SS: Never say Never: Ariya: LAST CHAPTER PAGE33 - Page 19

Originally posted by: roses.09

Well said!! Then again only those who have experienced such love can manage to write such quotes. Haha I had so much to write in this comment that for the 1^st time since I stared commenting on ffs (2010) I had the urge use sticky notes while reading ur update! 😊

I could clearly imagine each and every word of this part, especially Riya's emotions 👏. U have really explained everything in great detail which adds to the joy of reading ur ff. Here the readers don't have to use their own imagination to interpret the meaning of an update but rather get to sit back and enjoy what a writer wants to convey, keeping them both on the same page. U made my day!!! 😃

I have become a fan of ur writing and creativity.

I do want to make a request' is it possible to include arjun's pov along with riya? Coz right now all I can conclude from arjun's behaviour is that he cant accept that riya moved on. He doesn't want to let her go but still doesn't love her nor does he treat her with respect. Care yes but not with respect, n that is what bothers me. How can Riya be so quick to conclude to that she should apologize for hurting Arjun's feelings when he himself doesn't care about her feelings? 😲 That quite didn't sit well with me.. no offence intended 😊. I just wanted to share with u the thoughts that crossed my mind while reading this.

Thanks for taking the time to update.

Please update soon! Will be waiting 😊

Note: this is the longest comment I have written so far 😉

Originally posted by: Aks13

Incredible update dr.

Loved ur thought about love.

OMG he tied her hands to the headrest.

She tried to free her hands but couldn't did that caz the knot was behind the headrest. Its Arjun so hw can she find any loophole in his planning. Poor gal.

Wow he reminded her of Wolverine. That's shocking!!!!!!

Awww he tied her up with silk cloth. That's amazing.

Oppsss she somehw managed to free her hands n tried to ran away but the door was closed.

That dialogue of his was really scary whn he said that if u don't want..

Wow he told her to break her engagement n only thn he let her go.

Oh gosh!!!!!! She hurted him vry badly by made him reminded about Roshini. That's a wrong move.

She realized her mistake but nw its too late as she already did the damage.

Wow Arjun was in his worst mood ever.

She tried to apologized but he ignored her n even avoided her. Poor gal, felt really bad for her.

Phew!!!! He saved her at the right time.

Loved the way he fought with those men for Riya.

The way he beat the man who raised his hand on Riya was dreadful...!!!!!

Loved the way he blasted on her as it shows his concern for her.

OMG she apologized but Arjun got angry n in anger he slappen her so hard that she got unconscious.

Loved Riya's MV in the end.

Beautifully written.

Eagerly waiting for Pritam's entry.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: mastmegha22

Awesome, blossom, super-duper and mindblowing update dear.

So arjun through her shirt away and kissed her.

In morning riya open her eyes and sees her hands are tied. She wasin differt room house and she has weared arjun shirt.

Arjun called her darling.

She freed herself and running from the house but arjun shouted the doors are locked and it need password.

Arjun makes her eat pizza.

Riya phone ring but arjun doesnt give her and she says i need this but arjun says i need you.

Riya reminding him about roshni and arjun angry at this and he through her in front of her house.

Riya feels guilty of reminding arjun about roshni and she decided she would asked his forgivness.

But arjun is avoiding riya and he didnt listened her.

Some guyes are forcing riya and slapped her but arjun reached right time and fight that goons.

Arjun slapped riya but he asks her forgivness.

Awesome dear. Awsome update.

Precap looks interesting.

Pritam is coming his pics was nice.

Continue soon.

Eagerly waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: Live-life

Poor Riya!!! 😭

Kite tha pad padenge usse!! Bechari!! Aur kitne Baar ground pe giregi!!

Goooddd!!

But then love was never easy! So...I guess it's kind of worth it! 😉

Aur hamare Arjun ka kya Kari mein! I mean... Kuch zayada ho Khadooos hai!

Par...chalega! 😉😆

An Awesome update as always!!?

Great job!! 👏

Update soon!!

P.S- hailaaa Pritam kitna hot hai!!

Originally posted by: devildiva21

superb superb update...!!!

hmm so arjun did kidnap her...!!! and tied her hands... well arjun ke jaal se niklna itna asan nai h

but apni rii bhi kam nai h... kya dimag lagay...!!!

aww he wanted her to eat something...!! love the way he blackmailed her into eating...!!😉

omg ye kya kiya riya... you made him remember rosh... his reply was awesome

but the way he dropped her to her flat😲

poor girl felt guilty for her behaviour... great so now arjun is ignoring her...!!

gosh he is too much angry...!!!

glad he reached to riya in time..

acha fight kiya un goons se... how dare they hit riya...

love his concern for her...

finally she said sorry.. and arjun did he really slapped her...

riya's pov was lovely...

omg pritam ki entry... now that's interesting...

continue soon...

Originally posted by: shararatisuhana

hey muskan d updt ws rely nc..bt ARJUN PHIR SE ANGRY ARJUN

bn gy😲an poor riya he tied her bt thnk god he savd hr frm dos idiot

men😡an dropd hr home..bt precap phr s scary😲..nw

wts gonna hppn..egrly wtng for ur updat...😊

IM NW HR AN OFNLY CAM ON D FORM BT DIL SE SE URA

SUPRB WRTR...D WY U PORTRY D FELNGS AN EMOTNS OF

UR CHRCTR IS RELY NC..😊

Originally posted by: shrutisweety

wow another super duper update 😃
love ur lines of love that was amazing 😃
and riya was tied to bed omg wat was that
and badi intaligence se riya ne apna haat chudaya hai
par riya ko hurt na ho islisye vo silk cloth tie kiya tha not bad...
the door was locked and that do from number code and pizza's dialouge was amazing... so finaliy she ate...
and omg he told her to break engagement 😲
but riya in angrer told abt roshini 😲 he was to hurt...
that he took her to her home and throw her on floor 😲 she realised her mistake par she was late
he was deeply hurt 😭
but loved the way he fought with that mens and broke their bones...
omg riya ne maafi mangi par usne anger mai tapad mar diya 😭
aur riya behosh ko gayi... omg
precap was realy shocking and intersting
pritam is coming... pata nahi ab aage kya hoga...
continue soon...

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

wat is this muskaan...u started a new SS nd i dnt even knw abt it...for me ur every story is a MASTERPIECE...i m ur regular reader na...bt still u didnt PM me? chalo updates k Pm nhi kiye...par kam se kam mujhe bata to deti dat u r strtng a new story...i m deeply hurt...muskaan

gussa hone ka haq sirf tumhe hai kya...?

😔

chalo enough of my gussa vussa...nw pls PM me th nxt updates...haq banta hai yarr mera...

ok nw my commnt on th story so far...in th nxt cmmnt

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

gosh...why is arjun behaving like this...

pehle to usne khud hi riya ko buri trah insult karke reject kar diya...aur ab jab riya life me aage badhne ki KOSHISH kar rhi hai...toh bhi usse problem hai...wierd...

pritam..hmmm...nice choice of ring...i mst say...

jealous wala love ha...i enjoyd arjun being badly jealous of dat pritam...nd shree-chotu-aisha...love these trio...their teasing session jst added fuel to arjun's jealosy...lolz...poor lad...bt he deserved it...