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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Couldn't he do some Akshay Kumar wala moves, catching the bullets in his hand and making a bomb out of it? Psshtt... sirf naam ka ACP! 😆😆😆😆

Tahi I thought this could be done only by our world famous "Rajnikant Sir".Didn't knew about Akshay doing this Alien like stuff.Koi nai Tahi ne kaha hai to hoga hi.
😉But that was too gud& i enjoyed it to the fullest.😊Started with a band & ending it with a bang.⭐️Thanks for the PM😊

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Finally..here it comes after such a long time,
And wait..
*rubbing my eyes*
did I see it right??
Last chapter..
abhi abhi toh kahani ki suruwat hui thi...aur khatam v!!
Anyways,
Arjun sleeping beside Shakshi:p
..issi ka toh intezaar tha..
Shakshi's too stubborn..
And both Arjun and Shakshi in Rathod's safe house like *hum do ek house mai band aur raasta kho jaaye:p*
Shree ne bahot protection diya hai dono ko..
Wokay..jokes apart
It's well written..
Actually tooo good..
gonna read next part now..

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Arjun hurt himself...
are you in your right mind??
Thanks to Shakshi's sob..he stopped
Arjun take care of Shakshi and yourself too...
It was awesome..
Loved it..

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Awesome blossom, Missy!!

I've been waiting for this one for eternity now.. And la! Double treat..

Aww.. That was soo sweet and crazily insane!! Gosh woman.. You've made me fall for Sakshi Anand!! 😉😛

Oh well Arjun Ji.. He was soo in character! Khadoos, Hotwa and yet the loveable man he is!

Loved their interactions to bits as always.. What next? Confession time maybe? 😉😳

Do write more soon.. And no.. I'm not going to bug u for quicker updates coz my behna, you're one hell of a crazy terrific writer.. Do take your own sweet time.. (P.S.: Not really..) 😉😆

Thanks for the PM! 😉

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

superb update dear..

wow...

that was bang on..

the way he reacted was by God... maniac...

loved the love they share and her tit for tat jawab

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likitha

@Arakshi_Lover

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

haye main marr java! man u will be jailed soon yaarr...🤣 from where did u get this gift of writing man!

Edited by likithakmh - 12 years ago

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

wow that was a cutely romantic and surely emotional 😉

no wonder how much in pain saakshi is

😭

arjun really needs to get it all right😕

i actually choked when arjun hurt himself...🤢

omg punishment baadmein pehla confess yor feelings😳

god they make a cute couple

😆

loved saakshi's hug to stop arjun fron hurting himself

wow

all in all perfect 👏

will be waiting for the next part

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Ketakee

@Ketakee

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Arjun - Sakshi so cute together... Blings

Sakshi is funny...

dropping idea of being stubborn...🤣

for update

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Pisces_Gurl

@Pisces_Gurl

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Wow...great update...reallly heart touching...Love all their scenes...Arjun hurt himself..he is really insanity..but stillk m looovvvee wd himlolz..
Update sooon n thnx fr pm...