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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice and romantic upadte.
Precap is ineresting.
Bt that will be last part;(

thanks fr pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
congratulations on the 3rd thread
thanks for the pm

part40 amazing update
shaina and arjun convo was too good
sam shaina scene were so cute...finally sam felling in love with shaina again
who is rahul malhotra
so arjun jealous seeing riya with rahul

part41 so rahul happens to be arjun's friend
what riya jealous seeing arjun talking to a man
rathore misunderstood shana again

part42 that was an enotional update
oh rathore had another accident hope he soon gets better and remembers everything...glad that shaina went after him
arjun scene were amazing loved riya's outburst on arjun
loved the song it was lovely

part43 finally ariya are back together
yey sam remembers everything
happy for both couple

part44 loved ariya scene they were lovely also sam and shaina hospital scene
really loved the both
so both couples are getting married on the same day...nice
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haw!!!
Tina di,
ab mai jhagda karungi tumse keh deti hu!!!!
:@
pehli baat, mujhe apne list me includ karna bhul gayi...
*me cryin lakes*

aur ye kya??
itna bada annyay,
Plz di,
dont end it,
pleeease pleease!!
tumhe Arjun ki SR ki Kasam!!
awsum upd8
thnku.
*givin a solid puppy look*


aur lo ab to cmnt bhi kardiya,
nxt updt me mujhe bhulna nhi.
Or else... [:'(]

*Me Folds hands n turns away not to talk*
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
Finally everything is well..
Now waiting for the marriage..
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh bechare juno riya so gayi woh bhi arjun ki shirt mein ha ha ha sam aur juno bohot naughty hai thanks for pm keep writing amazing update ...Because too many movements aren't good b4 marriage ha ha ha well written...Arsh
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Posted: 12 years ago
ariya and sam shaina scenes were beautiful. thanks for pm and sorry for the very late comment. plz do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

hii tinaa rdng "while" aftr lotss of timee...kitnee saree updt cmplt gaye hayy yaar

i hv missd 10 chptrs ..jaha main other stories ki sirf 5 or 6 chaptr miss kiye waha yaha pe 10 missd...wo vi long updt ...cudos to u 4 gvng lots of updts..itne sare updt 1 by 1 pad rahi thi n hv a feel like watchng a movie i lvd it...bt a sad feel also its cmng to end ...

now cm 2 da updts..as i hv rd all in 1 go cnt point out all points in which chaptr i hv lvd bt... i hv remmbrd dem 4m chap 33 to 43

at 1st ariya separation is realyyy hrtng yet it ws needd 2 mk him stand her imprtnc .though he is not a bad guy yet he shld realsd his mistk

nd shaina is free ...and dat simrann uff rathor ko firse cheat karke apna kaam nikalne wali thi ...bt lvd da cncrn of rathor 4 her

us din bch house mein kuch vi nahi hua thaa ... arjun ulata sidha bolta raha usse i hv a feel of hearing a mcp

den i hv a feel dat may b riya ws in da bch house...i clickd..she ws der

our hero found her heroin...bt poor girl she lost her all...trulyy poor girl

riya s pov is nicelyy writtn...its tchng

den hero herion fc 2 fc waoo..bt heroin bhag gayy😆 hotyy on action(he desrvs)

Riya seemed dull and weak
Arjun respected Riya's decision of staying away and is going to get her back
Sam made breakfast for himself and Shaina and was lost in her beauty sooo swtt
dis coupl dfntly need a 2nd chnc..now its bgn lv dis part
den mr naughty flirty strtd playng hide n seek wid his girl 😳😆
n rathors feelng r also gtn clear..lv da scn of breakfst makng and spclyy hill wala part
arjun gtn naughty 2 naughtr😆☺️
bt gt jlss whn see her wid dat rahul😆
den his words on riya z smile waoo took my hrt too(simple yet soo tchng)
love dis possesv lad🤗
bt rathor ka accdnt😕...thnkgd his memoryy is back finalyy dey unitd lv ds momnt of sam shaina lvngg
bt arjun ne kya time chuna riya ke room mein entry lene ki😳😆 ☺️
1 qtnn 2 uu riya kitna chng(exp*se) kar chuki thi??😉😆(kya karoon meri dirty mind ka)
bt finalyy all clouds clear betwn ariya...lv dis part
den da bch house scn pahele to riya ko dress ki parithi fir arjun ko unromntc kaheke khud hi so gayy😆
bt wtngg 4 shadii
im sad its endngg...plzz gv a andr ariya like dis in a new stry plzz with sam n shaina/aysha obvslyy...plzzz pldnggg

Edited by naughtykittyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update soon tina..
or kitana wait kerwaoguiii
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Posted: 12 years ago
a big thanks for all those who have liked my updates till now:


and thanks for all those lovely comments😳
It has been a real pleasure reading all of them, and sorry for the lateness, was very busy and also ill some days 😳
And now without wasting anyone's time, here the next and last chapter😳
Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Last Chapter:

Everyone in the family was happy. There wasn't one marriage, but two marriages at the same time. Sam and Arjun were getting married on the same date with Shaina and Riya respectively.

ho dil pe dilbar ki yaro hukumat rahe

dil pe dilbar ki yaro hukumat rahe

gati hasti sada ye mahobat rahe

mere allha ki tujhpe inayat rahe

dulha dulhan ki jodi salamat rahe

There were two mandaps at the same time, and two beautiful couples getting bonded in the sacred marriage rituals. Everyone was very happy, Dadi because finally his two grandsons were getting married, that too with such nice girls like Shaina and Riya. Mr and Mrs Rawte also, because now the family will be getting more bigger. Chotu was very happy because finally he had gotten such an opportunity to eat without anyone teasing or reprimanding him. Trishna because, she had got two sister-in-laws and finally Shree because he could admire and look lovingly at Trishna.

But the happiest of all was the two couples who were getting married. They had already married legally a few days back, but they also wanted a religious wedding both for their family and themselves.

In first Mandap:

Riya and Arjun were looking lovingly at each other, with lots of smiles and blushes in between. While the wedding was progressing Arjun was getting happier and Riya was blushing even more. While going round the fire, Riya asked Arjun very silently, so that their talks wouldn't be heard by others, "Aap aise kyun muskura rahe ho?"

"Dont you know? Can you guess?" Arjun said mischieviously.

Riya was too embarrassed to even say anything at that time. But the bright red colour of her face clearly showed her feelings.

While in the second Mandap:

Rathore looked very seriously at the fire in front of him, so seriously that Shaina was scared that he was having second thoughts.

"Kya hua? Why are you so serious? Aap khush nahin ho kya?" Shaina whispered to Rathore.

Rathore was startled at Shaina's question and looked offended at her question.

"Then what's wrong?" Shaina persisted.

"Kuch bhi to nahin?" Rathore said and gave Shaina a smile.

"Kahiye nah?! Warna i'd get up!" Shaina said.

"Ok,ok. i was just thinking... ahem.. do you prefer on top or bottom?" Rathore said lost in his thoughts again.

"excuse me?!" Shaina screamed, and blushed when she saw everyone looking at her strangely.

But Rathore hadn't even realised that Shaina screamed, and continued, " Hain the Flat screen TV we bought, do you want it on the wall or on a table?" he asked.

"I dont believe it, you are getting married and thinking about your TV? Why dont you marry your TV set then!" Shaina said angrily.

"I cant nah, it wont sleep with me, it wont take care of me, and it doesn't love me," Rathore said with a big smile.

"Aap kabhi nahin sudroghe!" Shaina said. She knew Rathore had a fixation on TVs and loved watching movies and footballs and all. Guess she'd just have to accept the TV as her sauten, she thought to herself.

After a few hours

The marriage was over, and with it all the rituals. Riya and Shaina were sitting and talking with their friends, while Arjun and Rathore were with the men.

The girls were teasing the brides on their suhag raat, while on the other side, even the men were teasing the grooms on it.

The girls' side

"You girls have to take the upper hand! Otherwise your husbands would also consider himself superior to you," one friend was saying.

While another was saying, "Nahin dont listen to her, just dont panic and everything will be right!"

"And yep enjoy," another friend said. And they all fought on how these two new brides would have their suhag raat.

While on the boys's side:

"When you inside, dont forget to drink the milk," one friend said.

"And yep dont show that you are nervous, you are the husband here!" one was saying.

"Give her a red rose when entering, and yep do flatter her a lot, girls like to be complimented!" another was saying.

Like this Arjun and Rathore got several advices...

At night

The brides were in their respective rooms, and now it was the turns of Arjun and Rathore to go inside their room.

"Bhai, hopefully everything goes well," Arjun was saying.

"Dont worry, everything will be ok! Afterall i'm ACP Rathore and you ACP Arjun," Rathore said with a thumb up, and each went inside of their room.

In Arjun's room

Arjun entered his room, he was finally very happy and a bit worried since it was his first suhag raat. He snatched a red rose from a nearby bouquet and went to the veiled bride on his bed. He couldn't see his Riya's face at all under the veil, but he guessed that this was his duty to remove it. He sat on the bed, near Riya's feet and gave her the rose saying, "A rose for another rose."

tauba tumhare yeh ishare, ham toh divane hai tumhare

raj yeh kaise khol rahee ho, tum aankho se bol rahee ho

jadu aate hai tumko sare

tauba tumhare yeh ishare, ham toh divane hai tumhare

chhu lete ho tar jo dil key, tum hee batao tum se milke

janu dil koyee kyon naa hare, tauba tumhare yeh ishare...

Riya took the rose from him, but yet she didnt say anything. Arjun tried to remove the veil, but Riya moved away quickly.

"Kya hua Ri, naraz ho humsein?" Arjun asked.

He saw Riya's head moving in a negative nod.

"To phir?" Arjun asked, and again tried to lift the veil. But his Riya was quicker than her.

"Oh come on Riya, tell me what i have done! You know that i love you the most in my life. I cant stay away from you anymore. Your essence drags me towards you. If you are the sun, i'm the rays..." Arjun kept on flattering his bride. He again tried to hold onto her hands, when suddenly the hands raised and lifted the veil.

Arjun shouted with shock, "Bhabhi aap?"

"Hein dewar ji, waise humein nahin pata tha ki you loved Riya so much," Shaina said and winked at him. She was enjoying teasing Arjun, when suddenly there was several knocks on their door, and when Arjun went to open it, he found Rathore outside.


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Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago

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