Arakshi fic 'When there are no words' Pt 8 16/02

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Ketakee

@Ketakee

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Amazing update...
Arjun at least shown little bit of his emotions...
Hope he will confess her soon...
Continue soon...
Waiting...😃

Edited by Ketakee - 12 years ago

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Shanzy

@-Shanzy-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

I have edited my comment on the first page 😳

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JeeLeZaraa

@JeeLeZaraa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

sad but interesting update. please dnt separate them

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

akkkuu🤗... you updated like after forever... tut tut tut.. forgiven b'coz of this update😃...

sooo goood👍🏼... *gasp* arjun being so caring for sakshi in her condition, him getting angry at the mention of alcohol.. awww, already practicing how to take care of a pregnant chick (partner??🤔)🤗

and sakshi, what a brave girl!!!! for giving it back to arjun👏... you tell him girl🤗.. and her telling arjun that she's gonna leave india coz she knows that he will feel burdened by her & her condition.. nahhhiiinnn

and ayesha🤗... enuf said, so another🤗

okie, coming to what i found funny😉.. when sakshi was referring to their baby as being a "he".. will arjun referring to the baby as "she"... awww, look they have already decided the gender of the child😳... yet fail to confess to eachother??..

conti sooon & yeah tht's all from me & don't make me wait tooo long for another update.. warna SYS😈😆

PS: hopefully comment was good this time around as well😳

PPS (last 1😆): the longer the update, the better😉 & i didn't find anything grammatically wrong👍🏼

Edited by gujjupari - 12 years ago

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

beautiful update...

i mst say i m really impressed vid ur writing skills...

u carry nd portray th ray of emotions so well...

Arjun is misundrstood abt th reasons of sakshi's leave...

nd sakshi...well she is totally right...no gal will like to spend or actlly waste her full life on a person who cn never reciprocate her love...

even i'll not...

lets see wat happns nxt...

continue soon...

PS: if u really reconsider th PM thing thn pls do PM me...

love
Aisha

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Amazing update!!

Loved it...

U are a fantastic writer...

Please do PM me also!!😃

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Akku

@.FieryPhoenix.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

@ShanxMazhar: OMG... I am dead! Such mesmerizing words... Do u mind if I used it as summary. I will credit u! These deserve to be read by everyone! U captured the essence of this fic. If I could give the best comment award, it would have been u! BTW thanks a ton!

@Nikita: Sure... and thanks for your comment!

@ShailyShukla: Aww... thanks dear. Will try to update ASAP!

@Bharati: You have no idea how much your words meant to me. I... thank u... lots of hugs from my side.

@Sunshine_94: Stay tuned for the healing part! BTW thanks a bunch!

@Ketakee: Well, it might take time but he will turn around. Thank u!

@Radhika: Thanks!

@Supreet: Stay tuned for more... I might or might not separate them. Keep ur fingers crossed!

@Pari: Girl, u make me speechless. I mean words aren't enough to tell u that u r just mind-blowing. And who said I don't like ur comment? I freaking love them! Thank u sooo much! Chocolate chip cookies from my side for taking out time to write such amazing words!

@Aisha: Will PM u... Pakka! BTW Thank u... And I agree, even I wouldn't stay in such an emotionless relation! But then, not every guy is Arjun, isn't it??

@Mithuz: Will PM u... And u think I am a good writer? Aww... that means very much!

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

this amazing and lovely intense liked it... Luking forwrd to it

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Shanzy

@-Shanzy-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: AlwaysLife19
@ShanxMazhar: OMG... I am dead! Such mesmerizing words... Do u mind if I used it as summary. I will credit u! These deserve to be read by everyone! U captured the essence of this fic. If I could give the best comment award, it would have been u! BTW thanks a ton!

Haha these words are not anything as compared to what you write. I am a fan of quotations so I thought I should share them with you. thank you for such a lovely reply 🤗You can use it and there's no need to give me the credit. Continue soon 👏

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Wow what an emotional update. I am left speechless and I am feeling an odd sense of loss, same as Sakshi at the end of it. Perhaps may be because I wanted you to keep going with it.

Yes this is Sakshi's POV, but the way you describe Arjun and his action his POV automatically comes thru.

You display both of their emotions so well that you can't help but feel the love between them even though they both still have to voice it and admit it to themselves.

Seriously you are one fantastic writer. Please continue soon, don't make us wait long.

P.S. I have added you to my PM list, please do PM me when you update next.

Thanks.