Two Shot: Ariya Dosti lst pg 6 23-08 - Page 4

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Very emotional piece.
True and pure friendship.
Loved it.
Superb.the ending brought tears in my eyes.

Thanks zebbie for liking and commenting

What a story!!!
You said that its a story on friendship. ..
But was it not a love story also...
The love which remained incomplete in real world will be completed in other world...
If the friendship turns into love ever, its not wrong..its pure...
Love starts with friendship. ..
Then why you killed Ariya???
My heart has become so heavy...

sad...sad...very upset...
Such a different story..

Originally posted by: sharmaayushi

hey dear awesome and emotional piece of writing
thnx 4 pm and such a pure update
loved to see riya's pure love and friendship 4 arjun
poor riya 15 days without arjun...hell 4 her
ye riya confessed har love...great
riya marrying someone else not possible
arjun need to understand riya's feeling
ye arjun came
arjun drinks...pure sign of devdas
what riya dies...arjun too
u brought water i my eyes
it really touched my heart
now the meaning of riya's word came into my mind
what an ending dear
ending blue lines were awesome
great loved it
fantastic awesome wounderful mindblowing
thnx once again 4 this superb work and pm
plz continue writing such stories

thanks for such a great response and comments

Originally posted by: Amritamalhotra

What a story!!!
You said that its a story on friendship. ..
But was it not a love story also...
The love which remained incomplete in real world will be completed in other world...
If the friendship turns into love ever, its not wrong..its pure...
Love starts with friendship. ..
Then why you killed Ariya???
My heart has become so heavy...

sad...sad...very upset...
Such a different story..

ya that's one sided love who's never complete in this world nor in other world
but friendship remains same
Love will die but true friendships never die
Friendship turns into love in such case but is this case no friendship never turns in love
Arjun has no courage to lose his friend again and riya has no courage to live without him
That's why i kill them
That's based on real life story not an imaginary story but i give this story a finishing line
The ends written by myself but it based on true story

crying..😭😭😭

Originally posted by: sumbulqaiser

ya that's one sided love who's never complete in this world nor in other world
but friendship remains same
Love will die but true friendships never die
Friendship turns into love in such case but is this case no friendship never turns in love
Arjun has no courage to lose his friend again and riya has no courage to live without him
That's why i kill them
That's based on real life story not an imaginary story but i give this story a finishing line
The ends written by myself but it based on true story

"Arjun had no courage to lose his friend again..and Riya had no courage to live without him"..
No more explanation required. .
U said it all..
U said its a true life story...so wish their happiness in another world...
The poem was awesome. .
And writing also..awesome. ..
U tought me love and friendship both...
Thank you..

Beautiful... As always.❤️
very nyc di!
akhir ka poem to bohot khubsurat tha...

awesome story dear.. Loved it.. The way u presented it was superb.. Thanks for pms..

Awwssmm
loved it
thnx 4 pm