Ariya SS:Ehsaas. Epilogue-pg35.. *completed* 21.03.2014 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ch 6.

*Scene changes to Arjun's house*

Riya was feeling really bad.She was having thr urge to throw up.She quickly clamped her mouth tight and went to the washroom.She closed the door.Liza and Chotu gets worried for her.As Chotu was about to call Ayesha,Liza stopped him.
Liza: Iss halat mein,Riya ko ultiyaan ayengi,that is natural.Par,sacchi mein,mujhe Riya ki bohut fikar ho rahi hai.Bechari ki halat toh dekho.Murjhayi gayi hai Riya.
Chotu: Haan,Liza.Usse thora waqt chahiye.Let us go and sit outside,for a while,till then,she will come out.
Liza nodded her head in a YES.

Soon,Riya comes out wiping her face with towel.Her cheeks still had those slap marks.She grazed her hands on it.Fresh streams of tears flew out from her eyes.Her eyes wre swollen,as welll,due to a lot of crying.She quickly changed into something comfortable.She wore a creamish white loose salwar kameez.
As she came out of the room,she saw Chotu and Liza.
Riya(in her broken voice): Arey,tum dono yahaan.Mujhe pata hi nahi chala.Ruko,main coffee bana deti hu.Pata nahi mujhe kaise pata nahi chala ke tum dono aaye huye ho.
Chotu stopped her.
Chotu: Riya,ruk jao.Humlog coffee nahi piyenge.Tu bas apna khayal rakh.Aur,kuch zyada tension mat kar.Tumhare liye aur mere bhanje ya bhanji ke liye accha nahi hoga.
Riya let out a faint smile at that joke of Chotu's.
Liza: Dont worry,Riya.We all are with you.
Riya:Thanks,mera saath dene keliye.

*Scene changes to ETF*

Arjun was in his cabin,sitting on his chair.He was thinking about today's happenings.
Arjun's POV:
"Yeh sahi nahi kiya maine Riya ke saath.I shouldnt have raised my hands on her.Kya karu ki woh ruk jaaye?"
(tum sochloge aur kaam hojayega,ACP Rawte... Too bad...Ab kuch nahi ho payega.)
*Scene changes to Arjun's house*

Riya packs her bags and keeps it near the door.She leaves a small letter and his clothes,which he wears in night.
She also hangs his ironed clothes for tomorrow,as well.
It was her duty,being his wife.So,she never backed out from it.But,today,Arjun's behaviour broke her completely.
This was the first time,Arjun raised her hand on Riya in their two years of marriage.
Riya came out of her thoughts,when,Chotu called her out.
Chotu: Taxi aagaya hai.Chalo,main aur Liza tumhe Maasa ke yahaan chhorke aate hai.
Riya: Nahi,Chotu aur Liza.Ab mujhe apna rasta khud tayy karna hai.Kisiki madat ki zarurat nahi hai mujhe.Wahaan pe kitchen hai.Kuch khane ko chahiye,toh,lekar khalena.Main jaarahi hu,Chotu.I am sorry.
Riya pulls her trolley suitcase and places her handbag on her shoulder.
Chotu puts the suitcase on the taxi and explained the driver of the taxi to drive slowly.
Riya takes her seat and finally glanced at her sasuraal,Their home,for the final time,Maybe.
She hugged Chotu and Liza and buzzed off...
Both Chotu and Liza waved her goodbye.
Precap: Same precap.Riya in Rathod's house.
Edited by zebbie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
fantastic update :) loved it
feeling so bad for riya 😭
loved aisha's outburst on arjun
and shree's outburst was awesome
loved aisha's conversation with maasa
love how chotu and liza were there for riya
looking forward to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
omg
so sad
continue soon
riya's condition I'd disaster 😭
what about arjun? ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Really Nyc 1.
continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Hey nice.dear. Pls update and pls pls pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
zebbie gud one dear
n loved aisha part too
continue dear
n update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Grate part..
arjun stil not realise his mistake..
i hate arjun how can he do all this...
update soon..
i realy like atesha achha kiya jo arjun ko achhe se suna diya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
nice parts
feeling bad for riya
what ever ayesha did was good
finally arjun understood whatever he wants dosent happen
feeling good that riya is moving to rathod's house
she will feel better their with maasa,aayira and sasha
thanks for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Awesome update..
Feeling bad for riya.
Arjun still doesnt realise his mistake.
I have a doubt if he loves riya or not.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
ayesha & shree's outburst superb👏
maasa is so sweet
still he doesn't realise his mistake
feeling bad for riya😭 poor girl
cont soon

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