OS: The much awaited Time-PG ;) Part 2 Pg 8 23/04

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

OMG!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏

Waiting 4 nxt.. 😊

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

OH MY GOD!!!!!!

SERIOUSLY guys??!!

Arjun.. Dude u'r a FAILURE!!!

And RIYA!! U'r just unobservant!!

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

seriously guys???
omg they are just unbelievable
my only reaction was
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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

that was such a hilarious OS 🤣 loved it

poor arjun riya isn't giving him any chance to get closer to her

and he has to take cold shower again and again

riya thinks he is gay 🤣🤣🤣

thanks for the pm

can't wait to read the next part

continue soon

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Priyanka

@A_Derry_Girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

I Loved this!!!

OMG first time she went to sleep, goshh Riya how could you😲🤣🤣

Second time she scolded him, and then cold shower🤣 🤣

Third time she got drunk, and phir se cold shower 🤣

Bechara Arjun🤣🤣

What Thee fourth time he went to sleep himself *facepalm*😳🤣🤣

Last part goshhh ohh Riyaa🤣🤣

Great work, cont soon * and i am back to laughter mode*😆

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Bechara Arjun..
Riya fell asleep while dancing..:p
Arjun slept while waiting for Riya and missed his SR..
Loved it..
Update next part soon..

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Shobhit18

@Shobhit18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Caution: Tina, this F.F of your's is indeed full of PARENTAL GUIDANCE!! 🤣 🤣

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MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

diii...

my gooddd...

aap itna acha likhte ho...i loved the humor in it the best!!!

i loved it!!!

bechara arjun! having cold showers..i can imagine the disappointment..aww he must have looked so cute..wow di...waiting for the next part asap!!! even though my exams are on..i coundt help but read this as i saw you wrote it..and i must say di...what nice writing!!! ahhh!!! i loved it..arjun was so caring..even though he didnt get wht he wanted..he still cared so much for her...aww..

and the last part where riya questioned him...i was like arjun gussa ho jayega..but he was quiet! riya..you are in trouble...silence is worst than getting scolded..haina di...

continue soon di..

waiting...