Ariya FF: Pyar sirf dard deti hai....!!! updt on pg40 on 24/4/14

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devildiva21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: piupan
now m scared heheheh n i agree wid u devildiva21

heheh u should be😉😆

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: piupan
ok i knw u all must b sad bt mein kya karti i was sad 2 it felt lk no 1 was interstd in my story phele hi i feel lk m not dat gud writer lk d other writer's over here n den so less cmmnts isliye i thght of discontinuing bt now wen i know dat der r many dear readers of mine who luv dis story will continue 4 dem n so so sry 2 hurt my loyal readers thnx 4 ur support n luv n 4 only u guys i will continue agn bt yaa still now din't came up wid d nxt part coz i thght people don't wnt dis story isliye nhi likha bt don't wry will try an updt till end of dis week n muahhh :-* guys luv u all thnx 4 ur support

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Pinky pan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Aks13
Update kab milege dr...

plz gv me sum time dear tryng hard aaj kal very bsy wid offc wrks n den teachng will surely cont sn sry 4 makng u people wait bt trust me will upd sn plz hv fate on me plz

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Raginishana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Awesome update

Waiting from next update

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Faruheer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Awesome updates...
Add me in ur buddy list
Wana all updates... :)
Waiting for nxt...
Plz update n pm me...

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cuteariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

hey piu when u gonna update the story?cnt wait anymore plz update fast love ariya

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cuteariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

hey piu when u gonna update this story?we r dying to read the story so plz plz plz update fast love ariya

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Pinky pan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

I knw u guys must bhi hell angry wid me bt plz forgv me i was really bsy wid offc wrk n tutioning so isliye late updt bt i'll try dat nxt time it dsn't happens n yaa dis prt is also not dat long bt plz read it n cmmnt n like n yaa if not live up 2 d expectatns den sry n yaa sry 4 d spelling mistakes too

chp 5 (A)
continuing...

As rathod orderd every1 got busy doing der paper wrk (bt u knw nah our choree can't stay quite for long n liza 2 joined dem)

liza: kya yaar mujhe bhi party mein jaana h (wid a puppy dog face) mein akele yaha kya karungi

shree: bhajan

liza: specky (wid anger)

chotu: guys plz ab tum dono shuru mat ho jana n liza itna hi party mein aana chahti ho toh rathod sir se kaho na tumhari jodi shree ke saath bana de (winking at ayesha n riya who wer silently listng 2 der tlks)

n poor shriza wer really shckd listng dis n

liza:(yelling) kya...? n shree started coughng badly 2 which rathod yelled

rathod: kya chal rha h wahan meine kaha tha apna kaam karo baatein nhi n shree paani piyo n sab chup chap apne kaampe dhyan do

n d girls stiffld der giggles n continued wrkng n choree also resumed der wrk as dey don't wnt 2 get scolded more

At arnd 6pm rathod said all 2 leave 4 der plc n get ready b4 7:30pm

rathod: team 6 baj gye h ab humein nikalna chahiye hum sab direct club mein milenge i mean club se thoda dur n seperately enter karenge shree aur chotu tum dono pehle hi andar chale jaana n apna kaam shuru kar dena...

choree: ji sir

rathod: n girls tum dono bhi (ayesha n riya) 7:30 tak club k piche wale raste par milna mein aur rawte tumhara vahi wait karenge n den waha se seperately as a couple club mein enter karenge ok...?

ayesha-riya: ji sir

rathod: shree passes ready h?

shree: ji sir...yeh rahein (n he gvs d passes 2 rathod n rawte)

rathod: gud...so team leave

n every1 left 4 der plcs 2 get ready

At 7:30pm backyard of d club 2 devilishly hamsum mens wer waitng 4 der partners...who?

ofcourse arjun n sam bth wer watng 4 ayesha n riya n wer dressed in 3 piece suit (same as in d kalki devi case bt d diffnc is arjun 2 was dressed as sam in a black tuxedo bt wid a blck shirt n sam wid white shirt)

rathod: (impatiently)kaha reh gai yeh dono 7:35 ho gye h aur in dono ka abhi tak koi pata nhi...!!!

arjun: ladkiyaan aisi hi hoti h rathod (casually crossng his hands across his chest)

rathod: accha tumhe bada pata h..? (frustatedly)

arjun: haan

rathod: haan pata kyun nhi hoga roshni ka bhi issi tarha wait kiya karte hoge nah?

arjun: sam tu bh...(bt stoped as dey realized wht dey wer speakng)

rathod was shckd 2 hear sam 4rm arjun aft such a long time n also shckd by his own behaviour dat how cld he speak 2 arjun like dis whereas arjun bcame quite n rememberd hw he use 2 wait 4 roshni bth went silent bt suddenly dey heard a car's halt n came out of der trance n looked at d directn d voice came 4rm n saw ayesha n riya cmng out of d car 4rm other side of d road dey wer lookng gorgeous in sarees n poor samjun lost in der beauty

ayesha wore a white saree wid loose open hairs n partition filled wid sindoor n a long mangalsutra lying near her chest wid d diamnd jewellery complimentng her luks n unexpectedly also complimenting sam's attire she was lukng stunning n sam was staring at her shamelessly

whereas arjun was shckd dat how cld sum1 luk so pretty he was staring riya 4rm top 2 bottom registerng each n every single detail of her in his mind

riya had wore a red saree wid a little curls at d end of her hairs which was left open her partition was filled wid sindoor n a short mangalsutra arnd her neck wid a simple n elegant necklace n hans filled wid chura (dos bangles which a punjabi bride wears during her wedding) wid minimum makeup n a little bindi on her forehead she was really lukng like a newly wedded bride whose going out wid her husband 1st time aft marriage

arjun 4 a while forgot 2 breath lukng a her she was lukng absolutely stunning n he just wanted 2 hide her 4rm rest of d wrld

during dis staring sesion ayesha-riya came 2wrds dem n saw dem dey wer staring dem widout blinkng der eyes which made bth of dem blush n poor guys dey wer so lost in der beauty dat dey din't even realized dey already came 2wrds dem so 2 bring dem out of der trance dey spoke a little louder

ayesha-riya: sirrr...! (which made dem cum out of der trance n bth felt a little embarresd bt soon recoverd)

rathod: aa gye tum dono kab se wait kar rhe the ab chalo rawte tum aur riya is gaadi mein enter karo mein aur ayesha dusri gaadi mein aate h (2 which arjun jst nodded)

n bth d couples left 2wrds d club...

samesha enterd 1st ayesha was holding rathods arm n rathod was busy smilng lukng at her n all d people wer lukng at dem as if never seen ne1 dey wer really lukng awsum 2gether every guys n girls eyes wer on dem bt dey wer least botherd abt dem dey wer jst lost in each other n smilng at each other n headed inside

ariya enterd 2nd n agn all eyes wer set on dem girls wer drooling on arjun n guys...uff dey wer stairng riya wid open mouths as if not seen ne girl b4 n checkng her out whether d guys wer married or single...

n our arjun notice it n really din't like it so he jst simply put his arms arnd riya's waist n pulled her closer as she was standng a bit far riya was shckd at dis sudden action of his n luked at him n dey shared a cute eyelock n came out of it wen heard people gossiping abt dem riya was totally red wid blusng n was not able 2 luk at arjun agn whereas arjun was very happy gettng riya so close to him n 2 make other people knw dat riya is only his he said loudly

arjun: chale jaan...? (riya shckd by listeng jaan jst nodded) n dey enterd inside

wereas choree wer so shckd dat der mouths wer wide open in shck dey jst lukd at each other n signald dat wht jst happend n bth din't hd ne answer n wer sure dat dis ni8 will bring a lot of chng in ariya's n samesha's lyf...!

precap:
ariya n samesha's romantic dance

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Edited by piupan - 11 years ago