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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome concept
Continue dr

Thanx 4 pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohh wow..
awesome CS...
looking forward.to read..
cont soon..
nd do pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey 😊
interestng character sketch
haila...hamare arjun flirt 😲 😆
and rathod waiting for someone dead...
plz do cnt soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice CS...😊😊
Continue soon...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1: YAADEIN JEE LENE DO

A man is peacefully sleeping in his Kingsize bed n wishpering something in his sleep.

Man- Amm... Jaan u r so irressitable.Plz dont tease me like dis. Cme to ur king in dis kingsize bed.

(And he pulled d girl in his dream n girl saying to leave her. Soon man realises change in girl's voice. So again he wishpers.)

Man- Baby suddenly tumhari awaaj mere sevent Billu ki tarah kyun lag rhi hai.

Here in real a sleepy man holds d hand of his servant n trying to get out of his arms.

Servant- Baba plz chodo mujhe. Main aapka girlfrnd nhi hun. Main Billu.

But d man is not in mood to leave him. So finally he decided to wake him up frm his dreamland as he does always. He takes a jug full of water placed at side table nd emptied it all on him.Man wake up frm his sleep nd found himself fully drenched.

Man (yelled)- BILLU !!

Billu (angrily)- Arjun Baba agar aap aise karte rahoge na to main kaam chod kar chala jaaunga. Phir rehna Bade Baba ke sath.

Yes d man is our Arjun, who was flirting with girl in his dream nd its daily scene. And Billu always wake him liike he did sometime before. Arjun settled him in his wet bed nd Billu give him his bed tea.

Arjun- Billu tu agar jana bhi chahe to jaa nhi sakta. Tu mujhe chod sakta hai par apne Bade Baba ko bilcul nhi.

Billu- Sirf unhi ki...Sirf unhi ki wajah se hu.Warna main kab ka gaon chala gaya hota.Arjun baba aap koi acchi ladki dekh kar shadi kyun nhi kar lete. Phir mujhe yeh subah wala atyachar nahi sehna padta.

Arjun- Ho gaya tera!!! Chal mere office ke kapde nikal. (going towards bathroom) Rolex watch, Rei ban glasses.( shut d door bt open it immidiately)

Billu- Kuch bhul gaye kya???

Arjun- Meri fav deo !!!!!

Billu- Ji Baba!!!!

And Arjun goes to take his shower nd here Billu arranging his belongings. He goes to his vast wardrob n take out a white shirt n blue jeans 4 office. Goes to open d first drawer of dressing table n frm d collection of various watch picks rolex. Dan he opens middle drawer full of branded glasses n take out Rei Ban. He arranges everythng nd walk out of room nt b4 informing him work is done.

Billu- Arjun Baba sab nikal kar rakh diya hai. Main bahar jaa raha hu. Bade baba naste ke liye aate honge aap bhi jaldi aa jao.

Arjun- theek hai.

Billu cme out n goes to kitchen to prepare breakfast for his Babas. Bt before going to kitchen he stopped outside a room nd knocked. Bt he dont get any reply.

Billu- Bade baba jaldi taiyaar hoke nicche aa jana. Aaj naste me apka fav paneer capsicum sanwhich bana raha hu. Jaldi aana.

Billu didnt wait 4 any reply nd goes to prepare breakfast. After some time Arjun joined Billu nd he served him his fav dish poha. Arjun asked him.

Arjun- Tere Bade Baba kaha hai. Office chala gaya kya???

Billu- Kal raat 3 Baje raat ko ghar aaye the. Sayad so rahe ho.

Arjun- Billu tu kiski baat kar raha hai. Chahe jitni bhi late kyun na ho wo tym pe uthega aur jog par jaaega.

Than dey hears doorbell. Billu goes to open d door nd finds milkman dere to recieve his payment. Billu asked him to cme in nd goes to bring money.

Billu- Kitna hua???

Milkman- 1 aur 2 tarikh ko doodh aaya nhi to 3 august se aaj 3 sept tak ka 945 rupaye.

Hearing d date 3rd sept. Both Arjun nd Billu get shocked nd in shocked Arjun left d plate in his hand. Both passed tensed luk at each other.

Milkman- Sahab mere paise.

Arjun didnt wait 4 a second nd went upstair. Billu hurriedly paid amt to milkman. Milkman sensed sumthng wrong went n asked d matter to Billu.

Milkman- Arre Billu yeh Arjun Bhaiya is tarah uper kyun bhag kar gaye. Sab thik to hai na.

Billu- Bhagwan kare sab thik ho..

Milkman left frm dere nd directly goes to upstair.

And he finds Arjun banging on door. Billu also joined him.And banging door furiously.

Arjun- Bhai plz darwaza khol. (to Billu) Billu doctor ko phone karo. Pakka isne ulta sidha kuch kiya hai.

Billu- Phone kar diya hai. Wo aate hi honge.

Now banging d door of his Bade Baba's room he voiced.

Billu- Bade Baba plz darwaza kholo. Bade baba...

But no answer...

Billu- Mujhe pehle hi samajh jana chahiye tha jab Baba us bade carton ke sath kal raat late se aaye.Samajh jana chahiya tha ki unme daru ki botlein hogi.

Arjun- What!!! Carton??? Matlab ek bhi bottle nhi bacchi hogi. Lagta hai gate todna padega.

As d door is made of half glass nd half wood. Arjun goes to nearby stool table n throw away d beautiful vash on it n bang it on door making glass of oneside break into pecies. Arjun put his one hand inside nd open d door lock.

Both Arjun and Billu step inside and witness d most scariest scene dt dey ever face on 3rd september.Arjun finds his bestfrnd n Billu his Bade Baba at d bedside. In his left hand he holds a wine bottle nd in right holds her photo frame. He is luking nowhere just stairing at d pool outside his big balcony.

Both Arjun & Billu moves 2 him n in thier way see a garland on ground.
Arjun picks it n goes to man.

Arjun wishpers his name "SAM."

Yes d man is his Sameer.
Edited by Samara92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arjun unlock d door nd stepped inside with Billu. Only to find d once a beautifull room in total mess.
Curtains on floor lying, pillows cushions throw away, all d vash used for beauti is now shattered in pecies, broken mirror, bedshit half on bed n half on floor. No cloths on wardrobe. Broken tv, music system, broken glass tea table. Room is in its worst condition. In evry place a broken or emptied liqour bottle depicting d last nyt's storm.

Arjun searched for his frnd nd finds him sitting on floor at bedside n gazing out at his pool on his terrace balcony.

Arjun nd Billu moves to him n in thier way see a garland lying on ground. Arjun turn to fireplce wall n finds it emptied. They neared him. There he is holding may b last wine bottle n sipping its last drop in left nd in ryt a photo frame is. He hold dt frame tightly to his heart n tears flowing frm his eyes.

Arjun goes to him nd places his hand on left shoulder. He wispers his name "SAM !!!"

Yes d man in all messed up room is non other dan Sameer Rathod... Etf chief totaly heartbroken.

Sameer realises his frnds presence. He turns to his left n finds Arjun n Billu. He makes himself stand nd goes limpping to fireplace. There he placed photo of his love, his "Sameera" who has posed her best to look like Royal.

He chukled at remembering dis pic.

FLASHBACK ~

Sameera- Sameer hasso mat. Ek to meri photo acchi aati nhi aur uper se Maa sa ko meri single royal look wali photo chahiye.

Sameer- Arre hasu nhi to aur kya karu yaar. Tum serious mode me acchi nhi lagti. Aur royalness k liye serious look chahiye.

Sameera- Agar ye Maa sa ne na kaha hota to me bilkul bhi photo click nhi karwati. And u r not helping a bit.

Sameer- Ok. Last tym. Be ready.

She posed 4 photo n he clicked it.

Sameera- Kaisa hai. Mujhe dekhane do. (she snatched camera n saw her pic. Sameer hold her frm waist n placed hi chin on her shoulder)

Sameer- Not bad to be MRS SAMEERA SAMEER RATHOD!!!!

FLASHBACK END ~

Sameer cme back to realty hearing familiar female voice.

Sameer!!! Yeh kya haal kiya hai tumne, A girl cme inside with a docter.

Sameer (smiling)- Roshni Tu yaha is tym. Mere khayal se in dono ne sirf Doc Rachna ko phone kia hoga.

Doc Rachana- Jab Billu ne phone kia main us waqt Roshni ke NGO me thi.

Sameer (cooly)- Ohh !!

Seeing Sameer's cool reaction irked Arjun nd he decided to leave bt at 1st he goes to fireplace n place d garland in its ryt place dt is Sameera's photo.And leave angrily only to be followed by Roshni.

Dr Rachana- To Sameer is baar kaha kaha chot pahunchai.

Sameer- Kuch nhi doc bas normal cuts hai pairo me. Aap wound par ointment lage k ek titanus ka injection de do.

Doc analyse his wound n angrily said.
Doc- Normal!! chote bade milakar 20 se jyada glass pecieces pairon me hai. Tumhe dard hoga let me inject u.

Sameer (roughly)- Doc sirf titanus nt neend ka injection. Warna hosh me aane ke bad ye bhul jaaunga ki aap humari family doc ho.
Doc sighed n do as per his instruction.

While doc removing glass pecieces it seems like he is enjoying d pain.
All done nd doc get out of his room.

Outside hall Arjun is hell worried nd Roshni is consoling him. Dey see cming out of his room.
Doc to Arjun- Arjun Sameer ka case time to time bigadta jaa raha hai.
Arjun- I know doc. Par wo Sameera ki yaad se bahar nhi aana chahta.
Doc- Usse lana hoga. Warna wo ek din apne aap ko khatm kar lega.
Use ehsash dilao ki Sameera ab mar chuki hai. Wo uski zindagi me kabhi laut kar nhi aaegi.
Suddenly they heared a roaring voice of Sameer.

Sameer- How dare u??
How dare u Doc Rachna. Aap soch bhi kaise sakti hai ki main Sameera ko bhul jaau.
Kabhi nhi. Aisha kabhi nhi ho sakta
Duniyya ka koi insaan, koi bhi ladki mujhe Sameera ko na bhoolane se rok sakta hai. Samjhi aap.

Saying so he moved out of house taking his racing car not etf suv.
He sits inside n moved out furriously making screeching voice at parking.
Now he is driving madly at road. Forgeting every thng forgetting traffic rules, forgetting he is resonsible etf chief. Just driving madly to his destination.

While driving he play radio at high volume n d song playing is frm movie Murder 3:



MAT AAZMA RE,...
PHIR SE BULA LE,...
APNA BANA LE,...
HU BEKARAR...

TUJHKO HI CHAHA...
DIL HAI YE KARTA...
HA BETAHANSA, TUJHSE HI PYAR...

(he increases speed n sings)

HASRATEIN BAR-BAR BAR-BAR
YAAR KI KARO...
KHAWAISE BAR-BAR BAR-BAR
YAAR KI KARO...
CHAHTEIN BAR-BAR BAR-BAR
YAAR KI KARO...
MANATEIN BAR-BAR BAR-BAR
YAAR KI KAO...

(tears rolling at his cheek)

HUM ZAR-ZAR BHI ROTE HAI
KHUD SE KHAFA BHI HOTE HAI
HUM YE PEHLE...
KYUN NA SAMJHE...
TUM FAKAT MERE...

DIL KA KARAR KHOTE HAI
KAHA CHAI SE BHI SOTE HAI
HUM NE DIL ME...
KYUN BICHAYE ...
SHAQ YE GEHRE...

(wear his glasses n speeded car 2 last)

HASRATEIN BAR-BAR BAR-BAR
YAAR KI KARO...
KHAWAISE BAR-BAR BAR-BAR
YAAR KI KARO...
CHAHTEIN BAR-BAR BAR-BAR
YAAR KI KARO...
MANAREIN BAR-BAR BAR BAR
YAAR KI KARO...


~ To be cont. ~
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice part..
thank for the pm..
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
great update 😊 thank you for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww...such a mindblowing start...

feeling sooo bad for my poor Sam...

total Aashiqui 3 to uspe hi banni chahiye...

u started the story vid a baaang...

lovely...

continue soon

love
Aisha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice story and different concept ... Arjun ji is a casanova ... Bechara Billu... You have all the three I mean Roshni, Sakhshi and Riya in this story so I m eagerly waiting ke how the story will be... And I really feel bad for Sameer ... Poor heart broken soul... Thanks ...Plz update next part soon and Plz pm me :)

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