ArNika OS: Aadha Ishq.. *New pg 13 n 14* - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Shanu and Anika ki bonding is so beautiful and lovely...
Pramad loves Shanaya so much...
Main Pramad ki sister-in-law kam,Sister zyada hu...
Sam-Ayesha moments were too good.Ayesha always there to support Sam bhaiya..
Awww...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Hey Guys, Thannnk U All fr ur luvly cmnts nd lyks on dis Os,just wrote it fr my Zee but didnt expect sooo mch luv frm u alll...Thannkk U Soo Mch! But I hve decided to make sum changes here...Cuz Sum Readers r finding sumthing offensive so rather dan Mod's trashing my post,I think i shud make changes myself! From Now...Samiksha Kapoor will b d 2nd lead! Imagine whoeva u want...Itz not dat im afraid of sumone but i dun want my labor to go to trash! Hpe u all will understand..!!! Love❤️, Urs Shaanu...(Shaleen Ki Shanaya!)
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
respect your decision
nothing affects your wonderful works
would love to read them the way you decide
to forward the plot
thanks😊
Edited by rizwanaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
its ok shaanu..as ur wish..though the leads matter but the concept is really nice so its amazing the way u r writing... continue soon.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Later That Night,In Anika nd Shanaya's Room Anika sat bfore her mirror after taking a cold shower cuz she was vry hell tired today,arranging her jwellery back nd talking to herslf. "Yeh Arjun??? Pata nhi kaise hai??? Pehle toh mere baare me itni concerned the! Jaise hi yeh Samiksha aayi,pata ni kya ho gya?? Main toh jaise invisible hi ho gyi!!!! Aur Yeh Samiksha?? Uggghhh!! Mann to karta hai ki uss chudail ka gala hi daba doon!! Pata ni kya samajhti hai apne aap ko?? Sabko pata h kaisi h wo?? Par yeh Arjun?? Huhh! Aakhon par jaise patti bandh rakhi h unhone!! Sab Kehte h Samiksha sundar hai!! Huhhh! Agr wo sundar hai toh main kya kurup hun?? She lukd at herslf in the mirror! "Dont Underestimate The Power Of Beauty An Common Indian Woman!" She chuckled to herslf,Just den the door opened nd Shanaya stepped in. "Hey Shaanu!" Zee smiled at her sister..."Hey Anu!" Shanaya smiled nd hugged her frm d back.."Toh Meri Anu Kya kar rahi thi?" "Kuch ni re..Bas wo jwellery ko unke boxes me rakh rhi thhi! Waise tu
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
kahaan thi?" "Kuch Nhi wo Pramad k saath thhi!" "Oh..Cool!" She smiled at her sister when she noticed sumthing.. "Umm..Shaanu?" "Hmm??" " Yeh Tera Lipcolour Fael(spred) kaise gya?? Jahan tak mujhe yaad hai..Yeh Dinner k baad bhi perfect tha achanak kharab kaise ho gya??" Shanaya's Cheeks coloured. "Ohh! Acchaaa!! Kaahin Yeh Jijz ka kiya-dhara toh ni?" Anika spke naughtily,teasing her sister. "Anu!!! Tu bhi na.." Shanaya moved awy nd started removing her earrings! "Kya Shaanu?? Jijz se bol passion na thoda kam rakhe! Poori Zindagi padhi h Passion dikhane k liye..aur agr dikhana bhi h toh jab tune lipstick lagayi ho tab toh bilkul ni...Warna Sabko pata chal jayega!!" Anika laughed,Shanaya blushedd! 😳 Took her clothes nd ran inside the washroom. "Paagal PraNaya!!" She mumbld smiling. "Jaane Anjaane Yeh Kya Hogaya,Hum Nahi Maane Par Dil Kho Gaya..Yeh Umar Hi Aisi Hai,Soyi Shaayari Jaisi Hai..Thodi Aisi Thodi Waisi.." Anika penned theese words down in her beautiful writing in Her Cute Pink Diary..Shanaya
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
was now fast asleep on der bed,hugging Pramad's Photograph close to her heart! Anika remembered d momentz today she had wid Arjun nd an angellic smile crept up her beautiful face. She closed her diary put in the drawer nd Closed it. She movd towards her bed,nd smiled lukin at d cute antics of her sister. She pulled up d soft pink blankie nd covered her,then she too got in bed nd fell asleep...After 1 Month Today was Shanaya's Mehendi nd Sangeet Combined..Subah was Mehendi nd Shaam ko Sangeet. All wre bzee in preps. Sameer was running lyk a maniac frm here to there,followed by Anika nd Arjun! Of Course,Shanaya wasnt allowed to do anything! Aayesha handelled d guests.The house was buzzing wid Guests,Hustle-Bustle nd Happiness. Mehendi Ceremony was abt to start in an hour,Aayesha was busy odering d Heena Gurls, "Arrey wo Shagun ki Mehendi Pramad ke ghar se aayi ki nhi? Aa gyi?? Chalo gr8! Aur Tum log..Baaki ladkiyon ko lagane k liye Mehendi taiyaar kar li?? Nhi? Oh God! Jaldi Karo! Function bas shuru hone
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Wala hai..!!!" She spke irritably. Siddenly a steaming cup of coffee was held in front of her,she turned nd found Sameer. "Sameer?? Aap?" She smiled. "Haan Main..Subah Se dekh raha hu ki busy ho tum! Subah se tumhare pet(stomach) me ek biscuit bhi nhi gya.!! Aise kaise chalega Ashu? Yeh lo!" he forwarded her the cup wid a pack of biscuits.. "Thannk You!" She smiled warmly taking dem frm him,"Par Sameer? Aapne bhi toh kuch nhi khaya?? Aise kaise chalega Sam?" She spke. Both laughed nd den fed each other the biscuits nd drank der coffees.. Anika nd Arjun wer watching dis frm distance..Aniks smiled lukin at the luv of her Bhai nd Bhabhi! "Cute Na Zoobi Doobi?" Arjun spke to her. "Humm..Vry Vry Cute!" she answers but next moment she lukd at Arjun nd den went away making a stern face. Arjun was amazed... "Yeh Zoobi Doobi Ko Kya ho gya??" He thought nd went after her.."Zoobi?? Oyee..Zoobi Doobi?? Sunn Toh Yaar?? Gussa Hai Mujhse?? Zoobi Doobi?" Arjun called her many tymz but she didnt listen nd kept doing her work.
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
An Hour Later... Anika walked in wid Shanaya who was wearing a beautiful orange lehenga..lukin stunning! Pramad saw her coming nd forgot to blink..Arjun snapped his fingers in front of him,laughing! Pramad winked at Shanaya nd she blushed...😳 Anika was lukin stunning in her green lehenga..whereas Arjun was wearing a yellow kurta wid pyjammas nd Pramad a blue one..Arjun smiled lukin at her but she lukd away frm him..The Ceremony Started,The gurls applied mehendi on Shanaya's hands,Pramad gazed at her luvingly while the ladies danced to the tunes of dholak nd dj mixed..Anika unable to control herself got up frm her place as she was sitting next to Shaanu nd ran to dance wid the ladiez...BG Song...The Song Played In SOTY during Mehendi..Sehrenwaaliyaan.. Arjun was watching her frm a distance,drinking his champengne..The Guys had another section fr drinks nd all..She was lukinn so beautiful nd innocent! Pramad Came To Him...TBC...Precapp-Shanaya's Mehendi Nd Samiksha's Entry!! Done..
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
*unres*

haaye...
This update is so beautiful.
Anika aur Shanaya ki sister moments was portrayed really well.
Awwwieee...
Pramad ne aisa lipstick phaelaya... *ahem ahem*
Shanaya slept with Pramad's pic,close to her heart.
Aawww...
It was so perfect.
The shayari lines were really very beautiful.
Anika was sitting infront of the mirror and taking out her jewellery and arranging them in the boxes and was cursing Samiksha...
Hahah...
Loved the dialogue...
''dont underestimate the beauty of a common Indian Woman''.
Nailed it baby.
Sam-Ayesha moments were lovely and sweet.
Anika ignoring Arjun.
Hmm...
Continue soonish...
Love you,my Bong Sis...
*hugggies tightly!*
mwwwaaah...!!! :D :*
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago

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