OS: Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna(ch3,pg3)completed - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Awsuuumm Os Zee..Luvd it! Very Emotional! Zee ne Sameer Ki Goliyaan apne pe le li?? Sacchi Kitni Selfless Hai...Im Telling u Bhagwaan meri Bong Sis..Meri Zee ko kuch nhi Hona Chahiye...Superrrbb! Sabne Bechari par shaq kiya bt she did not doublecross her country! Thanxx 4 pm! Continuee Soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Heart-touching update dr...!!!
Yaaayyy Siki is dead...!!!
OMG Zeb is badly injured n critical...!!!
Plzzz save her...
Thanx 4 pm dr.
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Awesome Update
Loved It
Can't Wait 4 d Next Part
Continue Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Ch2.

Zebbie was transferred to the CCU,as her condition was very critical.

Rathos went upto the door of the CCU.It had a glass,through which he could see Zebbie.Her petite body was connected to innumerable wires,her hands had several IV needles,and her chest was wrapped in bandages.

Rathod grazed his hands on the glass,begging to the person,sleeping on the bed,with tears in his eyes,
''Aajao meri laado...''

Shree and Chotu went upto Rathod and gave him a assurance filled side hug.Rathod felt their hug and signalled them to pray for his sister.

Meanwhile,in the ICU,Arjun regained consciousness.His parents' were there with him.
Raghu sir,his wife and Sheen was also there with him.

Sheen went upto Arjun and engulfed him in a bear hug.Tears fell from that innocent's eyes.Arjun felt those tears and stroked his hand on his head and pecked her forehead,assuring her that nothing has happened with her brother.

Suddenly something struck his mind and he asked Raghu sir, ''Sir,Zebbie kahaan hai? Kaisi hai woh?''

Nobody could answer his question.Everybody were really scared that if he gets to know all this,he will be shattered once again and that could not happen.But,they had to take the risk.

Arjun's parents' and Raghur sir and his wife looked at each other in nervousness.They couldnt meet Arjun's questioning gaze.

''Maine pucha Zebbie kaisi hai?Koi mujhe kuch batata kyun nahi?Answer me,dammit..!!'' Arjun shouted at the top of his voice.

Nobidy had the courage to disclose the truth to him.Atlast,Sheen gathered all the courage and told him the truth.

''Woh... Woh... Zebbie di ki halat bohut hi zyada critical hai.Goli lagne ke karan Zebbie di ka bohut hi zyada internal bleeding hua hai.Pulse is dropping...In short,she has been kept in Life Support...''

As Arjun heard this truth,he felt,his world is on the verge of falling apart.He was shattered.His eyes' were full of tears.Sheen hugged him tightly and let him cry his heart out.

Raghu sir(in a broken voice): Arjun,please mat ro.Zebbie ko kuch nahi hoga.Usse ab hum sabki duaon ki saqt zarurat hai.

Everybody nodded.

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The nurse who was observing Zebbie's condition,saw that Zebbie was breathing very heavily.She immediately went out and called the doctors.

Rathod and the others became panicky and were continuously running behind the doctors' to know about Zebbie's condition.

Ayesha and Liza went to the hospital's Mandir to pray for Zebbie's Life.in the meantime,Rathod's parents' also arrived.Also,the Mother of the Orphanage,where Zebbie grew up.Everybody were praying for Zebbie's life.

After sometime,the doctors' came out with a smile on their face.

Everybody went towards the doctor and asked about Zebbie.

''Good news hai.Bhagwan ne aap sabki manokamna suni hai.Zebbie ki halat mein kaafi improvements aaye hai.Usse saasein lene mein takleef horahi thi.Puri tarha khtra taall chuka hai.Bas thori si savdhani baratni hogi,ki,Zebbie ko 3 mahine tak koi bhi strenuous kaam nahi dia jaaye.Haan,when she recovers,she can accompany you guys to the office,par zyada kaam ya pressure nahi dijiyega usse.Congratulations,she is back home,Safe and sound...''

Every single soul in the hospital heaved a sigh of relief and thanked Bhagwaan for keeping Zebbie safe.

As media was standing outside the hospital,the doctors',who treated Zebbie and Arjun,went infront of the media to brief about their conditions.

Arjun and his family,and also Raghu sir and his family,were also informed about Zebbie's condition.


Precap: Last part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Thanks zaibee u kept yourself safe 😊
Beautiful update n haa lovely written
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Lambe lambe comments aur dher saare likes chaiye mujhe.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Phewww...Finally My Zee Safe! Beautifully Written..Lovd it! Continuee Soon nd haan...Nxt Part me me want...Arjun-Zebbie Romance...😉 Samjhey Ya Samjhaun??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zebbie was shifted to the ICU,where everyone can meet her.Life support attachments were now taken out,as she is safe.Doctor gave the responsibility of taking care of Zebbie to the Senior most Nurse of this Hospital.Everybody thanked Bhagwanji for returning Zebbie to their lives,safe and sound.

At first,Mother Anna went inside the ICU to see her child...She was relieved to see Zebbie safe and sound.She kissed her forehead and blessed her.Zebbie gave her smile and nodded in a positive way.

After that,Shree,Chotu,Ayesha and Liza went inside the ICU and saw her lying.Zebbie looked at them and gave a heart-warming smile.They went near Zebbie and asked her to forgive them,as they had misunderstood her.She raise her hand a little and assured them that everything is fine in between them and made them understood through her eyes that their friendship will always remain unbreakable.Each of them gave a light hug and kissed her forehead and went out.

After them,Raghu sir,his wife,Sheen and the DIG also visited her and wished her speedy recovery.She smiled at them.She asked about Arjun and they assured her that he is fine.Sheen also told Zebbie that Arjun enquired about her health and he was crying when he came to know that she was in a very critical condition. Zebbie's eyes welled up by Arjun's concern and care.It also reflected love for her.

Finally,Rathod came inside to see his Laado... Zebbie also looked at him with teary eyes.She was really happy to see him safe.She noticed tears in his eyes.Rathod came near her and took a seat beside her.He held her hand and kept it near his heart and broke down... She was having a hard time controlling his tears.She couldnt see tears in his eyes... She cupped her Bhaisa's face and asked him not to cry,because his Laado is safe and sound,and right infront of him.

Rathod had a smile on his face and asked her to get well soon,because,she will have to work hard for the preparations of her Bhaisa's wedding.She smiled and nodded her head,positively.

After Rathod left,Sheen brought Arjun inside the ICU.Zebbie was feeling happy to see Arjun safe and sound.A tear drop fell from her eye.Arjun walked upto her and slowly kissed away the tear and let his lips linger there for a while.Zebbie felt at bliss.

Arjun took her hand in his and placed it over his chest.

''Yeh dil sirf aur sirf tumhare liye dharakta hai aur humesha rahega... Aaj tumne mujhe ek nayi zindagi tohfe mein di hai... Aaj meri nahi,humari jeet hui hai,Zebbie... Humesha mera saath aise hi dete rehna...
(after a pause)... Zebbie,will you do the honours of becoming my life partner and fill my life with love? Will you marry me?'' Arjun asked her.

Zebbie was shocked by that proposal and after a while,she nodded in a YES. Arjun was the most happiest person on that Earth.He took out a ring from his pocket and slid that ring in her finger.He took her hands and pecked the finger where he slid the ring.She blushed at it and slightly pecked his cheeks.

Arjun was astonished by her antics and without loosing any time,he leaned down and placed his lips on her,making sure,he doesnt pressurise her very much.It was a soft,wet kiss.He poured out all his love and care,that he had bottled up in his heart. Zebbie also responded back with the same passion.Zebbie also kissed his forehead,assuring him that she will always support him and be with him for lifetimes to come.

As he broke the kiss,he pecked her forehead and stayed with her,as Zebbie's family members,her Bhaisaa,Chotu,Ayesha,Shree,Liza,Raghu sir and his family came inside and congratulated Arjun and Zebbie for th future.It was decided that Arjun and Zebbie will get married the same day,when,Sameer and Ayesha will tie the wedding knot.

Time flew by and slowly,Zebbie recovered fully,though,she was still not allowed to do strenuous work.Everybody made a special note to it,as to not allow her to do strenuos work.

Soon,the wedding day arrived.Arjun and Rathod came to Ayesha's house where both the weddings' are going to take place.It was a grand ceremony.All the rituals took place in order.Finally,the pheras' took place and,Arjun and Rathod applied sindoor and tied the mangalsutra to their respective brides'. Finally,Sameer and Ayesha,and,Arjun and Zebbie are married.Panditji announced them as officially married couples. The newly-married couples' took the blessings' of their elders'.

Shree ordered the wedding photographer to click pictures' of the married couples' with their family and friends,and,also,lone photos of the married couples'.

It was the Bidaai time.Everybody cried for Ayesha and Zebbie and blessed the newly married couples' for a happy and blissful married life.

Soon,Arjun-Zebbie,and,Sameer and Ayesha left for thei homes',where,both the couples' will start their married life,happily.

The End.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
read all the parts
n all were wonderful
Zebbie's sacrifices for her team n brother
are appreciable
the hospital scenario was tensed n emotional one
Arjun's outburst after discovering about her critical conditio
was really emotional
but glad that finally she's fine and all the prayers worked
Arjun-Zebbie moments were lovely
loved the confession n proposal
the wedding part was awesome
finally both the couples are happy n together
beautiful ending
thanks for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
finally all is well!!!
awsomee OS

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