ArIya THREE SHOTS:PYAAR TO HONA HI THA COMPLETED Pg-9, 1OCT - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
hie guyes me back
here is the last part of the story

hope you liked it
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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PART-3 and last chapter

2 days later...

all were on a outing before major rituals like mehendi sangeet and haldi and last of all, shadi was going to occur. the couples were with each other, and arjun was not willing to go, but sameer dragged him, and also riya was going, so he decided to go. but now he wished he didnt come.

they all spend most of the time in malls, coffee shops and cinema hall. riya and that guy...what is his name? vikram... they were always together, talking and laughing. arjun felt so anger for that guy, and he was surprised at his anger for a guy he barely know for 2 days. deep down he know what is this anger all about...his own incapability for laughing freely, to live his life fullest, to let go of his past and move on.

but his anger crossed all limits of sanity when accidentally the guy...what his name? vikram...his hand brushed with riya's hand. he felt like breaking the legs of that guy and bury him in hot desert sand.

they were now in mall's jewellery store, and that guy...what his name? whatever...he went aisde for a phone call. riya looked at arjun, who's mood was from morning off (well we know the reason...jealousy) she went near him.

''ap theek hain?''

arjun looked at her in anger, ''badi fikar hain meri?''

''jee?'' she was taken aback at this outburst. never in her life someone scold, or talked rude to her.

''ab jao na apne...what is his name?'' he tried to remember the guys name (VIKRAM!!!!!)

''vikram?'' she offered. arjun glared at her.

''oh naam bhi yaad hain? very nice...'' he said in full anger and sarcastic. she was not getting why he is so angry on her.

''maine kya kiya?'' she asked in low tone. arjun's anger was gone for a while, and he looked at her puppy face.

his eyes fell on the guy (VIKRAM!!!!) and his anger returned. he looked away, and riya's eyes welled up.

''fine...jo apki marzi.'' she said in low voice, and walked away. he looked at her retreating back in hurt eyes.

they all were in parking lot now. riya forgot her purse in jewellery shop.

''main bhi chalta hoon aap logon ke sath.'' vikram offered. they both headed back to the mall.

all waited for some 30 mins, and decided to head back to mall to see what is taking them so long. they were about to enter the lift, when rathore got a call, and color drained from his face.

''kya hua sameer?'' asked aisha concern. sameer looked at her, then ran like hell outside the parking lot toward exit. all ran behind him, and what they saw made their blood boil.

that guy...VIKRAM...was standing across 4 lanes of road, near a maruti van, holding riya tightly with him. he gave them a nasty smirk, and in a second entered the van dragging riya with him. all ran toward him and maruti, but when they reached the road, they were already gone.

arjun felt like earth was snatched under his feet. that guy...that son of a bitch, he kidnapped riya? his riya?

his riya?

yes...his and only his...

and now he will bring her back.

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''mere bhai sikandar ko marne ki kimat to tumhe chukani padegi acp sameer rathore...azaj sham thik 5 baje ajana fort ke paas, agar apni behen ki jaan pyari hain to.''

that asshole had called sameer after 2 hours. sameer was determined to go of course, but his brotherly love was overpowering his chief mind.

arjun made a plan, and according to that they decided to follow sameer from long distance and will wait for attack. when vikram will do something serious, they will attack together and kill everyone.

it was 5, and all team were in fort. sameer went ahead, and others were hiding safely to observe,

vikram was so over confident that he only bring 4 of his men to kill sameer, thinking maybe EF wont come with him. he got shock of his life when 4 ETF guys quickly killed his men, and now sameer was a free bull to beat the hell out of him.

he ran toward the room where riya was kept and hold her in gun point. arjun and sameer reached behind him.

''mujhe jane do acp, warna ye...'' he signaled toward riya, and arjun's eyes fell on her. he was relieved, but very angry and scared too. her face was red due to crying, eyes hollow, dress dirty, hair messed up fully, and there were several bruishes in her hand and arm, during struggle of course. he was so angry...more angry when he killed sikandar with his bare hand.

he threw away the gun, and lurged toward vikram. he was so shocked that he forgot to shoot, and in this gap arjun kicked his hand, causing the gun to fell down. he started to beat the man black and blue, vikram was about to expire.

''arjun stop it.'' sameer was struggling to free arjun but in vain. riya was very scared to see him like that. she shouted on top her voice, ''arjun!!!! chod dijiye unhe.''

arjun stopped beating hearing her voice and turned to her, his anger replaced by immense love for her. she looked at him crying, and suddenly she hold her head...and she was about to fell in floor when he ran toward her and hold her in arms.

''riya? wake up...riya!!!'' arjun shouted, but riya was drafted into unconsciousness now.

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it was a morning...new day, new start for many people.

tonight was the night of sameer aisha married, but who knew this morning will bring the end of a man called arjun?

gone the arjun who was sad, in pain, chained to his past...now there is a new man, happy, laughing, and with a new person in his life. he was never so happy.

after riya woke up, the first thing arjun did was telling what he had in his heart...saying those three magical words to her. she was happy, and after many struggle and crossing all ties of shyness, she also reciprocate his feelings. now both were happy, and rathore family was happy that both of its children got their soulmate in life.

sometimes we get our 2nd chance in very weird way...sometimes our soulmate were in front of us, but we fail to see it. we should not let go of them, we should hold them tight to us...as very lucky people get another chance to fix their life back.



THE END







Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Sorry for late comment...

Read the last two updates...
Awesome update...😊😊😊
That Vikram..😡😡😡
Loved Ariya...😊😊😊

Thanks for PM...😊😊😊


Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Arre wah arjun ji toh kuch jada hi jaldi nikal gaye! Direct payal pe hun😉
but i loved sam!!
That line: kisse dhund raha hai!
Arjun : teri behen ko!
Sam : kyyaaa??
Lol this line cracked me up! And then tum dono ka matter hai! Tum sambhalo!! Ha ha ha!
Hmm, who was the guy!
Karega pyaar mai daraar?🤔
continue soon!
Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Wow interesting !!!

so vilien ka entry ho gayi ...



Itna jaldi khatam 😭 !!!!

thoda aur hota to achsa hoti 😕
Edited by hunny1993 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
arent u on a writing spree hehe!
well good for me..got to read the whole stry!!1
Lovely updates!!!
starting with Arjun making her wear that payal..to her shyness..
then that beep Vikram entry which I did find it to be strange!!
And arjun jealously hehe woh toh hona hi tha!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
awesome ending dear.. Loved it.. Arjun feeling jealous.. Riya not able to understand.. Vikram turns out to sik brother.. Arjun nearly killed vikram.. Finally ariya confessed their love.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
again this one is for last update!
so all were having gud tym and here Arjun was being colored in green!
well his instincts werent wrong vikram did turn out to be beeep!!!!!!!1
aww he made riya cry a little...!!!
again arjun saves the day and damsel in distress..!!!
well done arjun u killed Him with ur bare hands!
well Ariya stry was the slow motion one neither the fast pace one..the correct apt one...a end for one person..sad arjun
nd beginning for two new lifes samesha nd Ariya :)
lovely short stry!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
fab end yaar
pls mere fav raanhjna update karo na
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Le khatam bhi kar diya!!
But it was like a 3G speed journey! Awesome !
Arjun saved her! But everytime sam attracted me.
Lol ye kya ho raha hai mujhe?
The best part was those ending lines. Very true.

Very beautiful update.

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