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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good luck guys!!!
Nice CS...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys back with 1st chap. Before reading have a look on the cs. Thers slght modification. Everyone who commented nd liked *thank u* nd all d *res* plz *unres* it. Hope u'l like it.

CHAPTER 1


Sameer 's POV
Yr Mai to Jim sai
aa Gaya vo Utha hoga k nahi pata
nahi kya krta hai Raat ko ullo ki
Tara jagta hai or Subhay uthnay
ka nam nahi leta
Parties pata nahi
kab khatam hoge parties
Vo Arjun k room
jata hai
Sam- Arjun!
Arjun! Utah der ho rhe hai Aaj
phlay din hai to Aaj der sai jayga
kya ??
Arjun in sleepy
mood: Jaan Sone do na
Arjun Sam ko khech
ker Apnay sath leta deta hai usay teddy k Tara hug kerta hai yeh sab itna achanak hota hai ki Sam
Kush reaction ker pata us say
phlay arjun usay teddy samjh ker
hug kerta hai
Arjun : Jaan Aaj
tumnay mere shirt Pehni hai
kya??
Sam Kush kehta
us say phlay Arjun usk moh per
hath rakh deta
Sam poor Kush
nahi Bol pata
Arjun: Jaan
tumara Chahra kitna hard ho
Gaya hai softness to khatam ho
gae .Aisa karo Tum dove try karo
ad Mai atta hai dove moisture
soap hai
Tumara Chahra
soft ho jayga
Sam table per
padhay pani ko Utha tha hai
Arjun per fekta hai
Arjun suddenly uthta hai or Sam ko dekhta hai or
bed sai Utah ker kehta hai
Arjun: bhae aap
yaha kab ,kaisai

i mean ap andar kab aye.

Sam- jab tum apne sapno mai khoi the tub. Khair wo chodo chalo princess ko uthate hai. Mala bata rahi thi wo bahut gussa hai hum se.

Nd they go to their lp's(little princess) room without knowing that sum1 have seen their romance preciseky recorded. (guss who? Thats me their lp).

When they reached d room nd went in.

Sam nd arjun- princess uth jao sorry. Ek choti se to galti ke hai. Sry.

Lp- choti se galti. Ap mera bd bhul gaiye.

Arjun- correction trail bd

lp- so wat bd to bd hai chai trial ho ya original. Aur ap bed se dur rehke he bat karo.

S nd A- ok. Batao kya punishment hai.

Lp- 50 push ups.

A- bus 50 abhi karta hu.

S- per mai to abhi gym se araha hu.

Lp- for sam bhai. Ap ko 150.

S- phir thek hai.

A- fine.

After finishing their punishment they went to bed nd removed d blanket nd were shocked . There was only pillows staked with a cel phone.

Lp- hey bros kaise ho . Jaldi karo clg ke liya late ho jaoge. Nd ya break fast karna mat bhulna. Ek surprise hai.<font size="5">

Hey guys back with 1st chap. Before reading have a look on the cs. Thers slght modification. Everyone who commented nd liked *thank u* nd all d *res* plz *unres* it. Hope u'l like it.


CHAPTER 1


Sameer 's POV
Yr Mai to Jim sai
aa Gaya vo Utha hoga k nahi pata
nahi kya krta hai Raat ko ullo ki
Tara jagta hai or Subhay uthnay
ka nam nahi leta
Parties pata nahi
kab khatam hoge parties
Vo Arjun k room
jata hai
Sam- Arjun!
Arjun! Utah der ho rhe hai Aaj
phlay din hai to Aaj der sai jayga
kya ??
Arjun in sleepy
mood: Jaan Sone do na
Arjun Sam ko khech
ker Apnay sath leta deta hai usay teddy k Tara hug kerta hai yeh sab itna achanak hota hai ki Sam
Kush reaction ker pata us say
phlay arjun usay teddy samjh ker
hug kerta hai
Arjun : Jaan Aaj
tumnay mere shirt Pehni hai
kya??
Sam Kush kehta
us say phlay Arjun usk moh per
hath rakh deta
Sam poor Kush
nahi Bol pata
Arjun: Jaan
tumara Chahra kitna hard ho
Gaya hai softness to khatam ho
gae .Aisa karo Tum dove try karo
ad Mai atta hai dove moisture
soap hai
Tumara Chahra
soft ho jayga
Sam table per
padhay pani ko Utha tha hai
Arjun per fekta hai
Arjun suddenly uthta hai or Sam ko dekhta hai or
bed sai Utah ker kehta hai
Arjun: bhae aap
yaha kab ,kaisai
i mean ap andar kab aye.
Sam- jab tum apne sapno mai khoi the tub. Khair wo chodo chalo princess ko uthate hai. Mala bata rahi thi wo bahut gussa hai hum se.
Nd they go to their lp's(little princess) room without knowing that sum1 have seen their romance preciseky recorded. (guss who? Thats me their lp).
When they reached d room nd went in.
Sam nd arjun- princess uth jao sorry. Ek choti se to galti ke hai. Sry.
Lp- choti se galti. Ap mera bd bhul gaiye.

Arjun- correction trail bd
lp- so wat bd to bd hai chai trial ho ya original. Aur ap bed se dur rehke he bat karo.
S nd A- ok. Batao kya punishment hai.
Lp- 50 push ups.
A- bus 50 abhi karta hu.
S- per mai to abhi gym se araha hu.
Lp- for sam bhai. Ap ko 150.
S- phir thek hai.
A- fine.
After finishing their punishment they went to bed nd removed d blanket nd were shocked . There was only pillows staked with a cel phone.
Lp- hey bros kaise ho . Jaldi karo clg ke liya late ho jaoge. Nd ya break fast karna mat bhulna. Ek surprise hai.</font>[Size]5[/SIZE]
Edited by Wj.mad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Ap dono ke liya ek surprise hai jo apko mala breakfast ke bad degi. All d best.

They quickly recovered from their shock nd ran to their room to get ready. Then they went downstairs , had their breakfast nd asked mala for d surprise.

Shock Shock shock. It was their own video taken a while ago in arjuns room when they almost kissed.


There was writen on d cover.
'riya aur aisha ye dekhke bilkul kush nahi honge.';-)

they ran to clg to save dis disaster.



To be continued...




Precap- 1. Concert
2.raging.


I know it was a little boring nd ful of rautes. But i'l make everyone's entry in next update.

U can suggest some songs for concert.

Dont forget to hit d like button nd leave ur valuable comment.

Edited by Wj.mad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Awesome update.
Arjun ne sam ko apni dream girl samajh liya.
Hehehehehe.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Hey dr its not at all boring.

Its simply superb.

Samjun ahem... ahem... moments r hilarious.

OMG their sister recoeded that.

Loved her dhamki in the end 😉.

Continue as soon as possible.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Haw... LP... Kitni badi blackmailer hai!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
should tell U it was a lovely start...
hehe Arjun nd sam...
Arjun ko apni jaan kuch zyaada teddy lagthi hai...
But for samjun moments was rofl
..
LP toh bahut dangerous nikli waah...
Ending dhamkee wad awesome...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
awesome start...!!
great cs...!!
samjun moments were very funny...!!😆 jaan teddy... dove rofl...!!
are wah unki LP kam ni.. pura record kar liya😆
aur kay befkoof bnaya dono ko..!!
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
it was really gud dear
continue soon.

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