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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
nice start dear...
priya , she is really beautiful...
continue soon dear...
and send pm to me the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
I am so sorry not for posting. I actually have assessments at the moment. I hardy get time.
Chapter 2:
It was Priya's second week in the India. She would come with Arjun to the head quarters. She was used of keeping extra clothes, incase Arjun plans on staying the night. She was really close to Sakshi.
"I have talk about something important." Priya told Sakshi.
"Yeah. Go on." Sakshi replied putting down her notes.
"I know you love him." Priya said smiling.
"Uh. What?" Sakshi said off-guard.
"Love." Priya.
"I love who?" Sakshi asked a bit nervously.
"Dad. Who else." Priya replied smiling.
"I-" Sakshi began. She had turned crimson red. "I do."
"Great. Now I've got something interesting to do." Priya said happily.
"Ahh. What?" Sakshi asked.
"Mission ArAkshi." Priya said smiling.
"Mission what?" Sakshi asked confused.
"I am going to get you two together." Priya said.
"Haha. Go ahead." Sakshi said laughing.
"I am serious. People were used of coming to me, so I could get them together with someone." Priya told Sakshi.
"Okay. Okay. Do what you want." Sakshi replied still taking it as a joke. Priya just smiled.
*****
"Dad?" Priya said coming in his cabin. Arjun was reading some case file.
"Hmmm." Arjun replied still looking at the file.
"Sakshi's coming over today." Priya told him.
"What?" Arjun looked at her in confusion. "Why?"
"I want to talk about something important with her." Priya replied.
"Talk to me." Arjun said putting down the file.
"Yeah. But it's girl talk. I can't talk to you about *cough* everything." Priya replied.
"Oh. Umm. Sure." Arjun replied embarassed.
"Yeah!" Priya said and hugged him. "Thank You!"
"You're welcome." Arjun replied she skipped out of the room.
****
"You're coming over today." Priya told Sakshi.
"What?" Sakshi looked at her in disbelief.
"Yeah. Dad doesn't mind." Priya said smiling.
"What did you tell him?" Asked Sakshi.
"Just told him. I wanted to have girl talk." Priya said sitting back in the chair.
"Yup. You're Arjun's daughter." Sakshi said shaking her head.
****
On there way home. Priya had insisted Sakshi to sit in the front. She was sitting back. She had the remote to the SUV's tape. She played the song from her collection.
"Main rang sharbaton ka.."
She took out her phone and pretended to not pay attention to them anymore. She smsed Sakshi.
"DO something."
Sakshi: What?
Priya: Anything. Turn up the volume or something.
Sakshi: Why?
Priya: Uggh. Make him look at you. Act as if you didn't notice.
Sakshi: Okay.
Sakshi turned up the volume just the way Priya had said. Arjun looked at her and she pretented not to notice. Arjun actually noticed her dress now. She was looking very pretty. Little did he know that Priya had silently taken a picture of his expression.
****
In Priya's room. She was showing her the picture.
"look at the expression." Priya said smiling in victory. "He likes you. he just doesn't know."
"Really?" Sakshi looked at her in disbelief.
"Yes. And we will make him find out his feeling." Priya said hugging her and Arjun moved from their door and he noticed them hugging from the slightly open door.
He was surprised to see the love between the two.
"Promise?" Sakshi asked.
"Pakka wala promise." Priya replied.
Arjun walked away but there was a smile on his face.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13

Love priya and Sakshi s bonding.

very nice update!
Best of luck with your assessments!
Edited by Sakuu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
very nice update
so mission arakshi started by priya
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
wow...
very nice
I love priya
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
priya and sakshi bond was amazing!!!!!!!!!!u written well...priya's plan worked out...cont soon...do PM me while updating...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Bonding between them amazing
Do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Love sakshi and priya bonding..they get along soo well...eager to read about what happen next..continue soon and all the very best for your exams 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
very nice story...waiting for your updates...😉😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 3:
Arjun was sitting in his room and thinking about how Priya and Sakshi were hugging. He was actually happy that Priya had someone to guide her through.

"Dad!" Priya came from behind and breaking his train of thoughts.\

"Yes?" Arjun replied.

"Can you drop Sakshi?" Priya said.

"Sure. Let me get the keys." Arjun said getting up.

"Can I come?" Priya asked.

"Um. Why?" Arjun asked.

"Because I want to buy some ice cream from the store, plus I need lots of coloured pens and a new notebook."

"Note book?" Arjun looked at her. "Didn't you buy it last weekend?"

"Yeah. But the assignment I am working on requires lots of notes." Priya told him.

"Okay. Come." Arjun replied.

****
In the car, Arjun and Sakshi were sitting in front and Priya was enjoying seeing them from behind.
Priya played the song:
"Tayyab Ali pyar ka dushman, hai hai."

That made Sakshi laugh and Arjun to look at her again. Arjun was mesmerised by her innocence but he regained his composure quickly, but not quick enough because had already snapped a picture.

Arjun dropped Sakshi and was about to leave when he got a call. He had been called urgently by the DIG.


"Sakshi?" Arjun asked. "Can you look after Priya while I go?"

"Sure." Sakshi replied and Priya stepped out of the car. Priya could have argued over the fact that she was old enough to be left alone but when it came to security, Arjun was right.

"Thank You." Arjun said and sped off.

"Come on." Sakshi exclaimed motioning Priya to come behind her.

****
"Why are you determined to get us together?" Sakshi asked.

"Because after mom left, dad has been nothing more than the living dead. He's afraid of laughing and smiling because he believes that it will hurt him later. I want you and dad to get together because I can see mom in you!" Explained Priya.

Sakshi just hugged her and comforted her.

****
Arjun came late at midnight. To his horror he found the door open at Sakshi's place. He ran inside and found nothing. The house was a mess.

"SAKSHI? PRIYA?" Arjun shouted. Suddenly there came a sound from the kitchen. Arjun ran there to find Sakshi and Priya coming out of the trap door.

"Are you okay? Kya hua yahan?" Arjun said coming to both of them.

"Yeah. Some people broke in but we hid the trap door." Sakshi told Arjun.

"Why didn't you call me?" He asked both of them.

"Itne niche signals nahi hotey." Sakshi told him.

"Sakshi, you're coming to our place. Agar abhi bande aye hein, toh wo baad mein be a saktey hein. I can't risk your life." Arjun told her. "Grab some stuff and come. And you'll be staying there until we find those guys."

Priya was jubilant. Finding those people who take at least a week and for her a week was a gift from God. She had already made the plans in her mind.

****

The next day was Sunday, and everyone was home. Sakshi was wearing a light blue anarkali:


Priya was wearing a

And Arjun was wearing:


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