Arjun SS: His one and only, Chap8 Pg 37, 19/12 PM Later

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

oopsss someone showing the rathore sir as corrupt police officers omg ... too short but interesting very interesting

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Renumehra

@Renumehra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

i think rathod has been kidnapped... n someone is trying to trap him in wrong things...
nice update...

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

awesome...

saakshi using arjun's pc...

rathod in danger ...

update soon

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

amazing update :) loved it

love how confidently she was using Arjun's computer

and love the way she was replying him

wow arjun was actually impressed with her work

aisha called rathore sam

omg rathore is missing :(

precap seems interesting

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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bollywoodfan16

@bollywoodfan16

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Amazing update...loving the story of arakshi...hey don't end this early..there are very few writers who write on arakshi...luv reading their stories...keep on updating...i love ur sakshi...intelligent and yet mysterious...i will love to read how you would unfold sakshi slowly slowly in front of arjun...update soon

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NeethuEli

@NeethuEli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Lovely update.😊

Will comment fully when I get back!

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ehmmbh_luvr

@ehmmbh_luvr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Amazing update...I'm really really liking the story!

its really gripping 😊

I loved the way sakshi managed to irritate arjun...no but what she did was superb...i mean where else does he expect her to work when he himself broke off her pc😛

Finally,akdu rawte realises that there is much more to miss sakshi anand than what he thought...m glad he realised how dedicated she is towards her work!😊

Okay rathod missing😲...now this sure is a matter of worry!

But seriously by doing this u've come up with a wonderful n very unique plot...!

Continue soon...will be waiting to read more of it!

Thanks a ton for the PM😃

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

hi tina🤗...awesome update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏,...sorry i dont know when u updated chapter 2...😳...but i read the bth the parts together...it was awesome... well arjun cared for sakshi ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,😉😉😉😉😉... n the trio hug to sakshi😆😆😆😆😆😆...someone is impressed withsomeone's work😉😉😉😉😉😉... n sam is in danger...hope he is safe...n what about the transactions in rathore's account...update soon

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

No, Tina, don't cut it short. In fact I think you are just warming up, and your Arjun and Sakshi are like Rhett Butler and Scarlett O'Hara in Gone with the Wind. They will need some time and some tough situations faced together to get out of this syndrome, and you, and your readers, both have to give them that time.

I was pleased to see that Sakshi is such an effortlessly competent professional, and also that being a very good professional himself, Arjun is forced to acknowledge her competence. It is a good beginning for such an MCP to have to admire a woman's iintelligence and her good work.

You are now moving into the heart of a mystery, with betrayal lurking in the wings. Go for it! Do this one the way you want to, and do not try doing it by committee, so to speak.

Shyamala Aunty

Chapter 3