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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
For sure Sameer hot lagega dhoti mein! ;)
Awesome update!

Cont. soon! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Teaser:

Sameer- Arjun hume us ladki se baat karni hogi.
Arjun- Baat karne ja raha hai ya line marne.
Sameer- case se related hai warna us ghamandi ladki ki sakal tak na dekhu.
Sometimes later...
Sameer- suniye...
Sameera- om namoh narayan...
Sameer- nahoh narayan. Kal k hadse ki baat karni hai.
Sameera- om namoh narayan.. Om namoh narayan... Om namoh narayan ( chantting nd chantting)
Sameer- kya tum plz mandir ke rounds lagana band karogi. Aur sath me ye namoh narayan.
Sameera (showing eyes angrily & chantting)- om namoh narayan...

Somewhere else...
Man- Malik koi pardesi bitiya ke sath jabardasti phere le raha hai.
Malik (roaring agrily)- gadi nikalo. Aaj wo zinda nhi bachega. Usne meri beti k uper aankh uthai hai. NARSINGH NATH THAKUR KI BETI...

PS: Updt jaldi chahiye to cmmnt fast.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very very nice teaser...update soon...on namo narayan...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART: 3

One girl clad in beautiful lehenga is throwing her stuff out frm her balcony nd also jumped down.
When she get out of main gate for once she looked at d name plate.
Girl- sorry mom dad but i hv to do dis. Aap log kyu nhi samajh rahe hai ki i want to live my life freely nd dis marriage wont let me do.
So i m going to chase my dream my passion. ETF. I m cming.

Inside girl's house...
One man- Arre kapoor sahab Aisha bitiya ko bulaiye. Muhurat ka waqt nikla jaa raha hai.
Mr kapoor to his wife- Reena Aisha ko lekar aaiye.
Mrs kapoor- Ji...
Sometimes later...
Mrs kapoor runningly cming down frm stairs.
Mrs kapoor- suniye Aisha... Wo...wo...
Mr kapoor- Phir se bhag gayi. Na jane kab sudhregi. Bahut bardasht kar liya ab aur nhi usse batana padega ki agar wo police officer hai to main bhi police officer ka baap.
Usne sari hade par kar di hai.
Mrs kapoor- suniye gussa mat hoiye na. Galti ho gayi.
Mr kapoor- Reena galti ek bar ya do baar hoti hai 24 baar nhi. 24 bar shadi k mandap se bhagi hai.
Mr kapoor to man- Sharma ji i m really sorry. Aap barat wapas le ja sakte hai.
Mr sharma- Arre kapoor sab jab aisha shadi k liye taiyar hi nhi thi to ye natak kyun kiya.
Mr kapoor- nhi sharma ji wo taiyar thi jab tak ki uska mumbai se call letter nhi aaya tha.
Mr sharma- agar wo shadi ke baad kam karna chah rhi thi to humse baat karti. Is tarah humari naak katane ki kya jarurat thi.
Chalo bhaiyo.
Barat left frm Kapoor mansion. Mr kapoor seat on sofa defeatedly n mrs kapoor consolling him.
Mrs kapoor- sambhaliye apne aap ko. Kuch dino me aisha aa jaegi phir hum usse baat karenge.
Mr kapoor (angrily)- Ab bhi baat karne k liye kuch baccha hai kya. Par ab aur nhi. Aisha ke liye ab is ghar ke darwaje hamesha ke liye band ho gaye hai. Agar usse humari parwah nhi to hume bhi nhi.
Hum sochenge ki humari koi aulad hi nhi.
Mrs kapoor in mind- Aishu ye kya kiya tune...

Somewhere at Mumbai...
1:00 AM
Few men r loading some consignment in a truck nd some r guarding.
Man talking on phone- Sahab sab mal truck me load ho raha hai. Kuch der me saaman nikal jaaega.
Man on other side- Kuch gadbad nhi honi chahiye. Ye maal bahut hi zaruri hai.
1st Man- Ji sahab...
And he cut d call. But unkwn to them few man r listening him through micro phone placed inside his phone.

ETF headquater...
Arjun- Riya u knw what today u r looking really hot...
Riya- Sir plz agar aap bekar ki batein chod kar kaam pe dhyan de to accha hoga.
Arjun- thats not fair baby. Main tumhari tarif kar raha hu aur tum ho ki...
Riya in mind- oh god plz, help me plz. Is chipku senior se bachao. Mujhe to doubt hota hai ki ye aur sameer sir frnds hai. Kaha sameer sir aur kaha ye...
Bhagwan Sameer sir ka undercover jana jaruri tha kya. Ise kyun nhi bheja.
Arre main to bhul hi gayi ladkiya jo waha nhi hongi.
Her trance is broken by a tap on her shoulder. she luk at d person and give her dimple smile.
Riya- sakshi ye bhi koi time hai aane ka. Itni der kaha laga di.
Sakshi- Arre riya dad ke sath ek case pe discuss kar rahi thi aur tum sab ke liye khana pack karne me der ho gayi. I knw case k karan tum sab ne kuch nhi khaya hoga. Case bhi complicated hone ke karan tum log ghar bhi nhi vayw. So hows improvement. Sameer ne call kiya kya?
Riya (worriedly)- abhi tak nhi..
Sakshi smiled at her worry.
Sakshi- He vl b fine. Aur mere mr Majnoo kaha hai.
Riya- Mujh par line marte marte thak gaye to gaye honge kisi aur ke paas.
Sakshi- awwe dont be rude. He is cute.
Riya- cute my foot.
Sakshi- thats only bcoz u love someone else.
Riya (shockingly)- how do u know? I mean there is nothing like dis.
Sakshi- u can lie but what abt ur eyes... Whenevr u see him ur eyes brims with love.
Riya- Stop talking non sense sakshi. Sameer sir ke liye meri ankho me respect hai aur kuch nhi.
Sakshi- Maine kab sameer ka naam liya. So ur love is Sameer. Choice is good but thoda akdu nhi hai kya.
Riya- Kamse kam sarif to hai naki us arjun ki tarah.
Sakshi- Riya u knw na i love him. Main uski burai nahi sun sakti.
Riya- ok madam. Aur jao unhe bhi bula lo khane ke liye.
After dt they had thier late night dinner cum early mrng breakfast.

Sometimes later...
Sameer on mic- Team its show time.
Arjun who was already ready to do some action scene barged in an old factory with few officers nd nab almost all d criminal who were loading huge consignment of arms.
And d leader of all goon try to escape but one man frm his side cme in his way nd grabbed him by his collor.
Criminal- Sehzaad tune ye sab karwaya hai. Tujhe zinda nhi chodunga main.
Arjun bend down nd hold criminal nd slapped him vry hard.
Arjun- Gadhe pinjare main tu hai aur sher ko chala hai dhamki dene.
Nahi samjha koi baat nhi mujhe samjhane main maza aata hai.
Ye jo tera sehzaad hai na wo aur koi nhi balki etf ka chief ACP SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHOD HAI. SAMJHE YA SAMJHAYUN.
And dan dey hear sound of clapping n as expectd its Sakshi.
Sameer- Sakshi taliya bajana chodo or apne article k liye material le lo. Arjun main ghar ja rha hu, tc.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sameer handed over d case to Arjun nd himself moved towards an unkwn path. After case he is feeling very low so decided to go to his fav place nd dt is temple. First he goes home to freshen up nd headed to temple.
Pandit sees him and ask him his well being. He also answered him. When Sameer turned to go his eyes fell on one couple. Pandit also followed his gaze nd replied to his unasked question.
Pandit- Dono ne mannat mangi thi ki jab indono ki shadi ho jaaegi to dono sath mein mandir parikrama karenge. So wahi kar rahe hai.
Sameer smiled at dt and also recall his past regarding madir parikrama.
FLASHBACK~
Due to some tod phod attitude on last case of Samjun both got transfer frm mumbai to a village named Narsinghpur.
Dt time Samjun were on a mission to expose d illegal activity occuring in Narsinghpur village.
During dere last night petrolling they find a dead body. They searched whole place but found nothing nd now its morning time. There was dense mist. Suddenly Sameer saw a shadow. He decided to follow it, assuming dt d person may b some killer.
After some stalking he reached at nearby waterfall. At first he was not to see anything due to mist but later he saw a girl was taking bath. He decided to go back but when he luked at her smiling face he stopped nd couldn't stop himself frm stairing at her flickering eyelashes, her kohl eyes, her shivering lips, her wrist full of bangles, her swt n simple earing showing her simplicity, her curvacious waist adorned by a beautiful kamarbandh. But when he was done with ogling he recognise d same girl who had slapped him at Banaras.
Sameer- What is she doing here?
Again he luked at waterfall she was gone frm dere. But one shiny object caught his eyes. It was her kamarbandh. He picked dt n kept in his pocket. And turned to go back.
Later at crime spot...
Arjun- kaha chala gaya tha.
Sameer- Maine ek shadow dekhk aur Mujhe laga killer hai.
Arjun- To piche chal diya. Waise kaun tha.
Sameer- tha nhi thi. Banaras wali.
Arjun- Banaras wali. Oh wo thapad wali. Mujhe bataya nhi ki Bhabhi yahi thi main bhi mil leta.
Sameer- Bhabhi my foot. Na jane apne aap ko samjhti kya hai kahi ki koi hoor pari hai. Gamandi kahi ki.
Arjun- kuch der pehle to ghur ghur ke dekh raha tha.
Sameer- kya kaha?
Arjun- kuch nahi.
Actually when sameer was missing frm his place nd while searching him he reached near waterfall nd saw his frnd ogling at d same girl.

Sometimes later...
Arjun reading autopsy report.
Sameer- kya likha hai report me?
Arjun- Khoon kisi sharp object se kiya gaya hai may be hasia ( used to cut crops).
Sameer- Death timing?
Arjun- Lash milne ke 8 ghante pehle. Matlab around subah k 4:00 baje.
Sameer- Tab to us time kisi ka katl hote dekh pana muskil hai. As in us time sab log so rahe hote hai.
One constable- Sab nhi sahab. Us waqt choti thakurain paas ke laxmi narayan mandir me puja k liye jaati hai. Wo jharne me naha kar pass ke bagiche se phool tod kar phir mandir jati hai.
Sameer- aur ye sab tumhe kaise pata.
Constable- sahab meri beti thakur sahab ki haweli me kaam karti hai. Aur wo kabhi kabhi choti thakurain k sath bhi jati hai.
Arjun- to kya kal tumhari beti us ladki k sath gayi thi.
Constable- Nahi sahab uski tabiyaat kharab hai to wo nhi gayi.
Sameer- yeh thakur ki haweli ke darshan ka waqt aa gaya hai.
Kuch der bad they went to Thakur ki haweli...
Sameer- thakur sahab hume aap ki beti se milna hai.
Hume lagta hai ki kal raat ke katl ke barein me wo kuch janti ho.
Thakur- Aap ko aisa kyun lagta hai.
Sameer- aapki beti roj usi ilake se hokar mandir k liye jati hai.
Thakur- Par kal nhi gayi thi. Unki tabiyat thik nhi thi.
Arjun- its ok thakur ji ab hum chalte hai.
Outside haweli...
Sameer- Arjun mujhe is thakur pe bharosa nhi hai.
Arjun- U r ryt. Tera sasur jhoot bol raha hai.
Sameer- sasur!!
Arjun- Hall me teri madam ki itni badi badi pictures thi. I wonder how u miss dem.
Sameer- oh to wo...
Arjun- beemar nhi hai. Warna koi itni subah kadkadati thand me jharne par nhi jaaega.
Sameer- yes! 1min What?
Arjun- hey maine use sirf pani me jate dekha. Dore to tu dal raha tha.
Sameer- Hume usase milna hoga.
Arjun- Milne ja rahe ho ya line marne.
Sameer-oh plz Arjun us ghamandi ladki se baat tak na karu.
Arjun- Chal tere jhoot ko sach maan liya.
Sometime later...
Pandit- Sameera bitiya puja ho gayi ab tum pran lekar parikrama suru karo. Par ek baat yaad rakhana tumhe samay par parikrama khatam karni hogi. Uske bad hi vrat ka prarambh safal ho paega.
Sameera- ji pandit ji.
Pandit- aur ha beti parikrama karte waqt om namoh narayan ka jaap karti rehna aur ye jaap tum madhya ratri tak karti rahogi. Ise bich me rokna maat.
When she starts her jaap & parikrama same time Sameer enter in temple. Sameer's heart skiped after seeing her clad in green saree. She was luking d fresh breeze of autumn. He neared her & she remembered n ignord him nd starts her parikrama
Sameer- suniye...
Sameera- om namoh narayan.
Sameer- namoh narayan.
Sameer- am...mujhe apse kuch baat karni hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice update...ayesha 24th time bhag gayee 😆

riya loves sameer 😉
loved flirt arjun...

flash back was lovely...continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome teaser.
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice teaser...
Waiting for the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sameer went to meet Sameera so dt he can ask her abt last nights murder. But to his dismay Sameera was chantting only "Om namoh narayan".
Sameer- Ammm... Mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai.
Sameera (chantting & doing parikrama)- Om namoh narayan.
She was doing parikrama & he was following her. And tried to block her way.
Sameer (following her)- Arre yeh namoh narayan ka raag alapna band karo. Mujhe...
Again he blocked her but she dogged him n doing parikrama.
Sameera (eyeing angrily n chantting)- om namoh narayan
while chantting she thinks in mind.
Sameera (chantting & talking in mind)- Oh god! Yeh bewakuf samajh kyun nhi raha hai ki main puja kar rhi hu aur 151 parikrama woh bhi 10 min ke ander karne tak nhi ruk sakti. Aur ye na samajh mera rasta rok raha hai.
On the other hand Sameer was vry angry. Whenever he tried to ask question she only replied om namoh narayan. Getting irritated by her chants he once again tried to block her way but in return Sameera stamped her foot so hard on his foot. To which Sameer winced in pain.
Same time pandit look at d duo fighting. He called Sameer n told him abt d parikrama nd om namoh narayan.
Sameer- what? 151 rounds in 10 mins me.
Knowing d matter Sameer decided to wait for her. But with passage of time he was getting impatient. On the othr She was cursing him for wasting her time as time is abt to finish and still she has to take 7 rounds nd it assumed to b impossible.
Sameer who became restless after so much wait nd she was still not done, decided to take matter in his hand.
He held her hand nd drag her fast.
While he was dragging her one man saw them nd ran to a haweli.
Man- Malik... Ek ajnabee bitiya ke sath jabardasti phere le raha hai.
Malik (angrily)- Gadi nikalo. Aaj wo zinda nhi bachega. Ussne galat ladki par aankh uthai hai. Usne NARSINGH NATH THAKUR KI BETI KO HATH LAGAYA HAI. CHALO.
Back at temple...
Sameer forcefully drag her nd now only 3 rounds had to b done. She shrugged his hand nd moved alone to cmplt d rest rounds. But her Narayan ji had stored sumthing else. When she shrugged his hand her duppata tangled with his watch now unknwn to her he was also doing parikrama with her. Atlast she cmpltd her parikrama but didnt stop her chants, which irked him a lot.
Sameer- vl u just stop ur chants now.
She nodded her head negatively.
Sameer- But why?
She tried to explain in sign but due to her chants he didnt get anything.
Sameer finally put his hand on her mouth to stop her but she was still chantting under his palm.
Suddenly they heard d sound of bullet firing. They luked at entrance only to find Narsingh Nath Thakur standing with his rifle aiming at Sameer.
NNT- Tumhari himmat kaise huyi meri beti ko hath lagane ki.
Aftr dt sameer pulled of his hands nd tried to explain but in no time Thakur reached to him nd started to beat him.
Sameera get shocked frm sudden mar pit. She also tried to stop her father but due to Maun vrat cant speak till midnight.
On the other Sameer tried to explain but her father was not in any mood to talk.
He punched him vry hard which made him fall on ground. Nd d kamarbandh of Sameera also fell frm his shirt pocket. Sameera saw it nd million dollor smiled appear on her face. But next moment she frowned at his condition. He is bleeding heavily. Man of her father made him stand nd his dad aimed at him.
Suddenly there was sound of bullet. Whole place was in silent.
Flashback end~

When Sameer cme back to present his eyes was full of tears. He hurriedly left frm temple nd went to Office.

Sometimes later...
Sameer- team aaj se hume ek aur person join karne wala hai as a encounter specialist.
Arjun- Sam person he hai ya she...
Sameer glared him nd moved out of conference room.
Sometimes later at pantry area... All r discussing abt new recruit.
Shree- i hope ki wo ladki ho.
Riya- no way warna ek aur ko romeo ke line sunne padenge.
Sakshi- dont b so rude riya. He is nice guy.
And all burst in laughter.
Shree- main to chahta hu ki ladki aaye.
Arjun- Tumhare mu main ghee shakkar shree but mujhe nhi lagta ki wo koi ladki hogi. I mean gun chalana itni aasan baat nhi hai. Aur encounter specialist banna kisi ladki ke bas ki bath nhi.
Saying so he snatched d pen of riya to which she was chewing nd throw it on d floor.
And in d same time Sameer cme out of his cabin and a girl in blue check top nd black jeans cme in reception area.
Sameer to staff- Neha mehta ki case file mujhe mili kyun nhi. Arvind ministry k bill ko check karke sign le lena.
Sneha- sir malad bunglow case ki file apne mangi thi.
Sameer is hell busy in work nd surrounded by his staff. Arjun sees all dis drama nd pray to god.
Arjun - hey kya kabhi mera dost kisi ladki ki bahon me milega. Meri yahi khwaish hai puri kardo plz.
Suddenly dere is huge sound of "dhadaam".
All d staff of etf r shocked nd looking down at two person in awweee.
When sameer was busy in work he missed d pen of riya thrown by arjun nd slipped bt not alone along with d same girl cming to meet him frm reception.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
That was nice teaser dear
Continue soon 😊

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