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angelicdeepti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

read the whole thing in one go...fantastic...

please continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Awesome update..

I like the matured manner in which the things were handled. That was nice to read.

Please do continue soon!

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Aukview

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Deleted - check out this thread for the story - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4182782/arakshi-ff-intezaar-updt-pg-39-20-march

Edited by Aukview - 10 years ago

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vidya.anand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Awesome update...enjoyed the kitchen scene!

loved the almost smile which gave her a ray of hope!

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Awwssmmm part
loved it
very beautiful...
lovely...
cont sooon

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Farheen Shaikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Although a slow paced but then I feel this is the required pace which is very much needed for their relationship to work. 👍🏼

The entire kitchen scene was beautifully penned down.The only thing that I would like to say is that, it was only Saakshi who is trying to give their marriage another chance to work out. I hope the next step would be initiated from Arjun even if it is a tiny one coz this is a universal fact that marriages work only if both the partners are actively involved to make their sacred relationship stronger with the many traits of the happy married life otherwise the other would feel that she is taken for granted.

Finally a ray of hope for their marriage to work. I really adorn the positive attitude of Saakshi to look into the brighter side even if its a tiny winy one.😃

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Aukview

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Awesome update...enjoyed the kitchen scene!
loved the almost smile which gave her a ray of hope!

Thank you Di :)

The kitchen scene is one of my fav scenes I have written so far!! 😊

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwssmmm part
loved it
very beautiful...
lovely...
cont sooon

Thank you NIkita!! :)

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
Although a slow paced but then I feel this is the required pace which is very much needed for their relationship to work. 👍🏼
The entire kitchen scene was beautifully penned down.The only thing that I would like to say is that, it was only Saakshi who is trying to give their marriage another chance to work out. I hope the next step would be initiated from Arjun even if it is a tiny one coz this is a universal fact that marriages work only if both the partners are actively involved to make their sacred relationship stronger with the many traits of the happy married life otherwise the other would feel that she is taken for granted.

Finally a ray of hope for their marriage to work. I really adorn the positive attitude of Saakshi to look into the brighter side even if its a tiny winy one.😃

Farheen, I always look forward to reading your comments after each update - in both SIHA and Intezaar. 😃 I know it is slow paced but the way the story is...I can't seem to write it in any other way and yeah like you said I too feel that it's required...After the story picks up, hopefully so will the pace... 😊

@bold: Yup it's only Sakshi putting in the effort at the moment...and like I mentioned in the update Arjun's starting to feel guilty about it!! He will too...soon... 😛😉

I really appreciate your feedback and hope you'll keep doing so...Thank you!!!!

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Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Awesome update...

Loved the Kitchen wala love...😆😆😆

Finally Sakshi got some hope in this relationship...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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PoohLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Heyya 😛

Love the update...awww sakshi scared to stay in that room and her thought about what arjun would think was soo cute 😃 😃

Love the kitchen scene very much..it was really nice to see both of them interacting 😳 😳

Hope arjun will soonish starts thinking seriously about sakshi and interact more with her to know her better 😛 😛 😛

Awesome update..do continue soon and thank you heaps for the pm 🤗

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yas23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Awesome update
so Sakshi is scared to stay in her room
the kitchen scene was amazing
finally it gave Sakshi a ray of hope for their marriage to work
waiting for the next part
thanks for pm...continue soon

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