ARIYA:Tere ishq pe jaan kurbaan..last part pg 58 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sry fr late cmmnt pinky di.
Chhotu bt nyc updt.
Cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...
Awesome story yaar.
Der aayi durust aayi.
Sorry for being so late.
continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE...😊😊
PLZ CONTINUE SOON...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 9

A bullet was fired and suddenly




there became a pool of blood..





The bullet was for arjun...




bt riya pushed arjun aside and the bullet




shot her in her ribs..





Arjun: riyaaa




Riya was falling on the ground..





arjun in anger shot all the remaining bullets





in his gun in sikander.




And now no more sikander exists..




he is dead..





Arjun held riya quickly and they are moving




in the car..





Shree is driving as fast as possible,





Arjun: riya kyon kyon kiya esa?




kyon riya..?




I promise tumhe kuch bhi hone nahi dunga





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Sudddenly shree stopped the car..





Arjun: shree gadi kyon roki.. ??





Shree: sir rasta jaam hai agee..




hum chahe bhi toh nahi ja sakte..




Arjun without wasting a second got out of the




car..





he had already tied cloths to stop the blood loss..




he picked her up in his arms and he startted




moving towards the hospital..as it was few




buildings away..




Arjun: riya bas kuch dair aur.. bas ..




sirf thodi dair riya..




I promise kuch hone nahi dunga tumhe..




dnt giveup on me.. riya..




Ria was losing her senses and her eyes were




closing..






Rathod soon cleared the traffic and they all




reached the hospital,.. arjun had already




admitted riya in the hospital and her operation




had begun..





Rathod: rawte riya kahan hai?





Arjun: operation theatre..




He feel down shattered on the floor...




again someone he love was in danger..




again someone he wish to see happy always is in




pain and danger..




he was cursing himself for allowing riya to be the




part of his plan...




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After 4 hours doc came out..




Arjun: doc riya..????




Doc: dekheye bullet humne nikal di hai..




par blood loss bohot hua hai..




agar anewale 3 ghante survive kar gai toh thik




hai warna,





Arjun grabbed the doc by his collar..




Arjun: warna.. riya ko kuch nahi hoga..




Rathod: arjun chodo unhe..




wooh kar sakte the kar chuke hai..





Arjun: sam riya...





He cried and hugged rathod,,..




this was the warmth he needed whn roshni died




bt he lost everything.. his love, his wife,




and his best friend and now someone he wanted




to be with him someone who changed his life..




was in danger





Rathod: arjun arjun kuch nahi hoga riya ko...




hum kuch nahi hone denge..





Bt suddenly nurse came and said that riya's pulse





is becoming abnormal..





All rushed inside to see riya breathing







heavily..








doctors were giving her required treatments







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Riya: arrjjjuuun ssiiir...





Arjun went near her.. and took her hand in his..





Riya: sssiiirr pataaa nahiii aaa gggeee




moookkaaa mile yaa nahi paaarrr mein keh




keehhk eehna chahti thiii..




(Sir pata nahi aagee moka mile na mile par mein kehna chahti thi)






She again took a heavy breadth..





Arjun: ha riya bolo mein sun raha hoo..doc do





something..






Riya: meeiiinnn apppse keehhhnnnaaa





chhaaahhhti thhhiii kkkeee kkkeee mein




apppaseee booohoot pyaaarrr karrr





ttteee hooon...





(mein apse kehna chahti thi ki mein apse bohot pyar karti hoon)






Arjun: riya...




mein bhi tumse pyar karta hoon riya aur yeh




baat mein tumse ese nahi sunna chahta tum thik





hojaaov uske baaad kehnna ..



mein puri zindagi yeh baaat sunne ke liye




taiyaarr hoo...




Riya: abbb toooh mauttt aaa jaye eeetoh bhi




fffarrrk nahi pppadta...raaa thod sir...





Rathod: ha riya.. bolo..




Riya: sirrr I mmm sorrry..




mmeeeinnne aaapko bohooot kuch kehhh




diyaaa..




Rathod: tum sahi thi riya...




Riya:; siiir arjrrjuuun sirrr kaaa khayaaall




rakhiiiyyeegaaa..





Rathod: arjun ka khayal hamesha tumhe hi




rakhna hai riya.. aur tumhi rakhogi samjhe tum...




Riya could see suddenly only flashes.




She was not able to hear wat others are saying or




neither seeing anyone..




her eyes were closing slowly...



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Arjun: riya riya ,,,





nahi mujhe chod ke mat jao riya..






Riya: meraaa pppyaarrr adhurrraaa naaahiii





rahaaa..







This was her last words before closing her eyes...




precap:





Will riya again comeback for arjun???




i know meine ese hi chod diya...




warna aap log wapas kaise aoge padhne ke liye..





bt ek poll karna hai..





how many of u want riya to come back??





or shd i make a sad ending for the first time????




Edited by pinkerbell - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
dont write sad ending
awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
looks like i have many new readers of





my story






toh agar next story ke liye pms chahiye







toh please tell me..







i vl happy to serve u..




love u all

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