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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Thanx a lot everyone 🤗
Dis kinda response unexpected :D
i thought koi padhega ni :p
aweiyien likh diya..
bt nw kya kru !?
okies i try to write
@tina di mujhe to start bi ni pta lol
@kunchu di meri band bji hui h..!!
@amu thanku
@ mahek n sanju i dnt knw myself..
nw myself cnfused
its ariya or arakshi...!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

very interesting prologue payal :) loved it

looking forward to read it

please continue very soon

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

De hai

U r superb writer de

Welcome back de

Ariya pr likho de plsss

Plsss Ariya

Update soon

Plss add me in ur pm list

Love de

Mishti

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Didu🤗

aapka new OS
pehele kabhi nahi padha tha..
Ab mauka mila hai..
You have written true abt life.
Looking forward to read this piece.
And don't worry abt pms.
Mai toh ni chodne wali..he he..

@All

didu ko paresha mat karo, ariya/arakshi pe.
Wo jo likhengi wahi padho..
Unhe confuse mat karo..
Plss.
Warna vampire bite frm vq..lol

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JeeLeZaraa

@JeeLeZaraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

nice starting please continue soon payal didi

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Ramisa (Saba)

@Devilicious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

ariya hai ya arakshi dii ?

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Thanku fati di divi
supreet dear
thanku ankita di
vampu special 🤗
@Rami i dnt knw re
@all thankyou so much..

Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Note
Dearies thanku so much fr d coments
21 likes n 22 coments
omg i m overwhelmed
totaly unexpected
i m dancing lol
thanku realy 🤗
Maine bs aise hi likh diya tha lol
mujhe lga koi ni padhega bt phew
hota whi h socha ni h true :p
widout pm
me kisi ko pm ni kr skti krna ni ata mobile se link...
my parts r smal cos of mobile
in btw its arakshi or ariya i dnt knw...
i change myself
i mean nw i m writing arjun pov fr lyf
rosh riya n den d story begins abt arakshi
hws it
bear it wid
do teme i start or nt
thankyou...

Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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aptl123

@aptl123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

wow payal...

what an poem...

really good one...

i want to see littlebit of takrar and pyar...

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Part 1
Arjun sitting on a bench in a park..
thinking abt life...
zindagi ke ajeeb rang h
jab wo jeena chahta tha tab usse uska sahara cheen liya
par ab jab wo nhi jeena chahta tab zindagi use
jeene ka sahara de rhi h...
ajeeb kashmakash h jeevan ki...
flashback
arjun n roshni two people wid a soul...
made for each other couple...
arjun n roshni meet through sameer
sameer bff of rosh n arjun...