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Posted: 11 years ago
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a new concept...i will be waiting eagerly dear...i know u would be again writing a awesome ff/ss... all d very best...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello! Here I am plagued by a disease which doesnt make me stop writing😆 So here I come again with my bakwaas stories to irritate you all😎

Hope you like some bakwaas😃

So here comes a new story, with a new twinkle!

The Midnight Sun


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CHAPTER 1


The dark sky gave into the torture of the sun and opened up its arms to welcome the yellow ball of fire. At once, half of the earth lit up likes Diyas. The warmth of the sun felt soft on her cheeks and her lips curled into a smile.

Suddenly the room was filled with sun's glow awakening the sleepy Saakshi. Just then her alarm began to ring. She woke calmly, rubbed her eyes and walked out of her bed as usual. Like she had been doing this everyday. She went into the washroom and brushed her teeth.

Freshening up she left for the kitchen downstairs. She tied her hair up in a bun and started to meddle with the ingredients. She was busy roaming around the kitchen. She was all along , because she knew she was making her sweetheart's favourite breakfast- pancakes with maple syrup! She smiled at the thought of her sweetheart. Her sweetheart ! her life !

After a while, a muscular body writhing in bed woke up finally and yawned and stretched his arms as he sat on the bed. He looked at the time. He had to get ready. He looked at the ruffled sheets next to him and smiled. He got up and went to freshen up.

Saakshi here finished making pancakes. Ahh! They smelled delicious! Just the way her sweetheart would love it. she decided to check on her sweetheart so she placed the hot pancakes on a plate and placed it on the dining table. Then came the mouth watering maple syrup. Yumm!

She finally hopped up the stairs to reach her room. Arjun came out of the washroom after having bath. Saakshi got into the room and was shocked to see the sight in front of her.

"you got ready so soon? What is so special about today?" saakshi asked moving forward lovingly.

"today is my cute momma's bday" a little girl said and hugged Saakshi.

Realisation struck her.It was her birthday. Oh.

Saakshi hugged back her daughter emotionally.

"you forgot again right?" the little girl cutely asked pouting.

Saakshi made an equally cute face and held her ears in response. The little girl kept her finger on her lip as if she were thinking ..and she finally replied "ok fine..i'll forgive you..but momma how can you forget your own birthday every year?" she asked surprised. Aww! How cute she looked. She was barely 4 years!

Saakshi smiled in response and hugged her little bundle of joy.

"now lets get ready we have to go to school" saakshi said cupping her face.

"no!" the girl replied.

"diya..its my birthday and you don't want to go!" saakshi asked laughing.

"please beta, today one day..anyways tomorrow is a Sunday" saakshi asked.

"ok..but after school ..whatever i say you will do that only okay?" diya asked like an officer giving an order.

"accha baba i'll do that only..!" came saakshi's reply.

Diya ran into her bathroom enthusiastically.

Saakshi went to her cupboard to get a fresh towel. She smiled thinking about Diya. Diya was probably the only person who understood Saakshi eventhough she was very young. She always used to help her, make her momma smile, do all kind of naughty things to irritate her.

She reluctantly looked at her phone. Just the usual messages from her friends, collegues...nothing special...not them.


She took a deep breath and said to herself "its okay.."

"momma towel!!" shouted Diya bringing Saakshi out of her thoughts. She rushed towards the bathroom with the towel.

Arjun dressed up quickly as he had an important meeting today. He suddenly heard a knock on his door. "come in" he said.

There came his little sister Payal. Payal was only 2 years younger to Arjun.

She saw him struggling with his tie. 32 years old and still cant wear a tie. She giggled and came close and spoke " bhaiyya..i'll do it?" mocking him.

He smiled at her antic and gave away.

"bhaiyya..you know what today is?" she asked casually.

"today? What's today?" he replied instantly.

Payal sighed silently.

"nothing" she replied and finished her tie-job'

He left the room quick to go down into the sprawling hall lit with a giant chandelier. Being a Iron and Steel Company owner, Mr.Arjun Rawte had definitely learnt to live life lavishly. He sat in his car skipping his breakfast which was noticed by his mom. She called down but he was already walking away.

He sat in the car immediately. The car zoomed out of the mansion. As he looked at his files..he thought of Payal's question. Surely he knew what was today.


"It hurts to breathe. It hurts to live. I hate her, yet I do not think I can exist without her"

Edited by likithakmh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
res/unres!!!!!!!!
wow me first that to before PM...
loved the banner so cute!!!!!!
starting was so beautiful liki loved it...
u described both the chores simultaneously i taught ur mentioning about arjun as sakshi's sweetheart but its her daughter...
diya i loved her so much...such a cutepie ...
so mr and mrs rawte are living separately...
payal she was trying to remember sakshi's b'day to him...but he act like he doesn't know!!!!!!!!!!
actually he remembered...
loved ones every things no one cant able to forget what ever the rift between them...
lovely start dear do cont soon!!!!!!!
Edited by anu91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
awesome yar..
Loved it..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i thought that sweetheart was arjun but it was her sweet daughter
diya 4 yrs old she is so sweet reminding sakshi of her b'day
so is arjun and sakshi husband and wife and diya their daughter
why r they seperated
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
beautiful story 👏 luvd it.. upd8 soon
nd thnx 4 d pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwsssmmm part
loved it
Amazing...
Loved Sakshi n Diya's bonding
cont sooon
thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
again a new story ,,😆,,,,,,,, baki story kaa update bhi chahaiye ... but yeahhh this is so cute story 😉.. starting is nice .. and sweet continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Likitha,thanks for the pm.you are a awesome writer.lovely .will wait for your next update.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Awesum start Liki.. Sakshi n her daughter r soo sweet..Diya is tooo cute !!! loved her words n actions.!! Rawte n her sis payal..hmmm gud going..plzz cont soon

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