washroom. From inside she could hear that he was talking to someone loudly. When she saw him worried, she too got serious. She enquired about the call.

Annu: aap pareshan lag rahey hain... koi serious baat?

Sameer: Haan Annu... ek case se related call tha... (looking at her) Annu... kya mai tumse ek request kar sakta hoon? dekho... mai aisa kabhi nahi karta agar ye zaroori nahi hota to...

Annu: aap aisa kyun bol rahey hain... please... kahiye na

Sameer: kya hum apna honeymoon postpone kar saktey hain? its urgent

Annu(worried to see Sameer anxious like this): koi baat nahi Sameer... hum nahi jaayenge kal...par baat kya hai? aap kuch zyada pareshan lag rahey hain?

Sameer(takes a deep breath): Thanks Annu... hai kuch... bahut serious...par mai abhi tumhe kuch nahi bata sakta... aur wo case sirf mai hi handle kar sakta hoon...aur kisi ko nahi bol sakta... Arjun ko bhi nahi...please trust me...(he looks at her intently)

Annu cups his face and hugs him and he hugs her back.

Annu: aap bilkul fikar mat kijiye...hum baad mein ghumne chale jayenge... par abhi aapki duty aur apka farz zyada zaruri hai...chaliye... aap bhi change kar lijiye aur fresh ho jaiye... thak gaye hain bahut... so jaiye... (parts from him)

Sameer passes a faint smile and goes to freshen up.

Sameer was not able sleep and Annu knew that. She cradled him in her arms and glided her fingers in his hair. They slowly melted in each others arms.

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Next morning.

Suman had created a scene in the house when Annu and Sameer told that they had postponed their honeymoon. Sameer had called the travel agent to cancel the current bookings and keep the plan on hold, and that he will communicate the new dates later.

Suman: Annu... 2 din huye nahi shadi ko aur tumne aise hi apne pati ki baat maan li... aise thode hi kaam chalta hai...aise to wo zindagi bhar bahane bana kar tumhe nachata rahega

Annu: Maa... unka kuch important kaam hai...

Suman: aisa kya kaam hai?

Sameer: Maa...maine plan postpone kiya hai ... cancel nahi... aur maine promise kiya hai aapki bahu se ... mera kaam khatam hone k baad mai usey zaroor ghumane le jaunga...

Suman still pouted and went to her room. She was upset for whole day and Mr Rathod was busy trying to cheer her up. Sameer had a bigger task waiting for him ahead.

Annu assured him that everything will be fine and he trusted her.

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In the evening.

Johnny's club. A shady club frequented by small time goons and drug addicts and drug peddlers.

People were sitting on tables smoking and drinking and waiting for her performance to begin. She had become popular in this place for last 1 year and the owner of the club was happy as visitors of the club had increased after she started performing there.

The colourful lights started blinking as the music started and people cheered for her.

She entered the stage and a spotlight focussed on her.

Humri atariya pe...
Haaaye...

Humri atariya pe, Aiyo balam ji...
Humri atariya pe, Aiyo balam ji...
Naino ke penche, lad jaaye...
Haaye...

Naino ke penche, lad jaaye...

She swayed to the rhythm moving her body in graceful movements as people applauded and whistled.

Aiyo Ji, Aiyo Ji
Humre atariya mein
Aiyo Ji, Aiyo Ji

Humre atariya mein

Humri atariya pe, Aiyo balam ji...
Humri atariya pe, Aiyo balam ji...
Naino ke penche, lad jaaye...
Haaye...

Naino ke penche, lad jaaye...

Sameer entered the club looking around for her and moved towards the dance floor and was shocked to see her dancing on the floor with skimpy clothes and people eyeing her lustfully. He clenched his fists in anger and embarrassment.

Aiyo Ji, Aiyo Ji
Aiyo Ji, Aiyo Ji

Mann ki kiwadiya...
Mann ki kiwadiya, Kholo balam ji...
Sab din ke jhagde, mit jaaye...
Haaye...

Naino ke penche, lad jaaye...
Haay...

She saw him and noticed his reaction too. She went closer to him.

Naino ke penche, lad jaaye...

Aiyyo Ji, Aiyyo Ji
Aiyyo Ji, Aiyyo Ji

Phulwari dil ki sooni padhi hai
Barkhaa jhadi ban aao
Barso jhama-jham angana mein more
Balma ye mann hariyao

Tohre kaaran...
Tohre kaaran, hum toh balam ji
Beech bajaria lut jaaye
Haaye...

She danced around him to seduce him. He was upset at this and looked away. She glided her finger on his face and turned her back to him with a jerk with the music and crashed her bare back on him resting her head on his chest.

Naino ke penche lad jaaye...
Haaye...

Naino ke penche lad jaaye...

Aiyo Ji, Aiyo Ji
Aiyo Ji, Aiyo Ji

Aiyo Ji, Aiyo Ji
Humre atariya mein
Aiyo Ji, Aiyo Ji

She held his hands and made him hug her from behind forcing him to hold her wrists. He closed his eyes in embarrassment but opened them with a jerk as she did something and he glided his hands back from her body parting from her.

She turned to look at him, smiled and went back to the centre of the floor

Humri atariya pe, Aiyo balam ji...
Humri atariya pe, Aiyo balam ji...
Naino ke penche lad jaaye, lad jaaye...
Haaye...

Naino ke penche lad jaaye...

Her performance ended and she went backstage. He too left the club.

He hopped into his car and left for his place. After driving for sometime, he stopped the car to the side of the road and took out from the pocket what she gave him.

The designer bangle. He took a closer look at it and realised that the inner rim of the bangle was something different. It was covered with golden tape.

He scratch removed the tape from that rim and was shocked to see almost 20 memory chips hidden below it.

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So... how was it?

Sorry for errors.

Precap - Sam tells Annu about the case and a big revelation and Sam goes to Shree to get the data from the chips that he got from Aisha.

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Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

What a Twist in Tale!

loved the way u've sketched the character of Aisha aka Nadiya and Rishi aka Ronnie...hmmm...ronnie hav feelings for nadiya...great...

*****

nadiya's moves to get the chips transfered to Rathod ws quite risky...

PS: loved the song for nadiya's dance...

hope to see more of ronnie and aisha in coming parts...

Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 11 years ago

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