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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Amazing update!
loved the way riya pushed ayesha towards rathore knowing only she could handle the situation
Love raesha
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Super duper update dr.

Wow Aisha saved all of thm frm Rathod.

Waaooo Shree can sing n play guitar.

Song was nice.

Loved their masti n fun time.

Precap looks interesting.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
awsum update...
sameer se bhi bal bal bach gye all thanks to aisha...
usko bait bana diya... 😆 but love the way she handled him... wow both were shy...
aisha shree liza chottu riya scenes on terrace was lovely...
wow shree a singer cool...
love the way they were teasing each other...
now what's gonna happen?? will samer and arjun come to know about them?
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: devildiva21

awsum update...
sameer se bhi bal bal bach gye all thanks to aisha...
usko bait bana diya... 😆 but love the way she handled him... wow both were shy...
aisha shree liza chottu riya scenes on terrace was lovely...
wow shree a singer cool...
love the way they were teasing each other...
now what's gonna happen?? will samer and arjun come to know about them?
continue soon...

i agree ...plus i loved the song too
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
it would be fun to see them getting caught by the 2 acp
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

6. Punishment

It was almost one and a half hour since Rathore was sitting in his cabin and doing the paperwork for last case. He took a deep breath while relaxing in his care as he finished it. Suddenly, his phone rang. He picked up the phone and as the conversation was over he moved out of his cabin towards conference room.

Rathore: [the moment he opened the door and get inside] team! We had a new……

He looks up and he was surprised to see that there was no one to hear him. Then he saw Arjun turned his chair towards him and Arjun straight look at Rathore.

Arjun: Why you stopped in middle?

Rathore: [getting out of shock] where are others?

Arjun: Means!

Arjun looks both the side of the table and quickly stood up with a shocked face.

Arjun: [surprised] where are others?

Rathore: [annoyed] don't repeat my words!

Both of them start to find others. Rathore first went towards the couch and then towards the place where Shree mostly like to be that is near the machines and computers. Arjun went towards forensic lab. But no one was there. Arjun was finding in rest of the office when he heard some sound of laughing, giggling and chatting from upstairs. He understood where all of them are.

On Roof

All of them were enjoying their self when suddenly Ayesha stood up.

Ayesha: [with a worried face] guys we are here from a long time. I think we should go back.

Chottu: I think she is right because if we will be caught then it will be a big problem for us.

Shree: [acting cool] come on guys. Just chill! There is no one who could catch us. I mean the way we all made ACP Arjun Rawte a fool. He did not even know that he is sitting alone in the conference room. He always acts as he is so smart and he could solve any case but here is the truth. He is no one at all. He is a big fool. He knows only to scold others for no reason.

Riya: And what about Rathore sir.

Shree: If Arjun sir doesn't know anything that means not even Rathore sir would know about this. And by the way, what did Rathore sir does all the time. He always orders us and nothing else. He is also a big fool. He only knows to say 'Dame it' and he can't solve any case by himself.

Ayesha made an angry face on this.

Suddenly, everyone except Shree stood up. They all were shocked and scared too. But Shree was not able to understand why they all are standing and having such expressions on their face.

Arjun come and stood behind Shree who did not yet know what was happening.

Shree: What happen? It looks as if that Hitler has caught us.

Arjun: [loudly] Shree!

He quickly looks behind and found Arjun standing there with a very angry face.

Shree: [with fumbling mouth] sir that…. that I…. I was…. Sir…

Arjun: So you think that I'm a fool. I only could scold others and nothing else I could do.

Shree: [cried] No sir…..

Arjun: [cutting Shree of in between] and you think that our chief ACP Rathore is only knowing to give orders and commands. He doesn't do anything else then this. He keeps on to say 'Dame it' and can't solve any case by himself.

For the first time Arjun was saying something in favor of Rathore but was Rathore knowing this.

By the time Rathore was standing on the entrance of roof and heard all that Arjun sad about Rathore but he did not know that it was Shree's opinions about him and not of Arjun.

Rathore made a face somewhat saying that 'oh! So you think this about me. Not wait and watch.'

Rathore walked towards the team.

Rathore: [in his usual tone] we had a case. Let's move!

And they all went to the crime scene and as they got finished with the work in crime scene they came back to office for further discussion of the case and find the killer.

The discussion went very long and it was too late. Finally they all were going back to their respective houses when they got a bad news.

Rathore: [loudly] don't you think you all are forgetting something.

They all look to each other and no one was able to recognize what Rathore was talking about.

Finally Ayesha dared to ask.

Ayesha: Sir what?

Rathore: [angrily] it was whose plan to leave all the work and waste all the time?

Everyone looked towards Riya and Riya looked down accepting her mistake.

Rathore: [went near Riya] I have noticed you many times and it seems like you a hygiene freak.

He waits for a moment to let her shook her head positively. Then he continued.

Rathore: you know her sweepers are not cleaning the place properly. So I was thinking that you should once clean this place properly and show them how to clean.

Shree, Chottu, Sakshi, Ayesha and Liza were hiding there smile while Arjun too was having a smile on his face though no one noticed this.

Riya's eyes widen and jaw dropped for a moment.

Riya: but sir…. I mean how I will clean this big place sir. [Acting innocent and with a cute smile on her face] Sir I'm a small little cute girl and your favored too and this place is so huge and dirty according to you. How I will be able to clean it alone?

Rathore: No one has told you to clean it alone. [Looking towards Shree, Chottu, Sakshi, Ayesha and Liza who were still trying to hide their smile] if you friends could have fun with you then they should also have punishment with you.

All the smiles vanished and shocked faces were left.

Rathore: You all can't go home until and unless this place is totally clean. I hope you get it and no more escaping. Now go on. Finish the work I gave you.

As soon as Rathore finished Arjun starts to leave the room.

Rathore: See, how fast your Arjun sir got my point and left for the work I gave.

Arjun was shocked with this sentence. He turn back to see Rathore and he was expecting that it was just a joke.

Arjun: Excuse me. Just tell me it's a joke.

Rathore: No, it is not. I'm serious and you too is involved in 'all'.

Arjun: But what I have done?

Rathore: you very well know what you have done or you will understand while doing this work. Come on everyone. As fast as you will finfish off the work you will be able to go back.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
😛Omg this part was sooo funny!!!
Hahahaa 😃
And bechara shree!! Arjun caught him saying that he is a fool!!!
And Riya is so innocent!! And others were smiling at her when she got punishment!
Aur ab bukhto😉

Rathole ne to Arjun ko bhi nahi choda!! Poor Arjun!😆

God!! Children these days! 😉

😃
A rocking update!
I loved it 😊

P.S- update the next part soon!!
Please please please please !!
With a cherry on top 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
awesome part
omg rathore picked up ayesha in his SUV
shree & shakshi's teasing😆 loved the way riya scared them back🤣
riya in a saree & arjun is lost in her
woah! riya slapped arjun😲 is that part of their act or she slapped him truly???
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
omg the act was fabulous🤣🤣🤣
their fight after that😆 cute
girl's chit chat was nice
omg arjun is scared of cockroaches😲 woah!!!
riya is laughing at him lol she is too much😆
poor girl she is gone now
cont soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Awesome yaar !!
I just came across the FF ...and its beautiful ...
Really ..loved the characterizations of all

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