New Os on Rathod & Ankita : Tum hi Ho..1,2,4, 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HI GUYS , HOLA ... I M BACK WITH ONE SWEET & NAUGHTY OS.. FOR MY SWEET CHOTI SAUTAN ANKI.. AB KYA KARE CHOTI HAI TO DHYAN RAKHNA PADTA HAI NA..
AND YS THIS OS ONLY ON ANKI & HER SWEETHEART ( ACTUALLY ITS OURS ) BEHZAAD
I HPE NOW SHE IS HAPPY..
He comes home after tiring day..
His sister give him " bechara look " he ignores her , and goes to his room. he open his door & see his room , oh this room , no its not his room , its store room , no no , its mess room he thinking , and again goes to hall & seat on sofa. suddenely she come & littlery put glass of water on small table with loud bang.
" Ankita , glass tut jati to?"
She turn on her hips & give him angry glare , and mutters " Hey Durga Maa"
"Latga hai aaj guhssa hai " he says & look at his sister , who enejyning his bad state ,
" ha hogi kyu nahi? aapne karnaama to aise hi kiya hai na aaj.." his sis ans ..
" Par hua kya hai ? mai to dinbhar shoot pe tha , aur... ek minute kahi tune to mere naam se koi drama to..." Behzaad ask his little sis.
" Excuse me Bhai , dn't forgot mere aur bhi do bhai hai , jinke naam se mai drama kar sakti hue.." winks at him..
" Maa se keh kar teri shadi jald se karvani hogi , varna ham bhai yo ki khair nhi , pata nhi kab kisi ki biwi use ghar se bahar phek de " Behzzad warns his sis..
" vo baad mai karna , pehela Bengal Tieger ka saamna karo.." 😆his sister says funnily..
" ab tu to gyi , kya bol rahi thi meri wife ke bare mai.." Behzaad throw pillow on her.
" To kaha kisne tha , Love Marraige karne ke liye... vo bhi Bengal Tiegers se " and wave her hands in air like Tiegar shows his hands & nails..
Behzaad about to say somthing but he hears one loud noise. he about to runs towards his room,
while his sis tells him " ab chupa bhi nahi paaoge , puri duniya jo karnama dekh chuki hai , aur uska harjana bhugto.."
He comes to his room & sees his new brand Music system broke into small pices...
" Anki ye kaise tut gyi?"
she look at him & wickly smile at him
" maine hi tod di , i dn't like this colour "
" Anki pehele bolti to change kar leta , last month to humne li thi na.."
" whatever" Anki says & wandering at room like angry Tigress.
" Lagta hai aaj meri bali chdegi hi.." Behzaad think looking at wife.
" Anki bali dene se pehe le gunha bata dogi plz..."
Ankita yells , " gunha , ye to paap hai.." and suddenely seat on her knees & beg him in soft voice..
" Plz na mujhe bhi Jewellary shop mai jana hai , chalo na , "
Behzaad just look at her wife & thinks " ye shreni to aaj billi ban gyi... aur vo bhi itni jaldi" and thinks things are in a good state , and goes near his cupboard , takes his cloths :
"Anki mai fresh hoke aata hue tab tak ye saaf kar do... and ha acting achi hai , " and goes to wash rrom ..
After 2 hrs he come outside only towel around his waist , he looks so handsome , & hot in that avatar , his hair completes mess , his hair stick to his forehead , his skin now shining more , water droplets fall from his hair & body..
Anki seat on bed & wating for him , but when he sees him in front of her , she just lost in him.
" Ye Kitna cute & hot lag rahe hai , haye mai to mar hi jaaungi... "
" ye aur bhi gore lagte hai na " she thinks.
And sees water droplets let down from his hair & his body.
"Amm kash mai water droplets hoti , unhe kabhi nahi chodti.." Anki says & smaile at herself..
Behzaad is searching for his cell & comes near her, she stands like statue there.. his fresh Colonge made her mad.. He frustelatly ruffle his hair and water droplets fall on her face..
She forgot why she get angry on him.. She silently open her FB A/C. and sees all.
" Hey Durga Maa " , Ye bhi na , ab dekhti hue inhe..." 😡
with that she call him . within a minutes he comes there & ask her what happens..
" Kya hai ye?" She shows him one photo on FB ..
" Oh ye , aaj ke epi ke hai.."
" Vo to mai bhi dekh sakti hue , par ye to Jwewllary shop wala scene hai na , Ayesha ke saath.."
" ha to ? ye scene tha , to maine kiya" he colly ans
Anki starts to crying badly..
" Ab ise kya hua?" Behzaad thinks. and about to ask her . but Ankita yells loudly..
" Kabhi mujhe leke gaye ho Jewellary shop mai , kabhi nahi , sifr shadi ke time ring ke liye leke gye the , uska baad kabhi bolu to " Nahi Anki shoot hai , aaj nahi party hai , aaj nhi mera interview hai phuuu"
" Par Anki mai to tumhe paise deta hue na , aur tum Maa ke saath ya mere beheno ke saath to jati ho , shopping per to..." Behzaad try to tel her..
" To ... to... kabhi kaha hai Anki chalo aaj mujhe holiday hai , shop karne chalte hai par nahi , mujhe mere frnds se milna hai , t.v dekhna hai , sona hai ..." Anki complanied him..
" Ise shoping ke alva aur kuch sochta bhi nahi.." Behzaad thinks..
" Ab jaao bahar " Anki orders him & lock door on his face..
after one hour Ankita comes outside with white colour anarkali dress. she looks beautiful , she comes outside & sees Behzzad dozes off on sofa,, she angrily stomps her feets on floor & again goes to her room.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Lol... nice .. continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
superb...
lol behzaad to gya kaam se... 😆 kya class li h ankita ne...
love the way his sis was teasing him...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
so lovely and funny😆
Haye Anki bengali tigers🤣
Poor Behzaad😆
Broke his latest music system🤣
and all because that scene with Ayesha😆
Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Anks & bengal tiger...lolzz bilkul sahi mannu di. 😉 bechare behzaad..anks woh scene sunneke baad aise hi gussa ho gayi thi 😆
Cont soon,waiting to see sherni on her avtar 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
First of all ... Mannu di... Congratzzz on becoming dazzler ;-)



Diii...
Mai pagaaalll ho gayi ye padhke...
Omggg...
Kyaaa likha di aapne...
Omg omg...

Tooo goood...
Mai to DL (dreamland) me jaa chuki hu...

Pure bus me aise blushing ki n smile kia ki aas paas wale pagal samajh rahe honge...

Ooppsieee... Kya detailing hoti h aapke stories m ..i love dt.. So sooo close to reality ki mai bhul hi jati hu dt m reading a story !!

N wa..i..i..t... Wat was dt...
T..o..we...l...towel... O..n...l...yyy only to..w..e...l...
Wa...ter... Dr..opss...
*gulp*
Lemme breathe... I forgot to breathe...
Itsss tooo ...*faint*
*coming in sense*

Hayee...sautan ho to aap jaisi hi ho... Behen se badhkar sautan...

Behzyyy...
U droolably droolicious dear...


Mannu di... Cont soon...plzzz

Ye SS nai bn sakta kya... :-P :-P :-P lolzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Lolzzz Sree... Tujh se better aur kaun jaan sakta hai ki mera kya reaction tha after hearing the scen... :-P :-P :-P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
first I think the fight is all about he is not giving her time but when u mentioned jewelry shop n Ayesha than I got it n I was laughing like a idiot 😆 n everyone staring at me shocked what happens? ? 😲
I feel so embarassed 😳
but still it was really a great update
u portrays anki character best n bechara sameer 😆
plz write a sequel to it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Next dy he have Holidy , so he finally take her for shopping.. but for him is just shoo away all things from her..
They goes in jewellery shop.. Anki searches somthing , she look all things like ,
" Bhayyia vo Necklace dikhana "
" Aur vo earrings"
" Koi Diamond Ring hai ?"
" Aur ha , vo ... " before she says her husband answeres
" Bhai inke liye ek Diamond Ring dikha do "
Ankita chhoses very pricey ring for herself ,
" Ankita ye mehngi hai , aur now days this is not safe to wear heavy jewellery.." he tells her..
" Par mujhe yahi pasand hai " Ankita says
" Par tum kuch aur to dekho , " he suggest her..
" Umm nahi , i want this na baba , plz na.." She pleads him with sweet voice..
He just look at her..
" Ayesha ke liye 4 layer vala sone ka haar aur mere liye dekho..." She slowly taunts him.
He silently pays bill & goes towards Car. Ankita also follows him..
They seat in Car , but Ankita is never stop ,
" Ayesha to sirf show ke liye hai , aur mai to asali biwi hue , tabhi bhi itna kanjus..."
" Anki , my swwet heart agar tum bhul gayi ho to yaad dila du ? 6 months pehele tumne bada wala Golden ka Necklace banwaya , uske baad Anklets , aur abhi 2 months pehele tumne Diamond ke Earrings liye " Behzaad swwetly inform her..
Anki just shrugs her shoulders , " So what ???? Patni hue tumhari , tumhari kamai Garibo mai distribute karu ya apne aap per spend karu meri marzi..."
" Pata nhi iss pagal ko dekh kar mujhe hi kyu phasana tha?" Behzaad murmued under his breath..
" Vo kya hai , aap vaha shoot ke liye aaye the , baki sab to localitles the na , so , they knew abt me.." Ankita saya..
" Ha aur tumhare jane baad vaha sab ne sweets distribuite kiye honge na" Behzaad ask her in naughty way..
" ha vo... meri baajuwali Aunty to ek week sab ko sweets de rahi thi... Ankita sencerly reply... but after some seconds she understands what he meant & hit him with his hands...
" Anki stop , Anki... "
" Mujhe ghar jana hai "
" Par Ankita , abhi to tumne bola na , ki hum dinbhar..."
" Umm "
" Ok " they comes home...
Behzaad goes to watch T.V , while Ankita is in Kitchen..
Suddenely she smile herself & takes a big bag & comes to him...
" Chalo " she happily yells.
" Kaha ?"
" Sabzi lene" She chirpily inform him..
" What ?????????? Are u out of ur mind ???????? mai nahi aane wala..."
" Theek hai , mujhe kya , aaj aisa bhookhe raho " she informs him...
" Shit yaar , chalo ab , lekin Mai Market ke andar nhi aanewala , jo bhi lena hai bahar ke Vendor se lo.." he warns her..
They reach in Market..
Anki drags him to Fish Market..
" ye kitne ka hai?" she ask
" kya itna mehenga? ise to acha hamare Kolkatta mai milta hai.." she inform Vendor..
" To vaha se lona na , idhar kay ko aayi?" Vendor ask her angrily...
" To do meri ticket ke paise , aur ha vaise to mai Indigo se jati hue , par tumhari haalat dekh kar i can manage with Air India too.." she immeadtly ansewers Vendor & forwards her hand for money...
Suddenely his gaze fell on Behzaad..
" Saab aap T.V aate ho na?" he ask him ,
while Anki just " ae tum mujhse baat karo..."
Behzaad just shook his head in disbelif & help her to purchase Fish & sabzi..
" Ab chale Madam?" he ask her..
" mujhe pata nhi tha ki tum itne smart ho , kitna kuch jaante ho" she says happily..
" thx"
He is in relif ,, " chalo jaldi kaam ho gya "
" suno na ab se tum hi lekar aayo karo sabzi" she happily inform him , while he curses himself for helping her..
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Ahahahahaha...
Oh Boy...
I am seriously ROFLing...
Behzi Bhai,u r so dead...
Anki aapki band baja degi...
Aakhir Bengal Tigress se pala parha hai.
Hahahaha...
Anki... Tujhe meri taraf se shashtang dandvat pranam...
Oh god...
Koi mujhe bachao...
Manu Di,u r too good...
Ek tum hi ho jo Behzi bhai ko apne control mein rakh sakti ho.

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