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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: mastmegha22

Hey nice start dear.
So mission ariya shuru.
What an update.
So shree and liza are married.
Sakshi hates ayesha.
And in this story riya is a villan?
And also plss tell me arjun ke opposite riya hain na plsss tell me its an ariya story write?
Do continue soon.
And also update your all ff.




thnx for cmmnt
is story mein villian kyun hain yeh toh baad mein bataugi
but this is only ariya n sasha no arakshi
I still can't forget riya
I will update all my work today 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: akanksha1371986

great update dr.


atlast u update.

thanks fr tht.

wht happened btwn reasha?

arjun n commissioner also notice tht somthng is wrong btwn reasha.

aisha n liza is jealous.

so saakshi is not a positive character.

precap looks intresting.

continue soon.



commisner know the reason very well
no sakshi is negative
thnx for cmmnt dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
intersting start... thanks for pm...😊
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Why Ayesha crying dr
Awesome update
Thanx4 wonderful update 4 pm me
Superb dr
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
SORRY SORRY CHAPAL, JOOTE BAAD MEIN MARNA PEHLA UPDATE PARLO:;😉

I KNOW MEIN KAM TOH JOOTHE KHAANE WALLA HI KARTI HOON ; 😆😆

SABHI KO KEHTI HOON CONTINUE SOON BUT KHUD CONTINUE LATER KARTI HOON 😆😆😆


OOK OK SO KNOW HERE IS
CHAPTER 2😊
IN SUV:
Arjun grab the driver's seat,
sakshi runs to grab the passenger seat behind the hottie😆 but due to her bad luck ayesha ran n grab the seat behind her handsome bro.


So now Sakshi has to sit behind wiith sam but she doesn't have any problem vo bhi toh hottie hain na😆

Ayesha noticed Sakshi is sitting very close to sam that makes her angry; she opens her door n step out of the SUV n move back n opens sam's side door

Ay- Sameer, aap aage bhai ke sath beth jao.
Ra- kya baat hai ayesha??
Ay- bas meine kaha na k aap age jao

But before Sameer could open his mouth to object ayesha sakshi interrupts

Sa- mein chali jaati hoon agge😉 (winked at ayesha)

Arjun n Sam could notice anger in Ayesha's eyes before that jawalamukhi phute 😆 sam got down to grab the passenger seat.

Sakshi was sitting behind sameer n ayesha was sitting behind
arjun.

Sasha were continously stealing glances of each other. In totally silence Sakshi leans forward n on the radio; the song can well able to describe sasha's feelings...

Usse hasna bhi hoga usse rona bhi hoga
Usse paana bhi hoga usse khona bhi hoga
Subha shaam tanhaai mein aahe bharega
Har dil jo pyaar karega
Har dil jo pyaar karega har dil jo pyaar karega
Usse hasna bhi hoga usse rona bhi hoga
Usse paana bhi hoga usse khona bhi hoga
Subha shaam tanhaai mein aahe bharega
Har dil jo pyaar karega
Har dil jo pyaar karega har dil jo pyaar karega
Oh palkon ke maheke ghar mein
Sapna banke palta hai
Iski paagal dhadkan pe
Zor koi kahan chalta hai
Usse jagna bhi hoga usse sona bhi hoga
Usse jeena bhi hoga zaher peena bhi hoga
Kisi ke haseen chehre pe voh to marega
Har dil jo pyaar karega
Har dil jo pyaar karega har dil jo pyaar karega
Oh deke chain kisi ko
Bechaini kyoon leta hai
Yeh aisa deewana hai jo
Ishq mein jaan bhi deta hai
Usse kehna bhi hoga chup rehna bhi hoga
Usse dard-e-judaai yahan sehna bhi hoga
Laakh jhukaaye koi voh na jhukega
Har dil jo pyaar karega
Har dil jo pyaar karega
Har dil jo pyaar karega
Har dil jo pyaar karega har dil jo pyaar karega
Oh oh oh oh oh oh
Usse hasna bhi hoga usse rona bhi hoga
Usse paana bhi hoga usse khona bhi hoga
Subha shaam tanhaai mein aahe bharega
Har dil jo pyaar karega
Har dil jo pyaar karega har dil jo pyaar karega
Ayesha's eyes were full of tears; some how she manage to control her tears.😭

Both can see pain in each other's eyes but unable to say anything to each other.

Ayesha leans back to her seat n rested her head along the seat same with sam; both were trying hard to hide their tears from arakshi.

Arjun saw tears dripping from sam's eyes n then suddenly his saw through rear mirror tears in his jaan's eyes.

His super cop mind trying to joint the links but he was confused in his mind n his heart.
Mind- May be they are in love with each other😡
Heart- no they can't do this.😊
Mind- how are u so sure???😡 both were crying; both were hiding something from me ; isn't this a sign of that they ...??
Heart- no no they can't do this. Ayesha can never do this n sam kabhi bhi apni haade nhi bhulega
Mind- pyaar karne waalo mein haade kaha se ageyi??😡
Heart was speechless.

Arjun kept his thoughts behind n again peep in the mirror seeing ayesha clossing her eyes. He can see a pain on her angelic face which has lost his beauty after yesterday. Yes,,, something must have happen but what happen??? he thoughts

Then his eyes caught something very much interesting Sakshi was glancing at him n flashinng him her 1000 volt smile😃. Arjun tries to ignore but whenever he glance in the mirror n caught her glancing over him; n for the first time he smile back to make her ignore n that really works.

He suddenly jerks the break that make sasha come back from their terrance.

Arjun gave a dead look🤢to sasha. Both utters sorry n then again saw in each other's eyes where they can see only n only pain.

Arjun steps down n move forward leaving behind sakshi n sasha.

Sasha were walking parallel to each other.

Sometimes there hands got rubbed with each other's skin that send shivers in each other's bodies.

Arakshi n Sasha enters into the factory with their guns ready.

Arjun was covering sakshi Sasha were ahead of arakshi as they have the responsibility of sakshi too on them.

But the abandoned factory was empty only they can find the broken wooden boxes. They were totally disappointed with this that they got nothing.

Ayesha n sakshi moves out leaving samrjun in the factory.

Arjun stamped the ground with his foot that he got nothing from here because somehow they have to got the link to reach the only link that is none other than ARIYA.

Sam was standing their with his hands on his hips observing his surrounding.

Suddenly his eyes caught something fishy that is totally odd. The factory was abandoned n the dust was all over the things but only a big portrait was hanging on the wall

Sameer place a hand on arjun's shoulder n arjun look at him puzzeled😕 n when he follows sam gaze both utter only one thing
Samrjun - We got her n give each other a smirk😉

Both carefully remove the painting n move out of the factory where they find Ayesha n Sakshi shooting each other angry glares.

As soon they saw painting in samrjun's hand. Ayesha understood that must be related to the case but who can stop the sakshi

Sa- yeh kya hain arjun?? (pointing to the painting)
Ar- office jakar pta chal jayega. (without looking at her)

Arjun places the painting very carefully in the back of the suv n after that they drove off to the office.

The ride to the office was totally silent no one utters a single word only radio was playing a painful song

dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se, mohabbat ho gayee hai tumse
dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se - (2)
mohabbat ho gayee hai tumse - (2)
meree jan mere dilbar, meraa aitbar karlo
jitna bekarar hu mai, khudko bekarar karlo
meree dhadkano ko samjho, tum bhee mujhse pyar karlo
dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se aa aa aa aa aa...
mohabbat ho gayee hai tumse aa aa aa aa aa...
meree jan mere dilbar, meraa aitbar karlo
jitna bekarar hu mai, khudko bekarar karlo
meree dhadkano ko samjho, tum bhee mujhse pyar karlo
aa aa aa aa aa... - (2)
dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se, mohabbat ho gayee hai tumse

(tum jo kehdo toh chand taro ko tod launga mai
inn hawao ko, inn ghatao ko mod launga mai) - (2)
kaisa manjar hai meree aankho me, kaisa ehsas hai
pas darya hai dur sehra hai, phir bhee kyu pyas hai
kadmo me jahan yeh rakhdu, mujhse aankhe char karlo
jitna bekarar hu mai, khudko bekarar karlo
meree dhadkano ko samjho, tum bhee mujhse pyar karlo
aa aa aa aa aa... - (2)
dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se, mohabbat ho gayee hai tumse
hey hey hey hey aah ha ha ha ha ha... - (2)

meree yado me mere khwabo me roj aate ho tum
iss tarah bhala meree jan mujhe kyu satate ho tum
aa ha ha aa aa ha ha ha - (2)
ho... meree yado me, mere khwabo me roj aate ho tum
iss tarah bhala meree jan mujhe kyu satate ho tum
teree baho se, teree raho se yun naa jaunga mai
yeh irada hai, meraa wada hai laut aaunga mai
duniya se tujhe churalu, thoda intjar karlo
jitna bekarar hu mai, khudko bekarar karlo
meree dhadkano ko samjho, (tum bhee mujhse pyar karlo -3)

kaise aankhe char karlu, kaise aitbar karlu
apnee dhadkano ko kaise, itna bekarar karlu
kaise tujhko dil mai dedu, kaise tujhse pyar karlu

dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se - (2)
mohabbat ho gayee hai tumse - (2)
meree jan mere dilbar, meraa aitbar karlo
jitna bekarar hu mai, khudko bekarar karlo
meree dhadkano ko samjho, (tum bhee mujhse pyar karlo -2)
SAM was staring at ayesha but she was ignoring him totally but this doesn't getunnotice by arjun.IN ETF OFFICE:Arjun n sam place the painting carefully on the Conf. table.Everyone is looking enquirly towards their seniors. Sh- sir yeh??Ra- shree, liza is painting ko examine karo dekho koi fingerprints milte hain kya ??Both - yes sirAfter examing it Both- no sir, es par koi fingerprints nhi hain lekin ek cheez hain bahut interesting.Samrjun- aur vo kya??Liza- sir yeh baal ka sample mmila hainSamrrjun- matlab??Shree- matlab yeh k yeh painting kissi larki ne lagai hain waha par Arjun- Shree is painting ko palto kuch na kuch toh jaroor milegaShree turns over the painting n they start removing the board from its behind.Now they were 110% sure there is really something inside hidden behind it. They found one Memory card n a letter with coded words.ASR dundte dundte thak mat jaana;aap paas hoon tumhare;kaha hain nna tumse k shak mat karna kabhi,aurat ki kabhiliyat par;bas esse samjho aur sambhalo khud ko,ja sanam tere sath meri jaan hain mere jaan, mein karogi tera intezaar😊
after reading this arjun got confused who is she???Arjun hands over the memory card to shree to look over it. Shree connects it with his Lappy n there he find some pictures. Sh- sir, yeh pic hain😕 bas aur kuch nhiAr- vehi hamara sab kuch hain; unhe display board par play karo.Shree displays all the pic.

AFTER DISPLAYING THE PIC ONE MESSAGE COME:YEHI HAI HAMARI MANZIL; INTEZZAR HAIN TUMHARA; SAMJHE YA SAMJHAYUN??
Everyone look enquirly towards the arjun who was also confused what is all this??

PRECAP: IS ARJUN ABLE TO UNDERSTAND THE MESSAGE??😕IS THEIR IS ANY WAY ARIYA WILL MEET EACH OTHER??😊😉; REASON BEHIND SASHA, ARJUN'S REACTION😕 TO THEM??
ohho gussa maat karo yaaar,,,, kya karo aap sab ki tarha etni intelligent nhi hoon tohbas time paas karne ke liye likhe hain.Agar jhoote chapaals most welcome agar kuch aur bhi hain😆😆Plz plz coment n like kar dena aap log upset maat karna plz plz
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Edited by ...amanvirdi... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
great update :) loved it
aisha was angry when sakshi was siting next to sameer 😆
car scenes were lovely
felt bad seeing aisha and sam like that :(
songs were perfect for the situation
coded message was interesting
precap seem interesting
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Superb and dhasu update.
The songs u used are my favr8...
Lovely...
Both the songs expressed Raesha ke emotions...
Kuch toh chut raha hai...
The riddle was amazing...
Precap seems interesting...
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: zebbie

Superb and dhasu update.
The songs u used are my favr8...
Lovely...
Both the songs expressed Raesha ke emotions...
Kuch toh chut raha hai...
The riddle was amazing...
Precap seems interesting...
Please continue soon.



Thnx di for liking n cmmnt

i will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: fatima15

great update :) loved it

aisha was angry when sakshi was siting next to sameer 😆
car scenes were lovely
felt bad seeing aisha and sam like that :(
songs were perfect for the situation
coded message was interesting
precap seem interesting
thanks for the pm
continue soon


thnku thnku

i eagerly wait for ur commnt at my each update😊

i will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
nice song
aisha jal gai kya?😆

thanks for pm
lovely

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