[[SS: Ek khawish]] Chapter 1 updated April 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello everyone,
before I begin, I should issue a warning: I have this terrible habit of starting stories, and never finishing them. I can't help it though, I have these moments when I need to write, and when a couple intrigues me, I can't stop obsessing over them.
And so, here we are. It's almost midnight for me, and I was thinking of how I can't wait for Arjun and Sakshi's story to begin. When i first started watched Arjun, I was in LOVE (!!) with Arjun & Riya, and when Sana left the show, I was too miffed to come back. However, I couldn't stay too far away from Raute, and Sakshi's character is just too fun not to poke around with
Anyways, so here is my attempt to make their story. It's tweaked a bit, and not at all in complete accordance with the current plot, but give me that much.
I hope you like the prologue, and I hope even harder that I come back and continue this, (kidding! I promise to at least have a full chapter up by the end of the weekend)
Please leave me your thoughts, it would be really appreciated, <3

Prologue: Scroll down =)

Chapter 1

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Prologue

Careful what you wish for ~ this age-old warning was clearly too late. It was laughable really, how beautifully her biggest wish had gotten fulfilled without a lot of effort on her part. As if it had fallen in her lap, as a gift by the gods.

Gift. How many times had she pleaded her gods to have him in her life? Countless. How many times had she stolen glances at him, and felt her tummy as home to butterflies in the thousands? Uncountable. But was it really a gift, hers to keep forever?

Here she was, at the young age of 23, decked in the most beautiful wedding sari and sitting on her marriage bed while trying her hardest to contain all her emotions.

...For, there was time yet for her emotions to unravel.

Taking one deep, cleansing breath, she closed her eyes and tried to remember the very first time she'd met him. She did not, she realized, have to try hard to conjure up her first meeting with him. It seemed as if she had spent her entire life reliving all moments she'd spent with him in each of her waking moments. And if that wasn't enough, with her nights, she summoned those memories of him to become dreams at night. She was, as every lucky women must, completely encompassed with him, his thoughts, and his aura.

It was eleven years ago, when Sameer bhaiyya had brought his college friend home to visit during the holidays. It was hard for any girl to see the handsome young man of 18, and not fall in love with him right away. That's what it was for the preteen Sakshi. One glimpse of his boyish face, and she'd lost her heart.

It had become a habit after that, Sameer bhaiyya and Arjun would visit home often, as his parents lived far away. Sakshi's family had welcomed him as their own son, and Sakshi had grown up waiting for those visits, and every time Sameer bhaiyya brought Arjun home, Sakshi's love for him grew even stronger.

Although his demeanor was serious, as he was always kind to Sakshi, she had spent her teenage years realizing that each of her wish, her dreams had something to do with Arjun.

Perhaps he knew of her crush, and how she'd secretly worshipped him, but he never embarrassed her. Their relationship had evolved from him pulling her braids when she was 12, to helping her with homework as she grew older, and even helped Sameer bhaiyya ward off neighborhood boys who would try and get Sakshi's attention. And with each role he played in Sakshi's life, Arjun had been the man of her dreams.

So why then, after loving the same man for over a decade, was Sakshi's face streamed with tears, and her desire to be anywhere but the room that she was to share with her husband.

Her husband. Ha! What a joke.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heeey :)
This sounds so interesting!
The Prologue is Fantastic.
Off to an AMAZING start .
You're an excellent writer, by the way :)
Can't wait for Chapter One!
Hope you update soon :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome prologue :) loved it
looking forward to read it more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting prologue..
superb writing dear..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting
plz continue soon
can't wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really intriguing I must say!
Nicely written.. can't wait to read more.
Do pm me please!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey i just loved the concept...superb👏
Update really soon...would love to read more😃😃
Please do PM me the next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely but like you said, i know that you very rarely complete your stories, you had started one on Ariya before😆😉
Hope you do complete this however😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing concept!! Really interesting, please update soon and add me to ur pm list!

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