Arakshi FF: Yeh Tune Kya Kiya ImpNote PG 28 Continue/Discontinue?? - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: PoohLover

Sounds really interesting...do continue soonish..will wait for it🤗


thanks :) i surely will!
adding you as a buddy so that i can send you pms =)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: redheart

nice concept

pls continue soon
add me to ur pm list


thank you and i have added you, dont worry 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: nicky13

Continue it Plz-2 and woh Bhi soon ... Awesome and fresh concept ... Arjun the photographer woohoo... Sounds really interesting :) Sakhshi ki beti ... Plz-2 update it soon :)


thanks Nicky :) i will update soon by the end if the day maybe! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Really different concept 👍🏼
plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyu03

Really different concept 👍🏼

plz cont soon 😊


thank you, i surely will :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Hey guys!!! the first chapter is here!! really im so excited to hear ur comments 😊
Please maaf karna agar spelling mistakes ho😳
Happy reading!! =)

Chapter 1

It was 7 and the sun had risen, Sakshi woke up to go to work although her daughter Jia wasn't awakened. Sakshi saw her sleeping beauty and decided to wake her up with a surprise. She put on a song on her mobile..

Tune plays...

Mere ghar aayi ek nanhi pari

Chandini haseen rath pe sawar

Mama please soone do naa!! Jia put a pillow on top of her head.

Ispe bhoot koi chada hai (full volume)

Thairna jaane naa

Ab toh kya buraa hai kya bhala hai

Fark pechane naa

Zid padk ke khada hai kambakht

Chodne jaane naa

Picking Jia and tickling her...

Badtmeez dil, badtmeez dil

Badtmeez dil mane naa mane naa

Jia: meri best mom!! I love you!

Sakshi: love you squared. She hugs Jia. Chalo abh brush ur teeth and get ready, school jaana hai, come on!

Jia: aaj noodles milenge lunch mein, please!! Please!!

Sakshi: as you wish my highness! J

Jia kisses her mom on the cheek and goes to the bathroom.

Sakshi: Jia, school bag kahan hai bacche?

Jia: study chair pe rakha hai, mama!

Sakshi: accha, milgaya.

Sakshi packs Jia's school bag and prepares breakfast. Sakshi gets ready and helps Jia get ready and both eat their breakfast.

Sakshi and Jia leave their apartment and go to Jia's kindergarten school.

Jia: bye mama!

Sakshi: bye bacche, main do baje yehi hoongi okay! Apna khayal rakhna and shatani nahi karna..hmm!

Jia: mama, main kahan shantani karti hoon!

Sakshi: oh nahi karti..accha toh phir bahut shantani karna..ab thik hai

Jia: J thik hai !! love you!

She runs to the gate.

Sakshi: jia, jia, sambhal ke

Sakshi waves her hand to Jia and Jia gives a flying kiss to her mom. Jia goes inside the building and Sakshi drives to the "Trend".

maine pehne party shoes

gonna let my body loose

karli hai thori booze lets

party on my mind

hai horsey horsey ride

cause Saturday hai night

aur music bhi hai right, lets party on my mind..mind..mind

Arjun shifted to the other side of his bed to shut his alarm.

Yun karte...shut

Arjun rubbed his eyes while saying "Saturday night, usemein toh der hai, aaj toh Wednesday hai" "Ek sec!" Arjun looked at his watch, it was 7:45. Shoot!! Aaj mere job ka pehla din, bhag Arjun bhaag!!

Arjun quickly got dressed and wore blue jeans and a simple white t-shirt with a white coat on top. He got his camera with its bag and left his house to reach "Trend". He turned on the radio

yun karte party-sharty..

Ye o aa ae Jaise ho pehli bari..

Ye o aa ae, Saanse thak jaayen jo

Kehle chal ghar lets go

Chilla chilla, kehdo ae o aa ae ai

Masti ki kholo khidki..

Ye o aa ae, Jaise parwaah na kal ki..

Ye o aa ae, Kadmo ko khidki lo

haathon ko upar, lo Aankhein do band karlo..

Ye o aa ae

Maine pehne party shoes

Gonna let my body loose

Aur karli hai thodi booze

Let's party on my mind...m..mind

Arjun reached his office and entered the building and at the same time Sakshi entered the building as well.


******BUMPED******


Arjun held a girl by her waist who had almost fallen down if Arjun hadn't helped her. Sakshi stared at Arjun and the girl. Arjun and the girl stood up.

Girl: thank you soo much, mujhe bachne ke liye, she blushed.

Arjun: no problem, yeh sab toh kuch bhi nahi main tumhari jaan bachane ke liye tumhe utha bhi sakta hoon.

The girl blushed even more.

Sakshi: Ms. Ritu, main aapko yaad diladu ki yeh office hai; blushing center nahi.

Ritu: im sorry madam.

She went up to her table and sat on her chair. Arjun turned to go to his cabin

Sakshi: ruko...ayenda se agar iss office mein flirting ki toh accha nahi hoga. You may go now!

Sakshi left from there.

Arjun: hmm...cute but akdu boss...interesting...yahan pe maza aayega! ;)

Precap: Arakshi getting to know each other



HWS it guys??? 😃 hit the like button if you liked this update and comment what you liked about this chapter, would love to hear that!!!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
*le fangirl scream* ahhhwww!! Sakshi is Arjuns boss?!! Ahhh m lovin it! Hope through your story woh achhe se revenge lee!
Hmm when you said he bumped into someone i thought Sakshi, this was a very nice twist😳
Love jia, she's really cute, also the mother daughter bond is superb =)
All in all like MD would say: Suuupperr!👏
Edited by Sakuu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
superb!!!!!!
sakshi and jia scene was so cute...
i taught arjun and sakshi bumped each other but u made some other girl...
total contrast character...
loved it cont soon...thanks for PM dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Nice update
Show KA bilkul ulta
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Nice work... This one seems really interesting... Coz arjun is different in this.. Please update soon... And yh long wala update plz ... Thanks for the pm x

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