OS:Meri Duniya *HOLD*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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To all readers,
This is entirely a story written on Rathod and Ayesha and their cute princess,Raesha Sameer Rathod.
So,no Ariya,Shriza over her here.
But,willl definitely write on the same topic on Ariya and Shriza.

Story in the next post.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1...

Ayesha and Sameer had been married for 2 years.They are a happy couple.
An inspiration to all the newly wed couples.

It was their 3rd wedding anniversary,the next day.Ayesha had planned out a surprise party for her better half.She had a surprise gift ready for him.
She thought that,after she wishes him tonight,at,12.01am,she will present him with the gift.

That moment came.
Sameer and Ayesha wished each other.Sameer gifted her favorite coloured saree.As she saw it,she was so happy,that she hugged him tightly.
Ayesha: Thank you so much,Sam.Aap keliye bhi mere paas ek gift hai.Wait...
Before Ayesha could bring his gift,Sameer spoke up.
Sameer: Ayeshu,i am really sorry,sweetheart.Main abhi bohut thak chuka hu.Kal subha baat karenge,thik hai.Kal office mein kuch zaruri kaam hai,Jaldi se so jao,warna late hojayega.
Ayesha: Par Sam...Meri baat toh suniye...
Before she could tell him,she saw her husband slumped on the bed and drifted off to sleep.
Ayesha felt really bad.Tears came out of her eyes.
Ayesha(with tears in her eyes): Pichle dono anniversaries mein bhi aisa hi hua thha.But,i thought,aap yeh gift dekh ke bohut khush hojayenge.Par,aisa hua nahi.
She wiped her tears and towards his side.She saw that his shoes were still on his feet.She carefully opened them and kept them aside.She covered him with the soft blanket and dimmed the lights of their room.
Ayesha came out of their room and went to the kitchen.She made a cup of coffee for herself and went towards the balcony.As she was sipping her coffee,she saw a couple in her apartment's garden area.The lady,who was a pregnant woman,was strolling in the night on the garden.The husband of that lady,held his wife carefully,and helped her to walk.
This sight made her cry and she smiled faintly at them.How she wished to walk with her Sam in the garden,in that state.
Unknowingly,her palms caressed her tummy.A lone tear drop fell from her eyes.
Ayesha quickly wiped her tears,and,spoke to her unborn baby.
Ayesha: Baby,aap kabhi bhi apne Papa se nraz mat hona.Aapke Papa ek police officer hai.Kaam ko leke bohut hi strict rehte hai,aur,kafi busy bhi.Aapke Papa aapse bohut pyaar karenge,jab aap iss duniya mein aaogi.Papa loves you a lot,and,Mumma,too.
Kal main aapke Papa ko bataungi ki,aap N mahine baad,humare zindagi mein aane wali ho.Papa ko bohut bara surprise denge,thik hai,Ab aap jaldi so jaiye.Mumma ko bhi sona hai,Kal Papa ke saath office jana hai,isiliye.
With that,she finished her coffee and went to sleep in her room.
Edited by zebbie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great start :) loved it
looking forward to read it
thanks for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Aww
heart touching start
thanx fr d pm dear
gud title..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Hey. Nice. Update jaldi. Waiting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oooww.w...that was suh an awsum start... i loved the concept...
ooww...poor ayesha...😭😭 koi baat nai...
aal is well...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one. Really liked the way aesha was talking to baby.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept..
I just loved it..
Its the raisha os m reading..
Thank u fr tht..
N rathod..damn it..
Aisha kitna khus thi..
So gaya..soyabin kahi ka...


N di pls aap apna os update karo na jo aap ne kiya tha abt her memories in shree's pov..
I want tht in arjun's pov..
Pls di ...


N this is fantastic..
M waiting..how aisha wll tell him..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start. Please continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww... cute os...
awsum start...
wow aisha pregnant cool...
continue soon...

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