Arakshi fic 'When there are no words' Pt 8 16/02

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Wonderful update dear...

Both are confused about their feelings and emotions...great...
It wont be an easy task for both of them...
But I m more concerned about Sakshi's state...
She is the one who has to give so much explanations...
So for me she is in more trouble...

But I never expected Aisha would get convinced so easily about
his presence at her place ...
And as dialogist you are great...so intense and captivating ones which comprise lots of emotions...
Really nice...

And I dont want to end this with 2 or 3 more updates...
I dont think Mrunal's exit will affect my obsession about this pair...
So I want to read this story in the same way you had planned before...

Cont. soon...

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

wow we got a update!!!!!!!!!!!

it was awesome dear...

sakshi was in so painful state but she doesn't show...

ur way of writing was so good!!!!!!!!!!!

she is leaving the show its sad...but i love to read read ArAkshi!!!!!they are just magical!!!!!!!

cont!!!!!!!!!!

Do ur exams well!!!!!!!best wishes...

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Awesome update akku 👏 👏 👏 👏

There is always that factor in your updates that blow me off...in the good sense though 😆 😆 😆

I meant you write soo beautifully that it just keep me hooked to it and makes me ponder what will happen next because its such an intense and interesting story ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️

Hope you had a great holiday 😛 😛 😛 and dont worry am sure you'll have great results,all the very best for the remaining 👍🏼

Oh yeah i loved the idea of arjun showing up before ayesha..that was such a brilliant idea of yours 😃

Nooo nooo please dont stop,you continue it...thats your work,yeah its sad that mrunal is leaving but continuing is the best idea to keep arakshi alive and we are very much keen to read the story..sooo sooo continue please please 😊 😊

Thank you heaps for the update and pm 🤗 🤗

Ps-looove you tooo heaps ❤️

Pss-Virtual cookies huh thank you thank you..but next time i waaant real one 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆

Edited by PoohLover - 11 years ago

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Devangana

@Devangana

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

The struggle and turmoil of Arjun and Sakshi are so beautifully portrayed. Update soon.

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Hey.. That was intense, poignant, angst-y and absolutely brilliant piece of writing..

As you say, it was dripping with angst, sarcasm and yet heartfelt emotions which makes it all the more real.. They're in a messy situation.. And of course, they've never been good with words. That isn't going to change overnight either.

Waiting to read more to know how he manages to break down the wall surrounding his heart and lets her in completely. Also, how Sakshi begins believing in him, once he does.

Do continue soon..

P.S. : It is indeed sad that Mrunal has decided to leave the show. But if me saying this makes a difference, please do not discontinue/abandon/ rush the story.. Coz no matter what, Arjun, Sakshi and Arakshi have all found a permanent place in our heads. Haven't they?! 😉

Oh.. and cartons of fudges and cookies from me too.. 😛

Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago

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898973

Suspended

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Interesting story. Very nice.

Continue it soon

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Awwssmmm part
loved it
cont sooon
thanks for PM
P.s plzzz update Memorise plzzz...

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anitasharma

@anitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

read all chapters in 1 go

loved it

continue soon and add me in ur pm list

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Maham

@Mahaali2905

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Veri veri veri good story evri emotion is beautifuly written plz update soon n pm me

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#180

So this is my first time posting a comment here. But I have to let you know how much I loved reading this angsty goodness. 😃

Before I venture into my humble review, I would like to say something. WOMAN! Dare you think about abandoning this fiction. Seriously I don't even watch the show and I completely enjoyed reading this. ⭐️

Re-reading this. Well guess what? I read the entire fic again. I needed to and I wanted to too, if you know what I mean. :P.

Moving on...I'll tell you why I enjoyed reading this. Well one of the many reasons (and the main one) is the tone you've used while writing this one. Its not colloquial - which is what I am used to and normally enjoy too - but I personally think that the reason this fiction is a great read is because of the way you've written it. It suits the story. The angst. The drama. The craziness and the effed-upness. I don't think it could've been this impactful had it been written in a casual language.

You know this topic that you're writing on...JUST SO MUCH TO EXPLORE. I mean I am such a angst lover, you have no idea. Dramione. Dean Winchester. Says it all, doesn't it? 😳

Okay moving on to the characters. I think you have Arjun etched down perfectly. Every last detail. The complexity of his character must be a treat to write about, huh? Also I did not follow the show for long...but I can very well imagine that Arjun would've been this way after four years. As for Sakshi, I have never watched her in the show. So I just took your word for her character. And well, isn't she great? I think you have two different effedup people, in an effed up situation in an effed up world...which my dear friend, makes for a superb story. When I initially read the story, I didn't think there was a pregnancy track at all. Because I wanted them to be just two people without anything between them you know? But I was surprised. And pleasantly, might I add. Because its not one of those typical pregnancy stories. This arc, though unexpected has just messed them up more. And what can I say. I am a sadist. I like my characters in pain. 😈

So uh, I kinda rambled a lot. And its not really any helpful review or anything. Just wanna say that I really enjoyed reading and re reading it. And please continue soon. And stop underestimating yourself as a writer. You're great!⭐️

- You-Know-Who. :)

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